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I really liked the use of color. but it could use some more information and facts.

From: Jasleen and Jasnoor

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Hi Tammy and Kaely, I really like the bright colours you've used and the nice pictures! I suggest that you should talk more about the food you can donate. Other than that, I really like the amount of information you've added!

- Caren :)

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Hello Blair and Aarshia! Well done on this amazing slideshow you guys put together and this is very persuasive too. But adding images would of been a nice touch not only that but you should of added more detail but really there is nothing bad to say about this because you did an awesome job keep up the good work you two.

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Hi Meera and Ellaina, your design is vibrant and includes a nicely blended gradient, well done! In order to improve your poster, you could change the text colour to a darker tone in order to make it bolder and visually clear to read. I love how you utilise emotional language to convey to the audience. In order to improve your writing provide more detail about the event you could identify the date, stage number and items included. The image you have showcased is appealing and utilises salience making drawing attention. Next time, you could apply more information using language devices such as puns, hooks, firing starts, quotes or statistics.

-Feedback from Lara D and Muhammad

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Hello there, Lynette, Jaslyn, and Sanvi. I love how you utilized a distinctive color and emojis to make your writing stand out, and I also like how you used different sorts of terms and punctuated your speech properly. I hope you could strive to write more or read it out loud while verifying the punctuation and add more decoration and images, but either for those two reasons, we think you guys did an excellent job.
- Shrey Sesinando and Kevin :)

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Tammy & Kaely! The first thing that we noticed was that we were instantly attracted  to your colourful poster. I love how you used images to make the poster more interesting. I wonder if maybe you could maybe shorten and maybe summarise some of your sentences as I found it hard to read. I love the way you placed your information on your poster, I wonder if maybe next time you could change the font, as some parts are coloured and some are uncoloured. Overall I loved your creative and interesting poster and I think you have inspired me to donate to more charity's and foundations! Great Job!!
Joshitasree amarabadi

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Well done Dylan and Noah, the poster you have created is simple yet effective as it gets to the point. Next time maybe you could add a different colours to make it stand out even more. The picture you added was also a great idea. Make sure you read over what you wrote so that it makes a little more sense. Other than that the message gets across through the simple language, well done!

From Noopur and Vansh

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Hi Likitha, Lona and Charlize! your poster is very cute and the text as well as the font stands out well. It's also straight to the point which is great, we would love to see more details on what exactly the appeal is. For example, what are you donating and how will it help our community? Maybe also adding your names so we know who made the poster. Add a bit more decoration into the poster, so it's more attractive when looked at. Overall, your poster is great and I hope you take this feedback creatively so you can use it when making others things. Lovely work you three. :) — Mehwish, Naomi and Liam

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hi tammy and kaely! the first thing we noticed was the beautiful colour and the photos we think you did and amazing job. the only you need to work is the sentence and make sure you read what your write because i doesn't make sense. from Mikayla and Peyton.

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the background captures the sight of audiences and makes the words really clear.
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i like the cake picture because it fits the colours and makes it more non complex
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Hi Jasyln,Lynette and saanvi! your poster is very creative and we like the use of images! The colours you have used contrast with each other and make it stand out. Maybe next time you could add a bit more. For example you can add more detail like what more exactly can we donate to help? and maybe when we need to hand in out items. Overall the colours use make it stand out and the images give a clear visual of what exactly your brining in! amazing job.
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Pippa,Tiarna,Matthew

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Hello Liam and Aidan! Your slideshow is super appealing and cute. The colours pop and the fonts are easy to read. You guys have short simple sentences that are straight to the point. We like the source of images used to show and present what you guys are showcasing. We wish that you proofread your slides so that others can understand and read properly. Overall you guys did an amazing job!

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Hey guys,
So our majority of our group have adored your poster and we were happy to see the use of so many colours, I (jasmine) think maybe you guys can make your poster better by adding some more pictures, some of the words were blurry so make the writing a darker colour! we hope to see the improvements !
Jaz, Declan, Hardeep

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Hi David, your poster is very engaging and colourful. However, you could be more specific in what people need to be donating and where we need to be donating. We like how you have also included images in the poster!

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Hi Blair and Aarshia. Good job, We like how you addressed the organisation and added drawings to support your information. However, you could add more detail about what people can bring in. Also adding pictures will make it more engaging so that more people will want to read it. Make sure to proofread your work and make sure grammar and punctuation is correct. Great work - Aariz, Oliver and Natalia.

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Good job Aashna and Isabelle. The poster you created talks about the St Vinnies Christmas Hamper Appeal which spreads awareness. Some feedback would be to add images to your poster that match the colours in the poster. You could also change the colour or the font of your writing to make it easier for people to read. You just missed writing what we have to donate for example food or toys for the St Vinnies Christmas Hamper. Otherwise the design and background are really good and you both used kind language.

- Ria

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Hiii Lynette, Jaslyn and Saanvi. Outstanding job! This poster is very bright and fun and we love the colour you guys have chosen for this. The pictures on the poster really connect and match the text that it shows. We think you should add more texts to explain the importance of the Christmas appeal. Other than that your poster looks excellent. Keep working hard!

From Peighton and Crystle!

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Lynette, Jasly & Sanvi, we quite like that you have included many images which allow the poster to become more physically appealing. Though maybe don't use the term "poor" as this may be offensive to them so instead you could use "less fortunate". Overall, we believe that your poster states the information need for the poster and is visually appealing. Great work guys! - Chris, Sahil

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Indi and Panthini, your poster is very well set out and the colours are great! You could tell us more about what to bring and when to bring it. However, we also love the picture surrounding the text as it gives the poster life. In addition, you could use more proper punctuation and wording to communicate your message. Overall the poster is great!

- Salote, Rohish and Divity

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Hi Elijah, Jierald and Zac, we liked that you said what the Christmas hamper was and put a cool gradient, but we suggest that you add more information about how the St Luke's community can help and add images that are more relevant to the Christmas hamper.

Overall, good job!

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