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You need to look again  at the thesis statement. Your topic sentences are quite short.

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Overall looks good. However your 2nd point in the 3rd supporting details don't really the relevance to the 3rd main point (genetic)

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No.5 (Puteri and Crystal)

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Dina and Farah

The painter Matisse is great at putting the viewer at the site as he is the most realistic of all the modern artists. “The Casbah Gate” shows Matisse skills as he portrays the gateway Bab el Aassa with few soft and appealing colours, and gets the central points of Tangier afternoon, including the precious presence of the bowaab, the doorman for the residents. From Peter Plagens, "Bright Lights." Newsweek (26 March 1990)

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Question 3
Bindy & Aisyah
Bindy:
Three-fourths of the more than 1000 bicycling deaths each year are caused by head injuries. (combined sentences) Fifty percent of those killed are school-age students. (synonym) One study concluded that wearing a bike helmet can minimize the possibility of head injury by 85 percent. (synonym) A bike helmet absorbs the shock and cushions the head in an accident. (moving phrases) From "Bike Helmets: Unused Lifesavers," Consumer Reports (May 1990)

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75% of the 1000 bicycling death happened due to head injuries.500 children die in biking accidents every year and most of the death is caused by the head injuries. Children who wear helmets reduce the risk of getting head injuries by 85% than children who don’t wear them

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No2 (Felicia, Patma, Sakinah)
In the 20s, alcohol was prohibited and the ban was a farce because everybody knew of a nearby bar where liquor could be obtained and as the organized crime dominated the streets, the cops appeared helpess to stop it. Musicians like Bir Beiderbecke, Louise Armstrong, and Count Basie become favourites among the younger generation and jazz became more popular while the classical music was getting abandoned. The flapper was born and the girls showed that they are hostile toward traditions by chopping their hair and shortening their skirts.

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No 1. (Yi Ting & Priscila)
The Antarctic is a major supply of cold on Earth and holds immense control over the climate. It helps to cool the surface and atmosphere by having its cold ocean waters mix with water from the tropics. However, this cooling system is in jeopardy due to human activity.

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4.Word forms
Be respectful to your parents and teachers

Invitation has been received by the mayor

It is not my intention to be here long

Susan bowls quite well

My mother and I had a talk

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3.Synonyms

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Safiah Sakinah

1) The house was destroyed by a tornado
2) The floor is washed by Danny every Monday
3) A book about Albert Einstein is going to be written by the columnist in 2011
4) Hundreds of patients were treated by the doctor
5) A story about the infamous cat will be written by David next month

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1. I like chickens but not the vegetables
2. I arrived to the movie early and bought the tickets.
3. I will not see you today and tomorrow
4. I don't have money so I can't go to the concert
5. My cat needs a bath because it has fleas

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Paraphrasing is the most important tool for sharing the research of others as relevant to your own study.  When you paraphrase, you state someone else’s idea in your own words.

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Dear Principle,
I regret to inform that what happened today in the cafeteria was never my intention. I am so unsure and unaware of the reasons for the food fight. As I walked into the cafeteria, mashed potatoes were thrown at my head. Such an act is definitely devastating. As you are aware sir, emotions are uncontrollable. Unfortunately, in my anger, I mishandled everything I had in hand, which was the Jell-O. I accept that throwing it was indeed incorrect. But I deeply apologize for whatever I am responsible for. I’m hoping you’ll understand and forgive me. Thank you for your time.

Kind Regards,
Kisheena Sundaraju

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Dear Mr Jonathan

It was Syahman that started all this mess. Not me! I just being there at the cafeteria minding my own business and suddenly I felt something gooey at the back of my head. I touched it and Yucks! a ball of mashed potato has landed on my head. When I turn my back to find the perpetrator that is when I saw Syahman cackling at his seat laughing at me. An eye for an eye for me. He wanted a war and he gets it. I throw back my mashed potato at him and accidentally it hits the wrong guy. This is where all hell breaks loose. he try to fight back and all the kids that are seeing this joins in. Basically it is not my fault at all or maybe a liitle bit but if Syahman didn't started it all this would not happening.

