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When you're reading through the passages, we don't want to read the same ideas over and over again.

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Try not to repeat words as it gets less interesting.

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It is boring when there are no interesting languages

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combinations of synonyms and not repeating words. Having a unique eye catching introduction .
combining new ideas for a strong paragraph. Make sure you use different words that will make your story sound descriptive.

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Don't add too much information to your passage or it will sound more boring. Always take your time looking through your paragraph to see what you can replace with. And Always be honest or else nothing will change

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For example, 'and'. Descriptive language to hook our attention. Repeated words aren't amusing!

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Sometime words that you use in future and present tense can also be used in past tense so try and use them, if they don't work just find another word.

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correct grammar and vocabulary.

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We could change oversaid words with words that we dont haven't used recently in our writing.

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Stay calm and be honest with your thoughts because you and your critical friend will help you correct your mistakes.

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Look for something boring and change it to something with more expressions and onomatopoeia.

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Don't freak out and stay calm because everything will be alright and you just have to be honest with your partner on what you think of their work so far.

Adding descriptive words, so that the reader can be able to illustrate the scene in their heads.

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powerful sentence starters to hook others in

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We look for times when the paragraph has two different ideas