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First thing you need to do is log in to your g.highlineschools.org account so that you can leave critique for your classmates and receive credit for this portion of the project!

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Give the Photographer Feedback on their Project!

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Give the Photographer Feedback on their Project!

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Try to give feedback that points out something they did well and something they could do differently to make their work stronger next time!

Use sentence stems like:
"I really like how you used..."
"Your images really make me feel..."
"I can easily see the story in your images because..."

and

"I wonder if..."
"What if you tried..."
"I think it would be stronger if you..."

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Leave Critique for at least 5 classmates!

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Leave Critique for at least 5 classmates!

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Every student should receive no less than 3 comments on their work from different students. Try to go to as many student's websites as possible and give feedback to everyone!

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I like the strong message in your photos that couple with what you said.

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I liked the filter you put on some of the images it really makes them stand out.

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I liked the filter you put on some of the images it really makes them stand out.

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Your 5 images were good.

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I like how you used the flag and words but you can use a different angle or a background that match your message to make you pictures stronger 

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I like how you used the flag and words but you can use a different angle or a background that match your message to make you pictures stronger 

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i like how u take the picture from the side  

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i like how u take the picture from the side  

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Your photos are strong, the connection of what you're portraying is so good like the one of the shadow with a child in a corner, the lighting to make a shadow and the darkness covering the kid. 

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Your photos are strong, the connection of what you're portraying is so good like the one of the shadow with a child in a corner, the lighting to make a shadow and the darkness covering the kid. 

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i like how long your website was and how many photos there were

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i like how long your website was and how many photos there were

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WOW! your 5 best pictures were mind blowing.

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WOW! your 5 best pictures were mind blowing.

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I like the zoomed photo of the water bottle

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I like how you use a paper and wrote help. I like the emotions you show in the images. I like the shadow of the image two. The poses are amazing.

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I like how you edit your picture and how you use that image and make it related to your project. Nice job:)

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I like how you edit your picture and how you use that image and make it related to your project. Nice job:)

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Your images are really good and strong, they show so much emotion with the colors and poses

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Your images are really good and strong, they show so much emotion with the colors and poses

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I really liked how you put captions on your photos, I think that your message showed good in your images.

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I really liked how you put captions on your photos, I think that your message showed good in your images.

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I like the idea of your series.

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I appreciate the vocalization of the gesture of putting your hand around your neck, this is a serious topic.

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The pictures are dark but good, showcases the ugliness of body shaming and the effects it can cause like the tape measure around the neck.

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The pictures are dark but good, showcases the ugliness of body shaming and the effects it can cause like the tape measure around the neck.

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I like how you screenshot the text and how you edit your picture with a text that explain what happened in the picture. good job:)

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I like how you screenshot the text and how you edit your picture with a text that explain what happened in the picture. good job:)

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I like how the vibe your images give relates to your project.

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I like how the vibe your images give relates to your project.

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All your images have a important message behind abuse and you showed how it can affect kids into being scared/ traumatized 

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All your images have a important message behind abuse and you showed how it can affect kids into being scared/ traumatized 

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I liked the way you used colors to sort of show emotions

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I liked the way you used colors to sort of show emotions

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I really liked how you used the dead roses.  

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I really liked how you used the dead roses.  

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I like how you used the rule of thirds in your photos, with text to explain what it feels/ looks like.

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I like how you used the rule of thirds in your photos, with text to explain what it feels/ looks like.

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your artist statement is really strong and I really like your idea of the picture but you can edit more your picture by adding more light and make it a little bit more clear. but great Job:)

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your artist statement is really strong and I really like your idea of the picture but you can edit more your picture by adding more light and make it a little bit more clear. but great Job:)

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I really liked the lighting of your photos, you did good  at showing emotion.

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I really liked the lighting of your photos, you did good  at showing emotion.

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The way you used quotes and inserted them into your photos  shows a stong message

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The way you used quotes and inserted them into your photos  shows a stong message

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i like how you blurred the photos and made them black and white.

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i like how you blurred the photos and made them black and white.

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I loved the way you used the measuring tape in your pictures and how you work those neg. comments 

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I loved the way you used the measuring tape in your pictures and how you work those neg. comments 

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The photo that popped to me the most was the one with the hand pose with the pills which gives the audience a clear meaning of the problem of using drugs

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The photo that popped to me the most was the one with the hand pose with the pills which gives the audience a clear meaning of the problem of using drugs

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I liked the message you showed in your images.

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I liked the message you showed in your images.

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I like the your Idea project and how you give them the idea of what they should do because a lot of people struggle with this and don't like how they look. nice job:)

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I like the your Idea project and how you give them the idea of what they should do because a lot of people struggle with this and don't like how they look. nice job:)

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I liked how the lighting changed, it made the feel of the picture darker. The one with hand on the head looks strong to me because of how you can see emotion on the face.

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I liked how the lighting changed, it made the feel of the picture darker. The one with hand on the head looks strong to me because of how you can see emotion on the face.

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I really liked the way you used props and the message in your images is very strong.

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I really liked the way you used props and the message in your images is very strong.

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i like your ideas

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I like how your quotes match you pictures

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I like how your quotes match you pictures

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I think your images are really strong and the black&white filter really brings emotion.

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I think your images are really strong and the black&white filter really brings emotion.

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i like what you did with the images showing how bad littering is

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I like how you used words in your images to express your message 

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I like how you used words in your images to express your message 

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your artist statement gave me chills it was good

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your artist statement gave me chills it was good

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I liked how you used the same quote on each photo, the quote fits in each with how its in black and white with like one strong object/ thing in the picture

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I liked how you used the same quote on each photo, the quote fits in each with how its in black and white with like one strong object/ thing in the picture

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I like how you put your picture is exactly related to the mood broad and how you put the text in the picture. 

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I like how you put your picture is exactly related to the mood broad and how you put the text in the picture. 

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I like how you used text to explain what the subject is feeling

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I like how you used text to explain what the subject is feeling

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I like your actions you have very good thoughts with the images

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I think you had a really strong message, you could make your images stronger by making them more focused.

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I think you had a really strong message, you could make your images stronger by making them more focused.

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you're message is strong and the different angles are beautiful

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you're message is strong and the different angles are beautiful

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I like how you zoom in "this is not a phase". I like the lighting on your images.

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I like how you use a teddy bear. I love the lighting of the image of the first image. I like your captions. I like how you use stuff animals. I like the how the fourth image some part is blurry.

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Your message is strong. It show a lot different emotions. I like how you add shadow in your third image.

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like how you add picture and words. I like message is strong. I like how you add captions. Your pictures are clear and easy to see.

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I like how you have included an explanation with each of your images stating why it is important and what value it has for your topic. I would say you could improve your work by making the images a bit more specific, because they have a bit of a wide range for what you stated your topic was. Maybe try to take photos that cater more to your project. 

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I like how you have included an explanation with each of your images stating why it is important and what value it has for your topic. I would say you could improve your work by making the images a bit more specific, because they have a bit of a wide range for what you stated your topic was. Maybe try to take photos that cater more to your project. 