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Ben and his father got off the plane and left the airport. That time, they came back after a trip to Hawaii. Ben was very delighted with their trip because he had been dreaming to go to there for a lot of time. When Ben and his father came back home, Ben ran to the kitchen and saw his mom was doing the washing up. After that, Ben said:" Hi mom! We came back." and started talk about his trip. Ben had been told that his and his dad had a wonderful experience in Hawaii. He said that: "The hotel we stayed is look so fancy and the service was great". Ben told his mother a lot of things about his trip. His mom just smiled. They continued the story about the trip in their lunch. He also showed some pictures and his family liked it very much. Shortly after their lunch,  Ben and his father was go to bed and took a long sleep after a amazing trip also a tired too.

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Write YES or NO:
Structure & Language

1. The story begins with the given sentence

2. The story has exposition, action and resolution

3. The writer has used past tenses.

4. The writer has used connecting words and phrases.

5. The writer has used imagery

Answer the questions
6. Do you have any other comments?
7. Do you prefer this story? Why (not)?

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Write YES or NO:
Structure & Language

1. The story begins with the given sentence

2. The story has exposition, action and resolution

3. The writer has used past tenses.

4. The writer has used connecting words and phrases.

5. The writer has used imagery

Answer the questions
6. Do you have any other comments?
7. Do you prefer this story? Why (not)?

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My friend, Ben has told me his story on my summer vacation. They wanted to visit his grandparents in New York, so they decided to travel by plane. On Saturday, Ben and his father got off the place and left the airport by a taxi. The weather was wonderful there. They were so excited and enjoyed their vacation with his grandparents. After listened to Ben talk about his trip, I felt very good and wanted to try New York.

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Post your writing like this(timing: 15')

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1. Name:

2. The first sentence I choose:

3. My story based on that sentence:

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Write YES or NO:
Structure & Language

1. The story begins with the given sentence

2. The story has exposition, action and resolution

3. The writer has used past tenses.

4. The writer has used connecting words and phrases.

5. The writer has used imagery

Answer the questions
6. Do you have any other comments?
7. Do you prefer this story? Why (not)?

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1. It's so cold today, I can't feel anything warm because the sun is disappear and I will be freeze if I don't wear something warm.
2. It's so lonely in my class today that I can't hear any voice in my class.

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1. It's so cold today. I can't leave my bed because outside is freezing right now. I need to find some warm clothes to save my life.
2. There are not many students at school today. Because of covid, so everyone is afraid of positive. I feel so lonely now

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1. It's so cold today, my body is being possessed by the cold, I feel so cold, it would be better to sit in the room and hug the pillow to sleep
2. It's lonely when only a few people go to school, I'm used to this situation