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이렇게 외워도 될까요,,? 

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이렇게 외워도 될까요,,? 타입 3입니다,!!!

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선생님 타입3를 쓰는데 근거에 무조건

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선생님 타입3를 쓰는데 근거에 무조건 if를 써야하는건가요 아니면 근거중에 두개만 if 넣고 하나는 일반 문장으로 넣어도 되나요?

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I will introduce Internet etiquette for safe and enjoyable Internet use. First, don't spread other people's information. If you spread other people’s information you could go to jail. Second, don’t spread disturbing information. If you don’t spread disturbing information, people will use the internet comfortantly. Finally, don’t use expressions that cause discomfort. If you use expressions that cause discomfort, It will annoy people’s feeling. please follow the internet etiquette.

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이렇게 외워도 될까요?

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Topic : fitness center rules

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Purpose : for the comfort of all

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Do you know the rules for using the fitness center?

Today, i'd like to tell you the three rules of the fitness center.

first, if you sweat when you exercise you need to wipe the sweat off the fitness equipment. Otherwise, it will be uncomfortable for others to exercise.

Second, Exercise after enough warm-up. if you don't, you can get hurt while ex ercising.

third, After using the dumbbell, put it back in place. if you don't, it can be uncomfortable when someone else uses.​

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Conclusion : you can do fun exercise if you follow the rules well.

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Topic: Global warming
Purpose: To prevent global warming

Global warming is serious these days.
However, if individual efforts are made, we can prevent global warming.

First, reduce the use of plastic.
If you reduce the use of plastic, you can reduce the amount of greenhouse gases that burn plastic.

Second, let's do a separate collection.
Separate collection can reduce the amount of garbage to be reclaimed and reduce soil pollution and water pollution.

Third, remove the plug.
If you unplug a house you don't use, you can reduce 78kg of carbon dioxide a year.

If you want to heal the planet, it is time to take an action.

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topic lunch room rules
purpose for clean use and comfort of all

Do you know how to keep everyone's lunch room clean?
Today, I'd like to give you three tips.
First. Get your meal and transport it safely to your seat.
It keeps floors clean by not dropping food. Second, Separate garbage and throw away. If paper cups come out, separate them and throw them away.
Finally. Take only enough food to eat, If you are fed adequately.
you can be considerate of others.
Thank you for your Listen

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Do you know how to protect the sea?
If you want to protect the sea, you should reduce the use of shampoo and conditioner first
Second, you shouldn't throw garbage in the sea
If you throw away trash, there will be a trash island in the middle of the sea
Third, don't throw pollutants into the sea
If so, the sea will not be able to come back the way it used to be
This way you can protect the sea

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선생님 first~finally 부분만 수정했습니다

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Today, the environmental  pollution problem on Earth is very serious and everyone‘s home of life is being destroyed.

So, I‘d like to inform you of three action plans to prevent environmental pollution.

First, refrain from using disposable products.

If you use disposable products, they don‘t rot, making the soil and sea where we live dirty.

Second, walk or use public transportation instead of cars.

If you do, you can reduce greenhouse gas emissions that cause global warming.

Finally, save energy by unplugging when not in use.

Many resources are used to create energy and pollutants that make the atmosphere bad are released.

Therefore, if you save energy, you can prevent air pollution.

Let‘s practice these three actions to protect the Earth where we all live.

문장에 잘못된 부분이 있는지 봐주실 수 있을까요..?

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Have you ever seen a smoker?
If you haven't seem him or her, look around.
There are so many reasons why We shouldn't smoke.
Today, I will tell you why cigarettes are dangerous. The first reason is that cigarettes as almost everyone knows contain very dangerous carcinogens. The second is the risk of secondhand smoking. If you stay with someone who smokes, you can be affected by a smoker. The last reason is the smell of cigarettes.
If you smoke in public places, the smell also damages the residents.
So let's not smoke dangerous cigarettes that harm me and others.

외워도 될만큼 만들어 졌을까요?

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Do you know how to enhance cybersecurity? Today, I'd like to give you three tips.

