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1. I was shocked to see the door unlocked.
The doorknob turned with an eerie ease, the cold metal biting my skin. The door creaked open into silence, and a wave of dread prickled down my spine—unlocked, when it should have been sealed tight.

2. Mother was angry when she found out what happened.
Mother’s eyes flared with fury, her jaw clenched so tight it looked carved from stone. Her voice, low and trembling, cracked like thunder as she demanded answers, each syllable laced with disbelief and fire.

3. I waited anxiously for the phone call.
Time crawled. My hands fidgeted restlessly, sweat beading on my palms. The silence around me buzzed louder than any noise, and every second that passed without the phone ringing made my chest tighten like a coiled spring.

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1 my mother felt a cold feeling in her body when she saw the door to her house open

2 my mother clenched his fists tightly and eyes filled with rage with

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1. Slowly, the wooden door opened its rusty doorknob creaking as I turned it opening it with eases. I felt butterflies in my stomach, I had locked the door hadn't I? The thought of a ghost in the room sent a ripple of fear down my spine.

2.when mother found out I had broken her favourite vase, she had gotten as a wedding anniversary present, she yelled my name " Raphael " as loud as a lions roar. when I came downstairs from my room, her face was filled with displeasure and fumes flared out of her nostrils.

3. Beads of perspiration rolled down my forehead as I waited for a response from the company I had a job interview with. I paced back and forth along my living room as time seemed to slow down.

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1. The cool doorknob turn easily. I could hardly believe it was unlocked. I thought someone was inside opening the door but when I looked it was a cat playing with the doorknob 🐈

2. My mother’s eyes narrowed to my closet when she heard a noise. She slowly walked towards it. My heart palpitated wildly. As she opened the door she saw a small wild kitten 🐱 scratching the door. My mother’s ears started fuming as she turned towards me. A chill flow up my spine and my feet were rooted to the ground.😰

3. It was midnight my parents still had not come home.My palms were cold and clammy as I waited for my mother’s call. What could happen to them. My heart was melting.🫨

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1.As slow as possible, I turned the doorknob-cold and clammy. I felt a lump in my throat.I could not believe the door was unlocked. Terrified, I opened the door and saw…

2.Mother clenched her fists-her face convulsed in rage.Her nostrils flared in anger when she heard what had happened

3.Beads of perspiration trickled down my face.My heart was palpitating wildly.Fear crept into my heart while my feet kept on tapping on the floor. As time elapsed, impatience started to fill into me. “Ring, Ring!”, the phone started to ring, I shouted, finally!.

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1. My eyes and mouth were wide open, there was sudden silence. I calmed down and took a deep breath, a chill went down my spine and my jaw dropped when I saw that the door of the room was unlocked even though nobody was inside.

2. As Mother saw the ball flying as fast as wind can travel, it reached the television. Mother shot out anger like an erupting volcano, her face was as red as a tomato.

3. Beads of perspiration trickled down my neck while waiting for the important phone call from the work boss.

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1. Standing rooted to the ground with my breath, held, I realised that there was a crack in the door! “Someone is inside!” I thought. I stood still as a statue, looking dumbfounded and flabbergasted at the fact that the door was almost wide open. When I regained my breath, I shakily went in, my breathing, heavy. Beads of sweat trickled down my back. My breathing was loud yet distant, and my legs were shaking like jelly. Slowly, I made my way inside.

