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Wed. Zoom - 8 PM to 11 PM
Email Susan Before Friday for conflictin schedule/complications
Saturday Zoom - 3 to 6 PM; can go to late night
Sunday Zoom - 8 PM to 11 PM

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1. cut down unnecessary scenes after midpoint, because there are more than one scene in each paragraph. Will be too long for a 30 page script.

2. CEO/Sis combination, cuts down conflict to three and supporting to two - four dependent on the depth of Alex and Sam

3. Sis plotline will be a Ghost in the Machine, reconciliation as Sis is dead prior to beginning of narrative, interest is feigned for the goal of replacing and turning the masses into a zombie state (Lines with CEO's goals); Fake Opponent Ally who'll be more venomous at the end of the story

4. Ay's character will be controlled, but only sofar as it can be in the tumultuous dystopia

5. Conflict and Finale will have Ay and Bi help with Sis to go against CEO, but lose Sis in the process due to her makeup being already too dead to reconstitute.

6. Closing Image will have Ay to be more resolute as she begins to follow in Sis's footsteps, trying to find a way to get her Sister back from the depths of cyberspace

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INT. AY'S ROOM/HOME - MORNING
Open to Ay's perspective, sees the gray and desolate city before her

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Ay's dynamic with her parents is introduced as she goes down the stairs towards the rest of the family. Her caring but lethal cook Mother greets as they cook for the tech wiz King Father, who came in after having to fix the car.

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She looks into the family house, noticing the much distant Sis as she laments her absence.

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Ay looks onto the highway, finding a dangerous hoverboarding gang nearly run them over as she laments their misspent youth

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Ay is given free transport by her parents to make it to the city, wherein they'll prepare a feast for the returning Sis. Both her parents are delighted, much to Ay's begrudges.

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INT/EXT. HIGHWAY - MIDDAY (10:00)
The radio plays as the family leaves and enters the highway to the central business district. It rants and raves about the nature of cybernetics and dehumanization of the corporate hegemonic ruling over the dystopia

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What measure is a non human? And can we trust one aother when we can't even trust ourselves (Identity and Companionship/Trust)

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As Ay's family approaches the school where she need to be, a bright flash of white suddenly sends the car flying into the distance!

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INT. HOSPITAL - MIDDAY
Ay is placed into a major accident as she is left within an inch of her life in the aftermath. Waking to a hospital, she's caught up in the events.

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A doctor appears next to her to explain her predicatment as it's revealed her body is fully robotic as a result of her accident destroying body and mind. Horrified by what she is now, she's consoled by her family who come in, injured but alive, reinforcing her worth

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INT. HOSPITAL - AFTERNOON
A fortuitous CEO comes in as sponsor to help Ay recover in light of these unfortunate times, much to the relief and eventual concern of the family (Fake Ally-Opponent foreshadow), as Ay reckons with this information, Sis steps into frame.

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INT. HOSPITAL - EVENING
Ay now remains her reflection pointing to herself. She is unrecognizable from just a week ago, with. Despite the experimental body ensuring it would feel just like before, was it really the same? Was she the same person overall?

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INT. AY'S ROOM - AFTERNOON
Ay is discharged from the hospital as she adjusts to the new normal. She is disturbed by the new maintenance her robotic body requires, though her family doesn't mind. Oddly her parents become far more distant than before, much to her confusion and frustration

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Comes to a head when one night after overhearing muffled arguments, Sis comes in to console her and begin to connect after being separated for a long time. They bond over the course of the intermittence as Ay's relationship inversely degrades with her family

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Sis and Ay bond as she is established as a distinguished scientist and whistleblower for a resistance, though she swears Ay to secrecy. As they talk however, Ay notes that Sis is implying that the body transfer by the CEO was not done out of altruism. Disturbed, but nonenthelless assured by her Sis's confidence. Ay sleeps to the dream of a shadow watching her.

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EXT. SCHOOL Midday to Afternoon

Ay goes by train as she finds herself scared to go by car after the accident, she reconnects with Sam as she gets sidetracked by Sis

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Ay's memory gaps starts to happen as she fails to remember her stay back in school during train rides (look at reflection of herself), hinting Bi's appearance.

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Memory gaps and blackouts keep happening as Ay wakes up in a strange bathroom with unrecognizable makeup and clothing, participating in a party hosted by people she never hangout with. Making sense of her of her surroundings, she gets a call from a popular stranger Alex in her class calling her by a different name. Then she notices her relfection go still even after she moves

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Ay freezes up in a panic attack and introduces character Bi. She attempts to struggle but finds herself unable to talk or move, like a nightmare she can't wake up from

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INT. AY'S ROOM  - MORNING
After finally getting up Ay tries to recount the events of her "nightmare", she finds herself in a position where her friend Sam is far more distant. As she goes to Sis for consolation, she finds her clothes matching Bi, the stranger who took over her body.

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Now realizing that her night wasn't a hallucination, Ay investigates her contacts and pieces together the stranger who took over. Angered that her body was took over, she gets to be more paranoid of when she blacks out, sabotaging her other's efforts to get outside

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INT. AY'S ROOM -  MIDNIGHT
After weeks of keeping Bi at bay, Ay's family confronts her as she attempts to keep face that everything's fine. They reveal to her that thanks to Sis's snooping they the CEO being responsible for the accident, what's more, Bi's actions is revealed to be known thanks to her frequent activity in the net.

