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The person that i admire the most is my mom and my dad , i admire her because she has patience and stay with me in the bad and the good times , and i admire mi dad because he has to see and stay  in the cellphone because he are in another country and he continues loves me despite of this .

Dear, you wrote a beutiful description; however, you did not make use of PRESENT PERFECT.

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The person that i admire most  is my dad because he always geds ahead regardless the circunstances, he has also taught me to move forward no matter what happen and since he was little he has fought and continous fought for his family that is why i admire him.

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The person that i admire most  is my brother because he is always happy and makes me laugh, he  has liked to ride a bicycle and play soccer with me he has always wants been like me and he has always supported me when i need.

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The person that I admire the most is my mom and dad, because they were in a poor situation and now they are living and giving me a good life, they didn´t have too much money, but now we live a good life, I have listened their stories and are horrible, because they were very poor, I haven´t had the resilience that they have yet, but in some years I´d like to have it.

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The people who I admire the most (Is a band), are Atarashi Gakkou, they're a Japanese band, also they're kind of underrated but I still... They started their career very young and they're very passionate for it. The group is composed by four members, each member is very passionate about their very fun career.

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The person I admire the most is my brother because he is someone who has achieved his goals, teaches and corrects me, he is kind, intelligent and respectful. He loves games and anime, I would like to be like him when I grows up.

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I admired most Messi because he do a lot of things to be the best football player of all the times.

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The person I admire the most is Nicky Jam because despite all the difficulties he has had in his life, he has been able to get ahead and it is something that I admire a lot.

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I admire my family because they are the best people in the world, also i admire J.K Rowling because im so gratefull she created the best books and how she created them, i think it was so difficult to her so that was the reason. <3

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The persons I admire most are my parents beacause they have taught me all the things a know and create a very beutiful thing that is a family and for my we need a lot of effort to create all of that.

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The person who I admire the most is my mom, she has been my mom and my dad for almost 11 years, she has visited many countries also she has never lost her sense of humor despite of the situations.

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I have a lot of person that i admire the most they are my family, thay are the brave people in my life i love them they are the best they stay always with me ,they support me, they are the my best friends

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The person that I admire most is my sister because she has been studying for a lot of time her career that is psicologia, she really likes what she does.

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The person who I admire the most is my dad because he is a very figter person, he has done many important things in his life, he has taught me most of the things that I know, he makes me very happy and I appreciate that he is with me always

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the person that i admire most is is Cristiano Ronaldo because he show me to be responsible and do the best for me in my work and other persons are my mother and father because the show me the importance of the family and they teach to be responsible

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the person that i admire most its shakira because i think that she has  sing  very beautifull  i love how she sing and all of she s  songs i admire shakira because she has been a very talented and good person

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The person that I admire most is my sister because she is so intelligent, she was able to graduate from ones of the best universities of Bogotá, she was able to go on an exchange to Europe, her degree thesis was the best of the students and they published it in a very important electrical engineering magazine, of course is the best sister in the world, and for all that and much more I feel very proud of her.

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The person that I admire most is my dad because he has taught, we have played together and we have practically the same person because we have the same preferences and physically we are the same

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The person I admire the most is my dad and my mother because they have work all the days to give me all good things and I like that they have a very ideal work to maintain a very good economic situations and I admire too Falcao because is my favourite footballplayer and its a warrior because he has to pass to very difficult situations to be a footballplayer.

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The person I admire most is my mom because it is the one that corrects me in what I do wrong and supports me in everything and cristiano ronaldo because is my favorite soccer player and is one of the best around the world.

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The person that I admire most is Freddie Mercury because he has able to bear all the problems he has and he do all posible to fulfill he dreams  and other thing that I admire of he is that he has so honest in all the moments he pass

Dear, you wrote an interesting description; however, you did not make use of PRESENT PERFECT. Please correct the words that are in color green.

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the person I most admire is my cousin because she is a kind person, special, understanding and has a very correct way of thinking as she also gives me many tips that serve for life.

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The people that i most admire is BTS, they have taught me what self-love is through their songs, they have been a source of admiration because they teach topics that we need in our daily lives.

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The person that I admire the most is Jaime Garzon who was not afraid of politicians and told the truth about Colombia and confront them and what I like the most is that he did want Colombia and wanted their peace.

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The person that I admire most is Aidan Gallgher, because he has an intention which is to save the world from pollution and the right for the animals, the environment etc... I also admire him because he has an intention which is to save the world from pollution and the right for the animals, the environment etc...

