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I'm proud about the evidence that I used in my essay, I think it's really strong and helps prove my claim. I want to work more on my reasoning because I don't think I did my best. Next time when we write an essay I will work harder on my reasoning.

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I tried out using evidence that people brought up during the philosophical chairs activity and it helped out instead of having me look for my evidence. I'm proud about how much text evidence I was able to cite in my essay to prove my point. I want to work on being able to shorten down my evidence, so my paragraphs don't become really long. I'm a little confused about when I'm citing something from the text and there's dialogue, do I use " for the dialogue or something else?

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I tried out not making it so serious but to try and write the essay as if I were talking to someone, which made it a little easier to write. I'm proud about my grammar and tone because I think I did really well on it. I want to work on not using so many commas in a sentence because I noticed that I did that a lot which made some of my sentences longer than they should've been. I'm unsure on when I can use ; in a sentence and how to use it?

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I tried out getting straight to the point in my essay to clearly show my evidence and reasoning. I think I did really well on my conclusion because I usually have a really hard time writing it and typically only restate my pieces of evidence. I want to work on keeping my evidence shorter and not as lengthy, and become better at wording. I'll try to achieve that by only choosing evidence that is most important to use and try to not repeat so many words.

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Proposed grade: A
Rationale - I believe that I deserve an A because I think I have achieved 2/3 of the exceeding standards. In my essay I used extensive evidence to prove my claim and reasoning to make further connections in the story with complex ideas. I put a lot of effort and time into it which showcases my motivation to try and improve and learn the material.
Goals - I want to try improving my analysis skills, to find more ideas out of a text

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I tried out using others ideas to add to my own. I'm proud of how far I was able to develop the theme instead of just having a simple one. I want to work on finding the theme or starting to think of possible themes earlier in the story. I plan on making more notes of certain things I notice while reading to meet my goal.

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I tried out taking notes of how characters reacted and what actions they'd take while reading. I'm proud about how many times I was able to see a change in the characters multiple times for each character. I want to work on finding indirect changes in character. I plan on achieving this by taking notes on subtle actions that the characters make.

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I tried out asking questions that were a bit complex, and it helped keep the discussion flowing and get different ideas from everyone. I'm proud of how much I was able to talk in the discussion rather than stay silent most of the time. I want to improve on finding more things that I can bring up during a discussion. I plan on achieving that by thinking harder on parts of the story and try to come up with questions that revolve around it.

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We tried out recording a podcast on our phones and splitting up the videos between ourselves, it didn't really work out well and got hard putting together the podcast. I'm proud how I was actively keeping the conversations going in the podcast instead of letting the others do most of the talking. For improvement, the audio quality could have been much better, as well as the editing process. I plan on improving by testing out how audio sounds before recording and keeping the recordings on one device so it is easier to edit the podcast.

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I tried out trying to limit everything I wanted to say to make sure it fit within the time limit, and it was a lot harder than expected so I had to cut out a lot from my speech. I think I did really well on how I brought up my evidence to prove my point in the speech. I want to work on filtering out the unnecessary parts of my writing. I plan on doing that by reading my writing out loud and figuring out if it is needed information or if it's just a repeated idea.

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I tried out reading my speech in a clearer way so you could understand what I was saying instead of stuttering or murmuring my sentences, it was kinda hard but I think I did well. I'm proud that I managed to fit my whole speech within 4 minutes. I want to work on not running out of breath so much in the middle of sentences. I plan on achieving this by not reading so fast and taking deep breaths at the end of sentences.

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I asked a partner what their ideas were for the theme and it helped give me an idea of my own themes. I'm proud of how developed my themes are and how they're a little unique. In the future I want my themes to be even more unique. I can achieve that by thinking harder about the theme and analyzing the story more.

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I tried comparing the texts from each other and it helped me find similarities in the writing. I'm proud that I was able to use the author's choices and connect it to the theme. I want to be able to find more similarities in author's choices in texts and how they relate to the theme. I can achieve that by paying more attention to the structure of texts.

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I tried actually finishing the prep document before beginning writing my essay and it really helped me finish my essay on time. I'm proud of how much evidence I was able to find and how I finished most of the document. My areas of future growth would be finding more evidence for the author's choices. I can achieve that by reading the texts closely and finding implicit evidence.

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I think the topic of my slides and making sure I wasn't focusing too much on my computer helped me have a better presentation. I'm proud that I was able to help convey my information with body movements and focus on the audience instead of my computer. I want to work more on my tone. A plan I have for next time would be to be more prepared and have a plan on what to do during my presentation/performance.

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I think it helped me doing the sub-assignments to collect information for my project. I'm proud of how I was able to connect my information from interviews and articles to each other and to my research question, and using relevant articles that aren't outdated. I want to work on finding more data for my topic. Next time to achieve this goal is to look harder for sources of information other than articles.

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So far you’re the only English teacher who I actually like… I’ll never forget about you 🫡