2. “Advay!” My mother yelled. The voice sent ripples down my spine. Her fury seemed to ricochet of the walls. Slowly, with sweat trickling down my back I made my way down to the living room, horror creeping up my spine and fear clawed at my heart. Thoughts rolled through my mind. “What was she so angry about?” I wondered worriedly. Every sentence I thought of started with “Did I do this…did I do that.” When I entered the room, my face was white as a sheet. The blood felt like it had drained out of my face. I faced the red and furious face of my mother. Her eyes were staring right through me. Steam was coming out of her ears. Her fists were clenched. Her eyes were bulging. She was shaking with rage. The purple Vein in her chin was bulging and beating. My eyes were red as a thousand sunsets, and my eyes were blurred nay the tears that were flowing like a river. Every second seemed like an eternity. My toes were fidgeting as the possibilities of punishment were endless. A chill went down my spine. The room felt cold despite it being 30 degrees outside. I kept on knocking against my thighs with my fists. Nervous, I glanced around avoiding my mother’s penetrating gaze. I had never felt more afraid then now. My hands were cold and clammy. Horrified, I asked my mother in a voice barely more than a squeak, “What did I do?” Her bellow was enough to shake the house…

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1)Mouth dropped open, the door could be opened with a slight push, a chill ran down my spine, dumbfounded, I couldn’t believe the door was unlocked.

2)Nostrils flaring in anger, clenched her fists when she found out what I had done, face convulsed in rage as she roared to me.

3)Heart palpitated wildly as I strolled around the room, legs shaking, time passes by as I waited impatiently for the ringtone of the important phone call.

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1.My mouth dropped open to see the door unlocked by itself my voice hollered back.

I tried to close to close the door but the door handle was hot like fire when I close the door.

2.My mother has lost her temper of what she has saw what my father gave to her for her birthday and that he next day my mother was still mad of what happened yesterday.

3.My hands and legs were shivering despite the warm room I was in. I could not wait for the telephone call because my mother was going to call me at newland.

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1. I was cold and clammy when I saw the metal doorknob unlock,a ripple of fear down my spine.

2. Mother lost her temper , clenched her fist tightly and smoke coming out of her ears when she found out what had happened!

3. Walking in circles around the hospital corridor wondering if my grandfather will be fine.

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1) As I cautiously tiptoe towards the house I felt a chill run down my spine, the door swung open with a creak. A gush of wind blew out making me shiver.

2) Mother’s face turned as red as a tomato and her eyes looked like they were about to pop out of their sockets as she looked at my report card.

3) Pacing up and down my room,I waited anxiously for the phone call that would determine the fate of my future career.

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1. After turning the doorknob, fear clawed at my heart.My face turned pale and I ran like a bolt of lightning

2.Mothers face convulsed in rage and her fist clenched after founding out what had happened,

3. Beads of perspiration rolled down my forehead after head waiting for the phone call

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1.The door was locked and I climbed up the stairs when suddenly ,I heard the sound of the door slowly creaking. It could only mean one thing:the door was opening. Fear clawed at my heat and my mouth dropped open in surprise.

2.Mother clenched her fist, and her face convulsed in rage.I went frantic with fear. Just by looking at her clenched fist I knew that this would not be a good talk.

3. “Ring!” “Ring!”The sound of the phone rang.It was a very important call. I picked up the phone and waited.My legs were rooted to the ground and beads of perspiration rolled down my forehead.

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1. My hand trembled as I reached out for the doorknob.Gingerly, I placed my hand on the cold metal doorknob, it creaked loudly, I cringed. Slowly, I turned the knob , the door swung open! My eyes widened in surprise ,I could not believe the door opened!

2. Mother’s eyes were filled with rage, her mouth opened and a torrent of words poured down my disheveled head. She clenched her fists tightly and gritted her teeth in a effort to control her temper. I wished I never told mother I cheated in the exam.

3. I paced around my room impatiently waiting for the phone call that yet to come.The sound of the clock was amplified in my ears, every second felt like eternity.

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1) I was shocked to see the door unlocked as I got home, a chill ran down my spine as I slowly opened the door with my sweaty hands.

2)When I came into the house I saw Mother digging papers and worksheets out of my bag, fear clawed at my heart, as mother stomped over to me.

3) Each step became louder and louder, She frowned at me as I stood there in silence, my palms where sweating, my heart was thumping wildly. Steam came out of my mothers head as she spoke each word sharp and cold like ice, when she discovered that I didn’t do my homework.

