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Last year I went to reggae festival in ambato.
I went because I am a lover of reggae music, besides the main band was "zona ganjha",it's my favourite group.
I didn't have a lot money but I could enjoy all the event, and I met funny and good persons.
Ambato it's a quiet place, I think it's not a dangerous place.
The food was delicious and cheap.
I really liked it

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Last year I went to reggae festival in Ambato. I went because I am a lover of reggae music, besides the main band was "zona ganjha", it's my favourite group. I didn't have a lot money but I could enjoy all the event, and I met funny and good PEOPLE. Ambato IS a quiet place, I think it's not a dangerous place. The food was delicious and cheap. I really liked it.
1. WATCH OUT PARAGRAPHS FORMATION.
2. TRY TO DEVELOP MORE YOUR IDEAS ABOUT THE EVENT ITSELF FOR EXAMPLE WHY DID YOU REALLY LIKE THIS EVENT?

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Last night I went to see a exposition of Peñaherrera I went with my friends because they like his artist too and he is really fantastic, he was an importan artist in our country. He is the most important artist for me

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Last night I went to see AN EXHIBITION of Peñaherrera. I went with my friends because they like THIS artist, too and he is really fantastic. HE was an importanT artist in our country. He is the most important artist for me.
1. DEVELOP MORE THE IDEAS FOR EXAMPLE: HOW MUCH DID IT COST? WHAT WAS THE EXHIBITION ABOUT? DO YOU RECOMMEND IT OR NOT?

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Last November, I went to see Olé Comedy with my partners at the Benjamin Carrion theater. We had heard that they're very good. Olé Comedy are great and popular comedians from Spain. They play guitar and combine singing and comedy. It was free because the university gave us the tickets. I thought it was really fantastic comedy show!

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Last November, I went to see Olé comedy with my partners at the Benjamin Carrion theater. We had heard that they're very good. Olé Comedy are great and popular comedians from Spain. They play guitar and combine singing and comedy. It was free because the university gave us the tickets. I thought it was A really fantastic comedy show!
GREAT WRITING!

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Last year I went to the theatre, Sanchez Aguilar, to see the musical "Les miserables" with some friends. I went because my singing teacher recommend us the play and gave us free tickets.
The play was wonderful, the voices of the singers, spectacular and the acoustic of the place perfect. I really recommend this play to every music lover.
I was waiting to see it even before that the teacher tell us about the play. I thought that was better than I expected.

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Last year I went to Sanchez Aguilar THEATRE to see "Les miserables" MUSICAL with some friends. I went because my singing teacher recommendED us the play and gave us free tickets. The play was wonderful, the voices of the singers WERE spectacular and the acoustic of the place WAS perfect. I really recommend this play to every music lover.
I was waiting to see it even before that the teacher TOLD us about the play. I thought that IT was better than I expected.
1.  PAY ATTENTION TO THE GRAMMAR TENSE YOU'RE WRITING.

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Last week I went to see a Soccer match at Capwell Stadium. I went because now I'm living near it and I had enough money to pay the ticket.
There were too many people singing and supporting the team.
It cost 10 bucks and I waste 5 more for drinking and some snacks.
I really enjoyed the match because They won and They played better than the last time.

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Last week I went to see a soccer match at Capwell Stadium. I went because now I Am living near it and I had enough money to pay the ticket. There were too many people singing and supporting the team.
It cost 10 DOLLARS and I wasteD 5 more for drinking and some snacks.
I really enjoyed the match because they won and played better than the last time.
1. VERY GOOD ONLY THE PICTURE LACKS.

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Three years ago my uncle Fausto and I went to Metallica's concert, it was in Quito at the bicentenario park.. It was the March 18th of 2014.. That concert was one of the greatest experiences of my entire life, I saw Metallica playing 20 of their greates hits but the best was the last song: "Seek and Destroy" !! I recomend this band because they are like the fathers of thrash metal.. They have one of the best performance in scene of the world...

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Three years ago my uncle Fausto and I went to Metallica's concert, it was in Quito at the bicentenario park. It was ON March 18th, 2014. That concert was one of the greatest experiences of my entire life, I saw Metallica playing 20 of their greatesT hits but the best was the last song: "Seek and Destroy" I recomMend this band because they are like the fathers of TRASH metal. They have one of the best performance in scene of the world.
1. WATCH OUT SPELLING AND MECHANICS.

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Last week I went to an exhibition, It was in the UG university, I went because it was about hydraulic experiment (an important topic for my career), It was free and some of my classmates were there , it took around two hours , I think it is a good idea to transmit information and it is good for students that want learn more about hydraulic, they explained about the water behavior and different structures to can take advantage of water resources. I really liked it and I recommend it kind of exhibitions.

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Last week I went to an exhibition. IT was in the UG university. I went because it was about hydraulic experimentS (an important topic for my career). IT was free and some of my classmates were there , it took around two hours. I think it is a good idea to transmit information and it is good for students WHO want TO learn more about hydraulic. THEY explained about the water behavior and different structures TO TAKE advantage of water resources. I really liked it and I recommend THIS kind of exhibitions.
1. WATCH OUT SPELLING AND MECHANICS.

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Last year I went to a concert about rap music
it was in Entelequia Gallery in Eloy Alfaro and Colombia streets
I went because some friends invited me
I think it was good for teenagers and adults
it cost five dollars
in my opinion it was good, because there are some interesting band's of rap music and I never attend this kind of music
It was a new experience for me
I dance, drank some beer and met new people
the bands call A2h and Makanaki
I recommended this bands for all people that likes rap music and for the people that wants to listen some new things

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Last year, I went to a concert about rap music. IT was in Entelequia Gallery in Eloy Alfaro and Colombia street. I went because some friends invited me. I think it was good for teenagers and adults. IT cost five dollars. IN my opinion it was good, because there are some interesting bandS of rap music and I never attend this kind of EVENT. IT was a new experience for me. I danceD, drank some beer and met new people. The bands WERE A2h and Makanaki. I recommend thESE bands TO all people WHO LIKE rap music and WANT to listen some new things.
1. WATCH OUT PARAGRAPHS FORMATION.
2. DON'T FORGET SINGULAR AND PLURAL AGREEMENT.