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The person I admire the most is my uncle because he is a health worker and is exposed to covid every day and I also admire him since he had covid and I overcome it without many complications

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the person That i admirarte most is leo Messi because he have played  all his  live in the fc Barcelona and he  demostraste the loyalty and the loved that he has for the club

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The person I admire is my dad, since in this situation with the virus he has tried to give us his best so that we do not lack anything, and he has also worked hard for school and other things.

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The person that i admire most is my mom because despite being alone she could take care of me in the good times as in bad times and was able to get ahead.

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The person that i admire the most is my mom,she is like a superhero for me.She os Simeone Who has archieved his goals.She studied a lot for doing what she likes now does what she loves most about being a nurse

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The person I admire the most is my mother and my father for their work, my mother is a nurse, likes her job and worries because she doesn't want to quit yet and my father, who is a policeman and has already been in many dangerous cases, but loves his job. and they don't want to leave him yet

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The person (people) that
(who) i (I) admire most is my favourite band Fall Out Boy because, i (I) love they (their) music in english and i (I)  learned some words of they (their) songs.
In this text I did not see the use of present perfect, also you have mistakes about the use of possessive pronouns, and the use of capital letters.

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correction of eilin aguilar                               i think that the text of eilin its really good she use the present perfect and his structure of has or have and put the verbs in past participle but a mistake that she do is that she dont put in capital letter i (I) and this is the only mistake the rest its with good ortography and a good structure 

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correction of eilin aguilar                               i think that the text of eilin its really good she use the present perfect and his structure of has or have and put the verbs in past participle but a mistake that she do is that she dont put in capital letter i (I) and this is the only mistake the rest its with good ortography and a good structure 

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I think that the text of paula its really good because she use have/has, the verb in participle, capital letter and use a good structure  for me is good all only that she dont put the photo.

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All is perfect and he use very good the present perfect

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In

likes her job you have to put she before likes.
Also you have to put he in  has already been in many.

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It is very good but you missed to use the present perfect but in general the capital puntuation mark and the wording are good but also you miss the "s" after the verb

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I think that you should put the i in capital letter : "I". this is yout only mistake, the other is ok.

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Correction of 13. Guzman Morales Esteban

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Correction of 13. Guzman Morales Esteban

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You should put the i in capital letter : "I". Also before the because I think you have to put a comma, also I think you can add more information, and use the present perfect.

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You must capitalize the initial and the "i", put the "s" at the end of each verb. When you say "they" put the "y" at the end, put the "me" when necessary and use the present perfect and the passive voice more.

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Corrections of 22. Nuñez Reina Juan Andrés

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Corrections of 22. Nuñez Reina Juan Andrés

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You must capitalize the initial and the "i", put the "s" at the end of each verb. When you say "they" put the "y" at the end, put the "me" when is necessary, use the present perfect and the passive voice more and put final periods and commas.

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Everything is fine, you used the present perfect and you used good the punctuation marks

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I think the text is well but you have to put the final point, in the part ´´is a very figter person´´ it is fighter and i think the rest is very well.

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When you say "every day and i also"
i think that instead of "and" you could use a comma, the other are fine.

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''but now we live a good life'' it could be better ´´we have a better live now´´

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You should put commas: "Play soccer with me,".Also before de because you need to put a comma,also put capital letters:"I". also you can add more information

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I think that in the first part it would be "I have a lot of people that I admire" because you are talking about several not in the singular, I also think that you should make good use of commas.

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"The person i admire the most" "he always gets"

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In general its very good but you failed the score at the end and in the part that says "we have practically the same person" change the have to are and you missed the present perfect in some cases.

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The person I admire the most is my mother since she is a woman who despite all the mistakes I make tries to solve them, she is a warrior woman and is an example to follow since she is the only one who raises us well my grandparents and my uncle are the support of us and although we have thousands of problems she is the light and the joy of my family

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The person I admire the most is my mother since she is a woman who despite all the mistakes I make tries to solve them, she is a warrior woman and is an example to follow since she is the only one who raises us well my grandparents and my uncle are the support of us and although we have thousands of problems she is the light and the joy of my family.

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The person (people) that
i  (I) admirarte (admire) most is leo Messi because he have played  all his  live in the fc Barcelona and he  demostraste  (showed) the loyalty and the loved that he has for the club

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The person that i admire most is my favourite band Fall Out Boy because, i love they music in english and i have learned some words of they songs. This band is compossed by the drummer that it is called Andrew Hurley, their singer is Patrick Stump and the other two integrants are young, all time they use black clothes.
Also they have had a lot of music videos that are good song too.
One of they uses hat and glasses and he is the shortest and the other three have beard.

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the people that I admire most is my mom and my father, because they always are working so hard to pay my school, the university of my sister and the taxes of the house.

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the person that i admired most is leo messi becase he has played very good every match he has effort to do the best so that is why i admired most leo messi