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1.Quickly, I walked up to the door. I turned the knob expecting it to resist but it turned with ease. I stood there shocked my legs trembling was someone in the house?

2.Mother‘s brows furrowed, she went as silent as a mouse. She began to speak each word grew louder and louder. By the time she finished her sentence she was already shouting.

3. My heart palpitated wildly as I waited at the door my hands were cold and clammy. My face was pale and I was shivering despite the warm weather outside

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1.I was shocked to see the door unlocked.

2.Mother was angry when she found out what happened.

3.I waited anxiously for the phone call.

Q1.the moment I saw the door unlocked,my jaw dropped and a chill went down my spine.

Q2.Mother’s eyes immediately darted at me the moment she saw her favourite vase shattered on the floor.

Q3.pacing around impatiently, I waited for the phone call.

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1). As I reached home I started to reach for my keys.When I got to the front door realised that before I could use my keys I could open the door easily.I thought that the keys were magical and could open the the door before even entering the cold metal doorknob.Then I realised that magic was not real.”Oh my goodness”I exclaimed.I was shocked when I realised someone got in.

2）After hearing something break my mother worriedly came to the living room to find out that I broke her favourite vase.With a flash of anger in her bulging eyes mother scolded me.

3)As I was seated outside the principal’s office,I waited anxiously for my turn.

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1. Mothers mouth opened up as big as a sharks mouth when she heard the news that a house was burnt down killing everyone

2. Smoke was coming out of my ears when I saw my dad hitting my mother

3. Shelly could not sleep as she was waiting for the call

Thank you for listening to

my story

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1.My mouth dropped as soon as I realised that the glass door was unlocked when I turned the cold metal handle .Consumed with panic,thinking if anyone had went in .

2.Mother stormed into my room with narrowed eyes .Clenching her fists trying to stay a little calm.her nostrills flaring with anger when she was asking me what happened.

2. Impatiently waiting for the phone call .Legs we’re shaking, waiting for my ringtone for calls.

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1. My mouth dropped open as I saw the door unlocked, a chill flowed up my spine. The doorknob felt cold in my hands as I touched it.

2. Mother lost her temper, each word she said was as sharp as a knife. Her eyes were filled with annoyance as she found out what happened.

3. I waited impatiently for the phone call. Despite being in a warm room, I shivered. My hands were cold and my heart was palpitating.

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1. Running around the mansion I had finally found the room as I turned the cold rusty metal doorknob the door slowly creaked open and a cold chill raced down my spine .

2. I was terrified as my mother turned into full on devil mode there was smoke coming out of her ears and her voice was so sharp and firm .

3. I waited as I rubbed My cold and sweaty palms . As the dentist called my name I walked to the room slowly as my legs shakes on every step.

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1) As I turned the doorknob with ease , a sudden rush of chill rush down my spine, legs rooted to the ground as I realised the door was always unlocked

2) Mothers eyes was filled with annoyance, feeling displeased as she found out about the news

3) A ripple of fear rushed down my spine, fear clawed at my heart as I waited for the phone to ring

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1. A chill ran down my spine when I saw the door unlocked my hands were cold and clammy.

2.Mother lost her temper when she found out what happened.

3.Beads of perspiration rolled down my forehead as I waited for the phone call.

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1:I was disbelief to see the door unlocked. 2:Mother lost her temper when she found out what happened. 3:I waited for the phone call to be answered, my heart was thumping wildly

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1.I stood rooted to the ground, beads of perspiration rolled down my forehead. I was scared stiff after I saw the door open.😱

2.Mother’s face convulsed in rage and was displeased when she when she found out what happened.😡

3.I waited impatiently waiting for a response for the phone call.

