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I think it was like a movie and had way too much dialogue. The story also want organized enough

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I would give this an b because it didn't really describe character

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I would give this paper B.The reason is because it was sort of confusing at the end.

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B because it didn't really give a lot of character traits

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The reason why Is because is that there is not much as action

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B because she was descriptive when it came to certain things it wasn't really interesting. And it lost me at the end.

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I would give this story 21/34because it really did not have that much action at the climax

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I have her a b because she didn't have that much sensory language because she only gave one peace of sensory language which was seeing

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C 1/2 organization killed her grade because the plot was not focoused in the story

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I scored as a 25/32

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21.5 because she didn't have much sensory language and she made 1 spelling error because she put a period instead of a comma

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I believe he deserves a B-

Because, it didn't get me attached, but it made me feel like I was in the story

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I got a 21.5/32 score so I would give it a B or B+ because the author didn't use much sensory language and made one dialogue error

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C because I did feel like I was there

And they did not dicribe most of the characters.

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I would give this a C+, since I had given it a 25/32, also, this book was very good, but it needed just a bit more explanation of characters, and more sensory language than sight.

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A- because she didn't give that much character traits and it sounded like something from a movie I saw

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I think a C+ cause good but not a

Lot of sensory language

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She caught my attention to the beginning of the story to the end I kinda got bored

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I would give this story an A- because the author didn't use any sensory language. She had a good plot line though.

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I give this book a A- because the author could had a stronger devolpment, language/convention, and grammar.

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I give her an A+ because she had nice dialogue.

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I would give the writer an a- because some of the grammar was not good

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What I would give this paper is a b-

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I would give her a C- because her organization was not very good. She didn't show character traits she mostly just told us

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I would give her a A- because her organization wasn't that good. She didn't tell to much or show the characteristics of the characters. Everything else was pretty good

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We would give her a 22/32 as a B or C she did a sort of good job with writing it but it felt like we were watching a movie

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I would give her an A+ I it was a good story it just didn't catch my attention.. I would recommend it to somebody else just not me

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I would give this text a 84% or a B or 27/32 because the author did good on the plot but the organization of the story isn't as good as I think it could be.