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Wow Kennedy your story was amazing but sad we should definitely turn it into a movie🤗highly recommend to read

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I liked your story Eli just put some more thoughts

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I liked how you wrote a lot in your story! But next time can you make some paragraphs smaller..? I kinda couldn’t read.

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JM

Your story was very good I love how you had a lot of detail and and talking

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I think you did a great job on your story. I love how much dialogue and detail you had in your story. And overall your story was awesome!!!

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Samantha Dennis, I liked the transition words but I think you should work on punctuation because I seen a couple sentences with no periods. I think you could also work on organization because you didn’t separate your story into paragraphs.

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Km

I loved you story it had a lot of excitement and a lot of different people talking I love how you did not just have the person talk you tould there names

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you did a great job ! i would add a little more dialogue but otherwise it was amazing!!!!!!

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Lily Wehmer, the story was great. You should try to matey explain more of what you are saying in some places. Except for that it was good.

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LM
You did amazing! Maybe add some dialogue so we know more of what is going on, but other wise else you did great

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Alyssa Kelley
I really liked your story, but something you could work on is your capitalization and punctuation. You could also work on adding in some dialogue. Other than that you story was great!

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Anie Stanek
I loved how you put in detail like “We were so excited that we ripped the supplies out of her hands.” One thing you could add is maybe more dialogue. But I love you story a lot!

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Samantha Dennis, I loved your story because you had a lot of internal thinking and tension. One thing I think you should add is dialog so then you can show and not just tell.

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CM
I love it. But how about you go through and check your punctuation, and your dialogue

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you did amazing job and i loved the story

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Lily Wehmer, I loved the story! I can’t believe that happened. But Mabel  add some dialogue. Great story!

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CM
Micah Harlan
I think you should a bit more punctuation other than that your story’s great!

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CM
I think that you need to add more punctuation and fix the dialogue. Because there is a little spot at the beginning.

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Anie Stanek
I loved how you put in detail and the sound the four wheeler made. One thing you could improve on is if someone talks maybe say Kaylee said after she spoke. But I loved you story!

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Kailey Fortner
Your paper was great! I would recommend adding more transitions at the beginning of your paragraphs. I liked your lead.

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