First, if you receive suspicious emails or messages, think twice before clicking on any links or attachments. When in doubt, verify the source with caution. Second, always keep your software and devices up to date. Regularly install security patches and updates to protect against known vulnerabilities. Finally, use strong and unique passwords for your online accounts. Avoid using common phrases or personal information that can be easily guessed. Remember, a strong password is an essential shield against cyber threats.

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혹시 이상한 부분이나 고치면 자연스러울 부분을 알려주세요

Do you know bout the musarm rules? Here are three rules. First, Do not Use photography flash. Relics can be damaged if you use flash. Second, Answer the phone outside the exhibition room. It is noisy with sound echoing in

the exhibition room. So it can hinder people’s viewing. Last, Do not touch the the exhibits. If exhibits are damaged, you may have to pay for them

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고칠부분 말씀해주세요!!

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고칠 부분 알려주세요!

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Topic -rules to follow at school
Purpose- To make everyone’s school life enjoyable

Do you know the rules to follow at school?
I’d like to give you three tips.
First, Don’t run in the classroom, walk around.
If you run around in the classroom, you will get hurt.
Second, Don’t mess around on the stairs.
If you do that, you could be seriously injured.
Finally, Don’t talk with your friends in class.
For example, if you talk with your friends without permission in class.
You may get in the way of other friends

Thank you for listening.

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The word 'sportsmanship' means a proper mental attitude for the sportsmen. You may have experienced or watched the athletes arguing at the stadium, since sportsmanship had not followed by them. If you want the clear and fair sports games, try to keep sportsmanship in your mind.
Here are three simple ways to follow it. First, if you are playing the sports game, do the play not for the opposite team, but for your team. It is the base of every sports game to play for the win of your team.
Also, be the modest winner, or the honorable loser after the game ended. If you want to be a fair sportsman, you need to know to acknowledge both your defeat and victory of the opponent.
Last, if you are an audience watching a sports game, though it is not your preferred team, give a clap to the players who showed a great game skill.
In this manner, the game can be nicer and clearer. You can easily do all these things.

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부족하거나 이상한 부분 알려주시면 고

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부족하거나 이상한 부분 알려주시면 고치겠습니다!🥺

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10922유박하나 수정본입니다(댓글 있어요)

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10922유박하나 수정본입니다(댓글 있어요)

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An art museum is a special place to appreciate beautiful artworks. To enjoy your visit, remember these tips.

First, Be quiet and respectful.
If we speak softly and avoid loud noises, we can create a peaceful environment for others to appreciate the artworks.

Second, Don't touch the artwork.
Respecting the art means refraining from touching it, ensuring its preservation.

Third, Follow the museum's instructions. If we don't follow the guidelines and instructions provided by the museum staff, we may not have a smooth and enjoyable visit to the art museum.
In conclusion, by being respectful, keeping our hands off the artwork, and following the museum's instructions, we can fully enjoy and appreciate the beauty of art.

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How often do you take public transit?
I’ll tell you three tips about public transit etiquette.

First, If an elderly person is on board, you should give up your seat for them.
Because they are usually more physically uncomfortable than we are.

Second, Do not ride with your legs wide open.
If a person sitting next to you rides with their legs open,
You will be uncomfortable for you to sit.

Finally Don’t talk loudly.
This is because it may interfere with the driver and cause inconvenience to others.

Think of others and use public transit.

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Rules to follow on the plane.
For a safe flight
First, Drink moderately on the plane.
If you drink moderately, everyone will have a comfortable trip.
Second, Fasten your seat belt.
If you wear a seat belt, prevents serious injuries in accident.
Finally, Be polite to the flight attendant.
If you are polite, everyone will have a pleasant trip.
Where does the trip start?
The journey begins on a plane bound for the destination.
Therefore we’re not supposed to act rude airplane.

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you like pets? These days many people adopt pets. But, many people break up pets.
If you adopt a pet, you need a sense of responsibility. Because they're living and they have felt too. For You to be responsible for animals, we should provide them with an environment suitable for them. Because the environment required varies depending on the animal. Therefore, you should study hard and try hard to provide the right environment for your pet. And, If your pet is alone, You have to pay a lot of attention So that they don't feel lonely.
So that your pet can be happy give them a lot of attention.

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고칠 부분이 있는지 말씀해 주세요 !

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쌤 이대로 외워도 될까요?