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INT./EXT.TRAIN STATION - EVENING
Ay is utterly horrified by the concept of her body's nature creating this situation, breaking down as she feels like to her family, unknowingly allowing Bi to finally take control. Bi looks on to Ay's family with content, but wistfully explaining she'll be separating permenently, much to the shock of everyone

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EXT. HIGHWAY - EVENING

Lost and alone, Bi walks over to find herself seeking the aid of Alex, trying to make sense and feel less estranged to the people around her. Alex finds her, as they’re recruited to chase against a cargo ship containing supplies that could be allocated to the people outside the highrises of the central district.

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EXT. HIGHWAY - 12:00 AM
Giving chase in hoverboards, Bi takes front and center in the operation, taking on risky maneuvers from Ay’s perceptive memories but Bi finds herself taking too much danger on her own, nearly getting Alex and his crew decimated in the process. She, in an act of selflessness and instinct, pushes herself in the way as Ay’s caring persona takes over. Her body acting on its own without her knowledge to destroy the ship out the sky with deadly accuracy. Though the cargo became a smoldering wreck, the crew is aghast by Bi's reckless streak, deeming her too much of a potential disaster to work with effectively.

As she is left behind, she finds Ay’s reflection return once more as Ay finally pushes through to find her way home. Though not hurt physically, both are exhausted by each other’s presence at this point, wanting nothing to do with each other. Sis, Dad and Mom finally find and reconvene with Ay after receiving a message of her location and attempt to console her. Though unable to reason at first, through fear of what Bi might do to them, both parents explain that neither side has done anything to harm them in any way. They’ll both support Ay and Bi no matter what it takes. But suddenly, Ay’s hand shakes out of their control. Feeling Bi’s presence during the pep talk, she demands to stop it. However, she discovers that the other consciousness is not doing the action. Her body goes stiff once more, though this time she gets to see that her body is moving far more robotically than she would like.

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EXT. HIGHWAY - 12:00 AM
Giving chase in hoverboards, Bi takes front and center in the operation, taking on risky maneuvers from Ay’s perceptive memories but Bi finds herself taking too much danger on her own, nearly getting Alex and his crew decimated in the process. She, in an act of selflessness and instinct, pushes herself in the way as Ay’s caring persona takes over. Her body acting on its own without her knowledge to destroy the ship out the sky with deadly accuracy. Though the cargo became a smoldering wreck, the crew is aghast by Bi's reckless streak, deeming her too much of a potential disaster to work with effectively.

As she is left behind, she finds Ay’s reflection return once more as Ay finally pushes through to find her way home. Though not hurt physically, both are exhausted by each other’s presence at this point, wanting nothing to do with each other. Sis, Dad and Mom finally find and reconvene with Ay after receiving a message of her location and attempt to console her. Though unable to reason at first, through fear of what Bi might do to them, both parents explain that neither side has done anything to harm them in any way. They’ll both support Ay and Bi no matter what it takes. But suddenly, Ay’s hand shakes out of their control. Feeling Bi’s presence during the pep talk, she demands to stop it. However, she discovers that the other consciousness is not doing the action. Her body goes stiff once more, though this time she gets to see that her body is moving far more robotically than she would like.

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After encountering her family again, Ay and Bi get seized as their body begins to lash violently against their parents. As both now perceive each other, they argue about control and blame until

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14. INT. Mindscape

Facing difficult situation under the possibility of being erased by CEO, Ay and Bi discovered their happiness sharing this body together. They reconcile and bonded.

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15. INT. Garage

With help from Mom and Dad and Sis, they were able to reverse engineering the signal and cut down the interception of the body. Family comes to a temporary relief with sorrow and happiness.

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16. EXT. Outskirts

Sis hacked into the facility network and pulled out a navigator for Ay and Bi while Mom and Dad distracted CEO. However, Sis exposed herself accidentally and was held detained by the security guards, and Mom and Dad as well.

17. EXT. Compound Outskirts

Ay and Bi was captured and reunited with Sis, Mom, and Dad in the facility prison cell. Dialogues of sharing inner feelings and joint experiences, family cheered up and decided to work together to escape with their intelligence and strength.

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16. INT. Compound Depths

After wading through the hordes of machines through some fast thinking and resourcefulness, Ay and Bi helped Sis to avoid robotic guards while Sis focusing on hacking the exit. Sis used herself to earn time for Ay and Bi to escape, but corners herself with the machines. Sis cried for help, Mom and Dad appeared and recused her.

17. INT. Mindscape
Ay and Bi running away from machines but CEO found out.

CEO putting up automatic defenses and forces Ay and Bi narrowly avoid death. Just as Ay is about to be cornered, Bi is able to disconnect the defenses of the compound off of the CEO’s control, as the two reconvene to stop the emitter disabling their body in the real world.

18. INT. Compound Depths

However, an explosion can be heard as the failsafe of the building activates, Ay and Bi and the surviving allies barely manage to dodge most, but were caught within the edge of the blast. Fading to white, both Ay and Bi think about what could’ve been.

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19. INT. Kitchen

Ay goes into hiding with Sis and her parents, but with the knowledge, she is able to expose CEO's plans from coming to fruition to the public. The family finally united and had a Thanksgiving Dinner together in a secretive cabin located in a faraway desert.

(Idea that ordinary people like them can change the world a little bit but on a larger scale, the world keeps rotating and nothing really changed. However, there's hope.)