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¨It was a cold morning´´

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" It was a cold morning and my throat was dry. I awoke in my hotel room with my throat rasping and my eyes heavy."  Instead of a "cold morning" he could have said " I could see the frost crystalization on the window as I looked outside our hotel."

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"I awoke in my hotel room with my
throat rasping and my eyes heavy."
I woke up with my throat dry and feeling drowsy this morning.

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¨"It was a cold morning and my throat was dry." "It was as imagery and you could imagine it in your head.

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"It was a cold morning and my throat was dry." instead of just saying it explain it in a exaggerated way to make the feeling go with the "vibe" with the event.

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¨It was a cold morning and my throat was dry¨.

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"...because there was not
enough space for me at their table." because our group was unable to squeeze into a table together.
"I was nervous." My heart raced and hands became damp with sweat.

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"There was not enough space for me at their table" The table was too crowded and I had to sit apart from my parents.

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"It was a cold morning..."
They could have written about how each surface had felt chilly and how the air flowing into the room had felt almost windy.

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"Today was the banquet and I was nervous." When I woke up I realized today was the banquet. My hands were so sweaty, I started to overthink things. I could feel my whole body really tenseing up.

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“It was a cold morning”
“I walked outisde and saw frost all over, I opened my mouth and a white cloud popped out”

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"At the banquet, my parents and I were separated because there was not
enough space for me at their table."
When we got there, I was directed towards another table, the representatives of countries less big than those who sat with my parents.

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¨Today was the banquet and I was nervous.¨ This was more telling because it is just saying what she is feeling. She could have said that she was sweating so bad because she was so nervous.