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The climax in extended fiction comes about 75 percent of the way through the story and is the most intense turning point. In "Allegedly" the the climax is when Sarah (New Girl) pushes Mary down the steps. Sarah is like a villain in a horror movie. The author builds to the climax in the rising action by using motif, mood, tone, character development and figurative language. It says, "The door creaks like an air horn as I peer into the hallway. Nothing but blackness, an eerie graveyard, the stairs a million miles away." This helps create tension and build suspense, which is the purpose of the rising action.

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Imagine being in a dark room that is stark quiet besides a pounding wind and soft light. The snow has fallen making it eerily quiet. You need to escape the house, but know there is someone lurking about. And to make matters worse, the person you can't locate has demonic intentions. This is how the author builds tension toward the most intense turning point of the book - the climax - nearing the end of the novel. Besides the setting, the description of Sarah adds to the ominous mood. The author describes Sarah's eyes as "cold as snow" and then later "just like a ghost, snow-white skin glowing." We see the author is using diction, repetition, and similes to describe this character. If eyes are the window to the soul, then the simile of cold eyes reveal a deep seated evil in Sarah. Additionally, the author uses "snow" twice. It's interesting that snow is falling all around outside, while she uses "snow" to describe Sarah. This indicates Sarah is all around - moving stealthily as a "ghost." The diction of "ghost" also implies death and danger. We can see this combined with the setting, builds a mood akin to a horror film. The descriptions build like legos - stacking upon each other - until there is only one option. The legos fall. And that is the climax - Mary's fall down the stairs.

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I chose this one because it uses example and diction words.

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option 2 is better. What i would fix from option 1 is to add more details in it and make it descriptive. option 2 was better just because of the hook or the description in the beginning and how their transitions was more smoother than option 1. option 1's simile wasn't as good as option 2 s nor the parallel structure.

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2 is better because its more detailed and it gives us literary devices.

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option 1 is better. i would fix the weaker response by adding the climax and adding a page number. i think option 1 is very s

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I chose this response because it gives a hook and it has a good description they also have a good use of quotes

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i picked this because it is eye catching and it's not boring

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i chose this because it has more details than option 1 its being very descriptive. The option 1 need to be more formal and a little easy to read even though you can understand their intention but it doesn't flow smoothly its like a run on sentence  . The climax is in the 3/4 of the book it is to build tension for the fall basically when Mary was pushed down the stairs. The author uses diction figurative language and repetition. His or her work is like open surprised party.

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this response is better because the hook it gives is putting it in a POV, it also shows more details then option 1 that could give the reader more imfromation. option 1 is weaker response because it is shorter with less info,the climax is located in the middle in the book 3/4 .when new girl pushes mary down the steps.the author builds the climax using simile to create

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i feel as though this one is better because it gives wayyy more detail and it gives a very nice descriptive example.

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The second option is better because it gives us the literary devices. The first option doesn't have a simile because she doesn't compare unlike things.

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I choose this one as the stronger response because it starts off with a good hook to catch the readers attention and because it also has a more descriptive response than option 1.i wouldn't change anything about this response. I feel as though option 1 is the weaker one because it isn't as descriptive as option 2 bc option 2 has way more detail and it creates an image in our head and option one doesn't. the climax falls 3/4 into the book and its when the new girl pushes Mary down the stairs.

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I picked this one because it hooks the reader in. and it used mostly everything from the first one but it just has more detail then the first one.

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i feel as though i didnt pick this one bevause it didnt catch my attention and it wasnt as good as 2// it explained everything like it was supposed to do but it was written very bland and uninteresting.

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Option 2 is better then Option 1 because #2 has multiple literacy devices within it. It also has transitional words that #1 doesn't have. Which makes this one more smoother then the other. What would I try to fix about the #1 is add multiple transitional words to it. For now it is way too choppy and weird to read.

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The second response is better because it goes in depth of what actually happens, it also shows not tell

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2 is better. what i would fix about 1 is make it more detailed and more descriptive.

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option 1 is better because its very detailed and more specific option 2

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This response is pretty good but its not as good as option 2 because it points out literary devices but its not as detailed as option 2

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i like this one better because it gives more datail and i think its better period

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I pick this one because this gives extensive detail one the topic and helps us understand what they were saying better. Also gives us the events of the book and doesn't make it look like a construction manual.

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this one gives fales information but i like it tho

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1 needs to be descriptive and needs to take their time answering the question instead of just running through

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I pick this one because it has a good quotes.