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1. my eyes widened, gasping in shocked upon seeing the cold metal doorknob turn easily, allowing me to go into the room.🫣😱🙀🤯

2. Mothers face was convulsed in rage and her nostrils were flaring in anger when she had discovered what had happened.😡🤬😤😠

3. Walking around back and forth, with each step getting heavier, every bit of sound made me turn around check on the phone as I waited for the phone call. 😥😣😟😞

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1.A ripple of fear went down my spine and fear clawed at my heart when I saw my big wooden house door was unlocked.

2.Mother’s nostrils were flaring in anger and she clenched her fists tightly. She was displeased when she found out what the terrible news was.

3.Beads of perspiration rolled down my forehead and I was scared stiff as I waited for the phone call that could ruin my whole career.

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1)My eyes were wide open when the metal doorknob turned easily in my hand as it let out a eerie creak a chill ran down my spine

2)Mothers eyes narrowed and her nostrils flared as her face turned bright red it was as if smoke was coming out of her ears when she discovered what had happened

3)As I waited for the phone call the ticking of the clock became louder and louder as beads of perspiration rolled down my spine and my palms flooded with sweat . My heart thumped wildly against my shaken chest

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1) Standing there, my mouth open as the door knob started to move. My heart was thumping wildly, who could it be?

2) A bright, red, colour was obvious on Mother’s face, as she shouted at her child, who used to be innocent and not as naughty as this, disappointed when she found out what had happened.

3)Waiting, I rubbed my cold and clammy hands on my shirt, waiting for the phone call. My heart thumped, threatening to fall out of my chest. What had happened to Aunt Mary?

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1. The door creaked open as I pushed against it. I had thought I had locked the door. My legs were rooted to the ground as I tried to remember if I had locked the door.

2. I looked at Mother who was shaking with rage after she found out what I had done. Each word she said was like something hitting me in the face.

3. Sweat dripping down from my hair stood as I stood in front of the telephone. My heart beating light crazy as I waited for the phone call.

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1. Entering the gate in my house I almost passed out when I saw what happened—the door in front of my house was unlocked.

2. Snapping with rage at me, Mother was displeased when she saw what happened.

3. Waiting for the phone call to be answered, my heart was thumping wildly.

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1)flabbergasted look hit my face when the cold and clammy door knob twisted and unlocked

2) Mother clenched her fists tightly, her face was convulsed in rage and eyes filled with annoyance when she heard what happened

3)I impatiently waited for the phone,I was apprehensive, my palms were cold and clammy I was frantic in fear.

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1. As I walked pass the mysterious door, it opened magically. I peeked through the door as i shrieked in horror when I saw blood on the floor.

2. Mother screamed as she saw my exam results. She fumed like a bomb about to explode.

3. My heart palpitated wildly as I waited impatiently for the telephone to ring. Beads of perspiration rolled down my cheeks.

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1 . My jaw dropped -in horror- when I saw my houses doorknob turn. Fear dripping down my spine, I went inside to investigate.

2. Mother, who had smoke coming out of her ears, lost her temper when she found out what happened.

3. I heard each second ticking on the clock as I waited for the phone call that would change my life.

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1: I was shaken when i saw the door unlocked as I-was scared as someone might have entered my house!

2:Mother s face was red as a pomagrennate and the seeds would almost burst as she found out what happened!

3: As scared as a mouse I waited for the phone call!

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1. I was shocked to see the door unlocked. 2. Mother was angry when she found out what happened.  3. I waited anxiously for the phone call.

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1. I was shocked to see the door unlocked. 2. Mother was angry when she found out what happened.  3. I waited anxiously for the phone call.

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1. The cold metal doorknob turned easily in my hand, and as it creaked open, a chill ran down my spine—I could hardly believe it was unlocked.

2. Mother’s eyes narrowed, her lips pressed into a thin line, and her voice trembled as she spoke—each word sharp and cold like ice—when she discovered what had happened.

3. My heart thudded in my chest as I paced the room, eyes flicking to the silent phone every few seconds, my palms damp with sweat while I waited for the call.

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I was shocked to see the door unlocked.

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