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I am happy with my story as i am not very fond in writing comp

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I like my story as I manage to put up scientific concepts and put in word images to further describe about what was happening and the climax.  However, despite those, I am not satisfied with my story as I deleted alot of sentences, which honestly hurts my heart to do so. The difficulty was the keep the story within less than 500 words.

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I love my story because of the developed problem. I want to work on shortening the story and stop myself from adding details which are not needed in the story.

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I like my story's excitement. The plot used in it and the question marks and suspense my climax develops is nice. I want to develop more ideas and new ways to shorten my story to 500 words but to still put in all my phrases and my detailed description.

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I like my story as i am not very fond at writing stories or compositions

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I like my plot and how scientific concepts are used in the story. My biggest challenge is keeping the words of the story in less than 500. I want to work on the grammar and the structure of the story so that it sounds better to the readers

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I like my story as it allows me to be engrossed in it as there are many twists that takes place and the scientific concept in it is very interesting and makes go find out more about it.The biggest challenge in it was to keep it under 500 words as the scientific theory is a bit long to explain.

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I love my story because it has an unsuspected twist at the end and how small arguments can lead to a devastating disaster. I think that my story ends very abruptly as the word limit is only 500 and for science fiction the word limit should be more.

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I like about my ending;  it has given the reader a shock to it

I don't like about the climax; it does not show the impact I want to show

i have difficulty to decide the character feeling

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I like the way that I started the story with a flashback.i think one thing I could improve was to add word images and character feelings

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I like my story because it shows extensive information about the human eye and foreshadowing. However, the story had gone over 500 words and compressing it would be nearly impossible.

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I like my short story as it really makes me want to find out more about that certain subject, it also shares some history about the world it was. Something I want to change about my story is that I should not focus about the smaller details, but with the words I used so that I can paint that picture I want with lesser words. That way I can be more detailed and I can write more about it, not cutting the story short in a very sudden way. As the word limit was 500, I had difficulty fitting what I really wanted in that short story.

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I like the part about the story where the two main characters discover different things that happen when they come out of hiding after many years. The adventure that they go on, trying to cure the virus is very exciting I feel. Something I would like to work on is the ending as I hope that it will not be so abrupt and the story will have a proper ending.

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I like the story where the part when the aliens came into the naval base and cause trouble and the way I described the alien. The problem with the story is on how do I end it. The problem seemed impossible to solve and I thought of a way to solve it a very long time.

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I like the plot in my story as I could add in the Science concepts successfully. I also like my use of good words.I think that my conclusion is too abrupt.

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I like my scientific concept about the sun because I think, the idea is pretty decent. It is the only idea I could think of. I need to improve in my vocabulary and the control of the length of the story. The word images that I recently learnt in my English lesson is really cool and I love it.

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I like the plot and the ending of my story. I think a challenge was trying to unfold the story fully so that it makes sense while keeping it to 500 words. It was also a challenge to elaborate the science concept in the story.

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I like the part of the story where my character enters Earth and discovers a whole new world. I think that there was no strong science concept in the story as I wasn't very elaborative on the science concept in my story. I think the biggest challenge was to keep the words under 500. I am still very satisfied with my story.

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I like the scientific explanation behind my story and the resolution. I want to work on the word images that are too scarce in my story. It needs a more obvious climax and a better rising action too. One of the challenges I faced is to find a good scientific concept to write about. At first, I wanted  to write about time travel or wormholes or some other random stuff but soon realised that time  travelling is too complicated, and is absolutely impossible. Then about the wormholes, I have trouble trying to understand it good enough to let others understand when they read my story too. So I decided to write about mutation, with inspiration from Deadpool.

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What I like about my story is the plot about how the astronauts went missing, and no one knew where they went and what happened to them. I want to work on the phrases I use in my short story, and the biggest challenge I the number of words I had to limit myself to.

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I like the setting of my story along with the climax of my story. I think I could have had a better falling action and resolution. I like the possible and realistic scientific concepts of my short story. In my opinion, the hardest part of writing it was not coming up with the plot but keeping within the 500 word limit.

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I like the plot of my story as I love Science and have a great interest towards it, so writing a Science fiction story was very fun and exciting.The story was about a mutation that could not possibly happen but it was cool, albeit a little difficult to write and develop the climax.In my opinion, the most challenging part of the entire writing process was that the word limit was only 500, so I couldn't really write too many phrases and I ould also need to write about science concepts throughout the story also increasing the difficulty of writing it.Overall, writing the story was very fun and I hope there would be more of such tests and compositions in the future that hopefully would allow us to write more words.

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I like my essay's beginning as it is very mysterious and intriguing. It also hooks the reader into the story. I have to work on the ending of the story while making sure that it keeps within the 500-word limit.  I also like the fact that the science concept is very accurate.

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I like my story because it has something that got to do with the future, when spacecrafts were invented, and i think it was exciting when the main character accidentally travels to Mars. I think that it is very challenging that we had to keep our stories in 500 words, when ew had to use descriptive word and have a science concept.

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I like my plot of my story and the idea. I took quite long to come out with an idea so I am happy. To me the plot is quite interesting and I managed to add in some word images, dialogues and feelings.

My challenge was writing less than 500 words as I

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-I am proud to have made up such a story since I am not very fond of writing.
-The difficulty was to come up with a plot for the story and to keep within 500 words.
-The story was about an accidental trip to Venus. Two boys who met in Secondary School had a crazy dream to experience the temperature in Mars. On the way, their spaceship