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the relationship between the end of the paragraph and the core is not appropriate

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The quality doesnt make the local film have a large views, but if the film have a good topic it will interest every one

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I think the presence of Hollywood films does not mean improving quality

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Too many biases in one paragraph

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I think the paragraph would be better if the writer included number of data to support argument

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I think the body on that paragraph may possibly be not clear enough. What impact was made? It is just international film shown or local film too?

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"The impact and international films are shown" sentence can not be understood

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The foreign investment makes indonesian movie industry rise again

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The article did not have a valid data

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i think the impact was right, it brings indonesia to the next level of economic society against others country in ASEAN.

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The ending of the paragraph isn’t too connected with the content

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I think the concluding sentence is not that clear , and i do not think that the investment from foreign company is always have a positive impact

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Cinema industries may be threatened by netflix

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The Indonesian film industry has a positive impact where the investment provided makes the development better  to watch is convenient movies and expanding its branches. People interested movies increased significantly after the cinema made better improvements every year to compete based cinemas. The increase is the impact and international films shown. The presence hollywood film can improve the quality and even compete. There are many lessons taken, The large number are watch local film more much  now because the quality.

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What do you think about this paragraph?