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You won’t believe what happened!! A food fight suddenly broke out yesterday when you were absent. It was insane! I got hit by the soggy blob lumpy mash potato and it was disgusting! The gravy was all over my shirt. The smell and the feeling of the soggy mash potato almost made me threw up.... Before I knew it I grab my red runny Jello and threw it everywhere since I didn’t knew who threw the mash potato. It was such a mess!! Before it become more worst the cafeteria monitor started yelling. Since it was hectic, the voice is too soft to hear. Then out of nowhere the voice of the principle was heard through the intercom. The cafeteria was suddenly dead silent. The students were ordered to go back to their class. Then after like 15 minutes I was called to the principal office. All the students who was involved in the food fight had to clean up all the mess that they made. I was so tired at the end of the day! I literally pass out once I reached home..

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Just so you know, this was all a misunderstanding, just in case you get a call from the principal later. So... a food fight happened at school, and I might've taken part just a little bit... In my defense, I didn't start the thing and someone did throw mashed potatoes at my head. Okay, fine maybe I shouldn't have thrown my Jell-O, but we all make mistakes in life, and it's not like I actually hit anyone.

I did get called to the principal's office today, so expect a phone call. No, I don't know why I went instead of the guys who actually started this mess. Also, you might have to visit the principal tomorrow so put on your best outfit. Gotta make a good first impression.

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◦SUP! – DERIVE FROM THE WORD “WHAT’S UP?”

◦DUH! – Typically, with an eye roll, you used duh when something someone is saying was obvious.

◦TALK TO THE HAND – used when you heard enough from somebody,

◦FYI, BRB, GTG – Short form that mostly used during sending text or email

◦HELLA – Derive from the word “Hell of” same meaning as really

◦WHATEVER! - Whatever! works great when you don’t agree with someone but don’t want to fight about it anymore.

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Take a chill pill – when you’re telling someone to relax (“dude take a chill pill!”)

Hella – mean either “a lot of” or “very” (“she is hella stupid”)

Duh – a way to say “of course”

Wannabe – someone who wants to achieve or be of a certain class but can’t (“she is a wannabe Ariana Grande”)

Legit – short for ‘legitimate’ and means cool or real (“the contest seems legit”)

Def – short for ‘definitely’, usually in text

Bad – A compliment (“she is the baddest”)

As if – “yeh right” or “as if that’s true”

Totally – to emphasize the importance of something (“I totally understand”)

Big time – to emphasize on something (“we screwed up big time”)

Psyched– excited (“I’m psyched for this party”)

Sike – to indicate what was just said is false (“I got the PS5 for you…SIKE!”)

Chicken – coward (“stop being a chicken”)

By: Amilia, Dina, Yi Ting

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1. Based - when someone is true to themselves or being very humble. Originates from a certain rapper’s behaviour

2. Dope - used to describe something that is cool. Originates from African American usage of the word.

3. Super lit - it means awesome. Originates from America

4. Tilt - game slang that means someone is unstable mentally to continue the game. Originates from a pinball machine that is tilted that causes it to be unable to continue operating

5. Smurf – game slang that means to play at a lower ranking than is meant for your skill level. Originates from a username of a player that first popularise this method

6. Cuba try – literally means try try in English, Malaysian only use where it means to just try.

7. Smart – to describe someone with a nice appearance or outfit. Originates from Malaysia from the wrong usage of the word.

8. Boss – used to call a waiter in Malaysia. It is to show a form of respect to the waiter.

9. Slap – to describe something as very enjoyable. It originates from the internet

10. Lata – game slang that means ‘later’. Originates from a popular streamer (Trick2G)

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-Chillax
To chill and relax
-Mega
Similar to cool to describe something awesome
-Bling
Describe someone that has an extensive  amount  of sparkle in their outfit
-Walau
Describe the feeling of surprise ot disbelief
-Abuden
A sarcastic  remark  to state the obvious

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1. Bling - shiny stuff on clothing.
2. Crunk -  having a good time.
3. Word - indicates that something is either understood or appreciated.
4. You got served -  serve them their own busted ego.
5. Baller - to describe things being cool.
6. Booyah - an exclamation of excitement.
7. Peace out - substitute for “goodbye”.

