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shot 1 + 2 = Backwards dolly shot

shot 3 + 4 + 5 = Overhead

shot 6 + 7 = Mid shot

shot 8 = Long / establishing shot

1. gmar cooking

2. setting table

3. ship tilting

4. ship hit by wave

5. long shot of ocean

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The camera in your storyboard does not move. Everything is composed very central - a good exercise would be drawing from different perspectives and exploring camera angles.

Maybe the camera could show the space of the kitchen and the table from a different angle? Maybe space we are shown could be deeper? Etc.

Keep analyzing camera angles :)

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Not much, but I do like the choice of the first shot and people entering the room.

Later on it would be useful to get a close-up of grandma so we have an idea of what is happening in the room.

Keep thinking about camera positioning. Maybe it could be in front of the grandma, instead of so far back in the room?

Maybe it could be closer to the ground? Or moved to left or right?

Try to challenge how you position camera :)

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Great work!

Drawings are clear and funny. Good idea with giving the viewer more time with the ship as well! And the tilt of the ship matching the tilt of the table - that is really interesting and great choice!

I would elongate the dolly from the second shot and did not do an overhead shot. It losses the interesting feeling that you have build in your story.

What would happen if you kept the camera close to the table and at the opposite end through the 3,4 and 5?

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Great work! And lovely use of tone!

I really like how clear the staging of each shot is. But if you take a look at the shot progression, maybe the 3 shot could have been set up in a different way? How could we position camera so the space is more interesting? Maybe across the room, so we can see where grandma is coming from clearly? Think about how can you can work with your space so it supports the story more.

And that fall looks painful! Practice some people falling ;)

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You guys created visual illustrations for the story we have talked about. But now, how can you work with your camera (your eyes) so the story becomes more interesting visually? Can you change perspective of the scenes? Think about different perspectives and how can you change it so it helps with the storytelling.

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Well, we have only one shot in here.

But the perspective is a bit off. It could be an interesting choice - to keep the space flat, but we want to make sure that it is a choice.

How else could you introduce the grandma?

Maybe the camera could move around the scene a bit? How else could you stage that?

Practice drawing perspective :) That is a great thing to master!

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The first shot is quite drastic but why?

When you take a look at it there is an imbalance of space - grandma take sup 1/3 of the screen, but we don't see anything ese but the floor. Maybe there is a different way to introduce the audience to the grandma and to show that there is a lot of space around her?

She has nice and clear design, and I am sad we don't have continuation! I would love to see what is going to happen after the door opens! Good job with building the interest :)

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We don't have much to work with but!

Think abut how the thumbnails are composed - where did you place the camera? Maybe grandma can be shown from a different angle? Maybe the camera can move around her? The use of space is very flat, but it does not have to be. How else could you introduce grandma to your audience?

I do like the shot of the table. It takes good amount of space!