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Here are three tips on how to conduct yourself in an art museum.
1. Speak softly and avoid loud noises to maintain a calm and respectful atmosphere.
If we speak softly and avoid loud noises, we can create a peaceful environment for others to appreciate the artworks.

2. Refrain from touching the artwork to preserve its integrity.
If we refrain from touching the artwork, we can prevent potential damage to delicate pieces and ensure their preservation.

3. Follow the guidelines and instructions provided by the museum staff for an enjoyable experience.
If we follow the guidelines and instructions, we can have a smooth and enjoyable visit to the museum.

In conclusion, by being considerate, respecting the artwork, and adhering to the museum's rules and guidelines, we can fully appreciate the beauty of art.
타입 3이고 숫자같은건 first 같은걸로 바꿔쓸 계획입니다.

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Good Manners In Class Time

Do you keep good manners during class? Oh, don’t you know what manners in class time are? I’ll tell you three manners to make a pleasant class time.

First, don’t make a noise. If you make a noise, the same classmates will be disturbed. Then, they may be hated you. So let’s promise not to make a noise.

Second, don’t use earphones. If you use your earphones during class time, the teacher in front of you will be disappointed. And the class may be stopped because the teacher tries to stop you. That’s also disturbing to the same classmates. So we need to control this behavior by ourselves

Finally, don’t go to the restroom often in class. If you keep going to the toilet in class, the class flow may be cut off. So other mates may be disturbed again. Instead, let’s go to the restroom in a break.

Today, we looked for manners in class time. Let’s all try for a pleasant class!

타입3 입니다! 수정해야 할 부분이 있다면 말씀 부탁 드립니다! :)

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Many different people in indoor swimming pools

There's a part of misbehaving. If you see such people, you will help them with the following rules. First, don't run on the floor of the pool. Running on the floor is dangerous because it is slippery due to water. Second, do not eat food in the water. Food pieces can float and cause discomfort

If you follow this rule

You can use a safe and comfortable indoor swimming pool

Lastly, let's wear the third swimming cap well

Hair floats on the water, blocking the drainpipe. Please abide by the above rules

어색한 부분이나 추가 할 문장이 있으면 알려주세요ㅠㅠㅠ 감사합니다!!

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Have you ever seen school violence happening around you?

주변에서 학교폭력이 일어나는 것을 본 적이 있는가 ?

Here are four tips for preventing school violence.

여기 학교 폭력을 예방하기 위한 4가지 팁들이 있다.

First, when you speak, think from the other person's point of view

첫째, 말할 때 상대방의 입장에서 생각해라

If you speak politely, the other person will feel good.

너가 예의있게 말하면 상대방의 기분은 좋을 것이다.

Second, give attention and help instead of sitting on the sidelines and being indifferent

둘째, 방관과 무관심 대신 관심과 도움을 줘라

Third, keep Internet conversation etiquette

셋째, 인터넷 대화 예절을 지켜라

Finally, if you see school violence, tell your teacher or call 117

마지막으로, 학교폭력을 목격한다면 선생님께 말하거나 117에 신고해라

If these rules are followed, school violence will gradually decrease.

이 규칙들을 지킨다면 학교폭력은 점점 줄어들 것이다.

We are all precious people.

우리 모두는 소중한 사람들이다.

Let's care about each other and help each other

서로를 아끼고 도와주자

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To remind people of responsibility there pet i’d like to give you three tips. If you are thinking of raising an animal, first remember that animals are also a precious life. Don’t ignore the importance of life just because an animal is much smaller than you. Second, prepare budget and environment for animals in advance. If you brought an animal but you don’t have enough money, can the environment where the animal is needed be maintained? Lastly, don’t try to buy animals only at pet stores. This is recommendation, but as the saying goes, “Let’s adopt without buying,” pets should be viewed as life, not as a product. So animals are a precious life, let’s be responsible and make them happy.

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If you want to drive safely, remember some rules! First, you shouldn't drive if you drank. Drunk driving is a dangerous behavior that can cause serious traffic accidents. Second, if you are sleepy, you shouldn't drive. Sleepiness while driving is one of the main cause of accidents. Finally, you need to fasten your seat belt. Wearing a seat belt can reduce serious injury and protect your life in the event of an accident. Thank you for your cooperation.