8. Bounce - substitute for “leaving” a place or a situation.
9. Dawg - to describe another person that you felt pleasantly towards.
10. Waz crackin - to say "how are you doing?"

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-Fab  (fabulous)
-Badass (cool)
-Ditch (abandon)
-Dig it (agree or understand something)
-Groovy (cool)
-Crib(home)
-Rip off (something of a lesser value/fake)
-Peace out (goodbye)
-Bad (cool)
-Stoked (excited)
-Gig (work or job)
sakinah, hazirah, patma, pris

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-Extra

Over the top, excessive behaviour, overly dramatic

-Lit

Awesome and excellent

-Ghost

Stops responding to text messages

-Woke

Knowledgable and actively attentive of social justice

-Boss

What we call at a customer or workers usually in mamak stalls

-Chun

Indicates approval

-On

Indicates we’re up for the plan

-Steady

Indicates someone who’s chill and relax

-Action

braggy, cocky or arrogant.

-Slumber

describe a person who isn’t anxious nor worried about something.

-Tackle

it means to apprach and flirt with an individual

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AMILIA

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My favourite book series that was close to my heart, was born here

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This country is our neighbour in the ASEAN. Popular with its variety of food and market. The popular main dish that is serve there is majority have spicy and soury taste. It also known that they are one of the country that you can easily go with the lowest budget. Their beaches and sunflower farm also in the list of the best attraction there. Their market were so lively and lots of eye candy item.

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A plethora of inspiring, smart, creative people dwell in the nooks and crannies of this place.

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A plethora of inspiring, smart, creative people dwell in the nooks and crannies of this place.

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Being here itself would be too surreal, like a dream come true. Buildings raced each other in a quest to touch the soft blue sky and people littered the streets and sidewalks. Life here is upbeat and fast-paced and everyone and everything will be moving.

bindy.

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An island located in the land of ancient Gods where its architecture of villages are built right on the edge of the caldera and most importantly, it comes with a breathtaking view to the Aegean Sea.

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The greatest contribution that can bring me utmost happiness and peace is the service to humanity and the contribution to the needs of people. After all,  "service is the highest form of worship".

-Kisheena Sundaraju-

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A city of green spaces and museums. One of the best countries to live in and has one of the lowest crime rates in the world. People ski and sled everywhere. Lots of fresh food.

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This country is well-known for its native animals but i do love their native flower too!

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I miss the clean and peaceful road. Multiple beautiful places to visit with amazing scenery and atmosphere.

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A beautiful city with lovely mixed culture within it. Lots of delicious food plus they have a great island too. Some of their building produce a great structure such as the building in some dramas make me wanna go there and explore more.

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The sunset view is beautiful and calming

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I would want to visit places with great views

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i really want to visit the different places in this country, like their islands, beaches, mountains and temples. Plus the food in this country is mouth watering.

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I really want to experience winter in this country

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This is because this place are so beautiful and breathtaking . Well travelling is one of my favorable hobbies. This place was a wonderful addition to my journey since I love lakes , waterfall , island , beach and river . I also want to feel the heat from the water while swimming at there . The things that really atrract me are the cleanliness, purity, and ecological balance of geothermal seawater which routinely monitored for strict conformance with internationally recognized standards of water quality. .The view of this place absolutely amazing and also have a face mask from special mud that I really want to try .

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I’ve always set my heart on visiting or perhaps living in a place where you can truly feel the fresh and cold breeze and be surrounded by the exquisite nature. All sorts of colourful flowers here and there along with tall trees, mountains, rolling hills, basically a place with everlasting green. As seen in movies or read articles about this place, I can without a doubt imagine myself standing in a beautiful, breathtaking, scenic meadow, observing the view with the cold wind in my face and knowing no matter how many times I've seen it,be it in real life or pictures, it will only leave me needing more.

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The warmth of the water while experiencing the winter weather and scenery.
A beautiful country, surrounded by the ring of fire.