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Strengths:

• The language use is clear and understandable.

• ⁠The teachers use simple language to demonstrate the teaching.

• ⁠Both teachers have loud and clear voice.

• The language used is simple and easy to understand, appropriate for the students in the class to understand quickly and with ease

• Pronunciation was clear and the tone used was casual and comforting, stimulating students to learn and participate in answering questions.

• Most slip-ups and mistakes were quickly corrected

• Both teachers have good voice projections.

• Their voices are loud and clear, and easily understood by the students.

To improve:

• Voice projections at certain parts can be stronger so overall can work on a consistent voice projection.

• ⁠Room for improvement on pronunciation and enunciation so that it's sharper.

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FARAH NAJWA BINTI YUSRAM (162619), ⁠KARTINA BINTI SYED ABDUL JALIL (163051)

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FARAH NAJWA BINTI YUSRAM (162619), ⁠KARTINA BINTI SYED ABDUL JALIL (163051)

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FEEDBACK FOR LEARNING OBJECTIVE

Strengths:

1. The lesson objectives are short and easy to understand.

2. The objectives are suitable for the students’ proficiency level.

To Improve:

1. The second objective can be written in a measurable way to better align with the SMART framework.

2. The first objective could also mention how students will demonstrate their understanding to make it clearer for assessment purposes.

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OLIVIA ANN ANAK SIMON (161319), SYAMILAH SA'DIYAH BINTI SARLI (162169), SITI NABILAH HUDA BT MOHD SERARUDIN (162414)

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OLIVIA ANN ANAK SIMON (161319), SYAMILAH SA'DIYAH BINTI SARLI (162169), SITI NABILAH HUDA BT MOHD SERARUDIN (162414)

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Strengths:

1. The lesson aligns with content standards empha sizing engagement with literary texts and communication of ideas clearly, with specific learning standards targeting detailed explanation of story development and main points of arguments.

2. The content covers core literary elements: plot, characters, and theme, which are central to understanding and engaging with fiction. This approach encourages students to go beyond surface reading and think critically about the story.

3. The “Twist the Tale” activity is a great idea as it encourages students to use their creativity while demonstrating a strong understanding of the original storyline by rewriting an alternate ending based on a modified character trait.

4. Collaborative pair work is used for deeper engagement: one pair explores additional themes, another describes main characters with textual support, and a third analyzes key plot components. The pairs present their findings, promoting interactive and student-centered learning.

To improve:

1. It would be beneficial for teachers to include character trait slides rather than only explaining them verbally. Not all students can focus or retain information effectively through listening alone, especially in mixed-ability classrooms.

2. Teachers should consider offer extra support during the activity 2 by brainstorming ideas as a class or providing a template for alternate endings.

*All in all, both teachers did a great job

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Strengths:

The objectives are specific, measurable and aligned with the learning standards

All activities include pair work and interactive presentations that promote peer collaboration and higher engagement. The strategy allows for shared learning and reduces pressure on individual students.

A variety of teaching tools using canva slides, youtube video, posters, and random name pickers helps make the lesson visually engaging and technologically enriched.

To improve:

While activities are rich, the ‘While’ section is dense with multiple sub-tasks. There’s a risk of rushing or sacrificing depth in discussion. Consider pacing the lesson by simplifying some tasks.

“Differentiate by the type and amount of support” is mentioned but not clearly demonstrated in the lesson. Teacher might elaborate on how they will support students who need help during the writing task.

The use of a name picker is a fun touch, but reflection might be richer if guided with prompts. For example, “What surprised you about the story?”