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To protect the environment, all citizens of the world should follow some tips. First, try to conserve energy. If you turn on unnecessary lights or use your own car all the time, the burden on the environment can increase. Second, recycle and separate waste. If you do, you can conserve resources and minimize the environment impact of waste disposal. Third, choose eco-friendly products. If you choose them, you can contribute to minimizing environmental impact.
Let’s work together to protect the environment!

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Currently, diseases such as colds and flu occur frequently. What should I do to prevent this? This can be prevented by hand washing. By the way, Do you know the exact way to wash your hands? Follow these steps for an effective hand-washing routine. first wet your hands with clean running water. And latheryour hands by rubbing them together with the soap, making sure you reach all surfaces thoroughly. Scrub your hands for at least 20 seconds. If you sing "Happy birthday" song twice, you will count to 20. And rinse your hands well under running water. Finally your hands with a clean towel or air dry them. In conclusion, hand washing has many advantages such as infection prevention, food hygiene, and skin health.
Therefore, we can all prevent infectious diseases if we maintain hand washing as a daily habit.

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Rules to follow on the plane
For a safe flight
First) Don’t drink too much on the plane.
if you don’t drink,everyone will have a comfortable trip.
Second) Fasten your seat belt.
if you wear a seat belt,you will prevent a big accident.
Third) Don’t be rude to flight attendants.
if you don’t behave yourself to a flight attendant,everyone will have an unpleasant trip.
Conclusion where does trip start? The journey begins on a plane bound for the destination.
Therefore we’re not supposed to act rude in a small space.

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Do you know some rules to follow when raising a pet?
I'll tell you three essential etiquette about pets.
First, If you walk your dog, put a leash on your dog.
By putting a leash on a dog, we can protect it from unexpected dangers.
Second, if your dog defecated during a walk, remove your dog's excrement.
If you don't clean up your dog's excrement, it can stink and damage others.
Lastly, If you use public transportation with your dog, put your dog in a pet cage.
By doing so, you can prevent your dog from scaring other people on public transportation and walking around on public transportation.
If you follow these three rules well, you can become a better pet owner.

수정 할 부분 있으면 알려주세요! 감사합니다 :)

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By any chance, have you ever made a loud noise in public? If you have, you have to watch this three tips.
first, if you phone on your friends or parents, please low speaks and if your near people make loud noise, say be quiet a please.
second, if you in public space where you have to walks slowly because if you fast, may be you bump with any people. however your near people fast(running). say, Could you walk slowly because you might bump with someone else?
Finally, have you experienced that threw away trash on the street? this is no, because it make a pollution domain. so you have to that don't throw away trash. please remenber this rule

문법,어법등 틀린 부분 알려 주셨으면 합니다

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How to be a sustainable consumer

To make our planet a more sustainable place, our consumption must take into account both people and environment.

So I'm going to give you 3 tips on how we can be a sustainable consumer for  better future.

First, buy eco-friendly products.

If people buy many eco-friendly products, companies will try to make eco-friendly products.

Second, buy energy-efficient products.

If people do that, it will help protect the environment by emitting less carbon.

Finally, buy fair trade products.

Through your wise spending, someone who has worked hard will be paid a fair price.

I hope you work together for our better future. thank you.

혹시 잘못된 부분이 있는지 궁금합니다!

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For a pleasant school life

Do you want a pleasant school life?
If you want it, please follow these three rules.
First, keep the start time of class
If you keep it well, the class won't be delayed.
second, don't make any noise in class. Talking in class is very unpleasant for other people
Finally, set your smartphone to silent during class.
except when you use smartphone during class, Setting your smartphone to silent helps you concentrate on your class. use your smartphone only when you need it in class
If we follow these three rules, we will all be happy

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The park rules.
Do you know that there are rules to follow to keep the park beautiful?Let me tell you these three rules.

First, do not pick plants.
If you don't pick plants, the park will maintain its beauty.

Second, put the trash in the trash can.
If you throw trash into the trash can, everyone will be able to use the park cleanly.

Finally, put a leash on your pet. Some people will be scared if your pet doesn't wear a leash.

I hope you follow these rules. Thank you for reading it!

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