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1_Modern corporate social responsibility promotes enterprise innovation and long-term value creation-- Represented by ESG

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1.Merge the last two paragraphs into one

2. Replace some less typical enterprise cases

3. Modify the title

4. Modify the description in the introduction section

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I modified the cover and the title

I adjusted and merged the first and second paragraphs

I added subheadings

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Title: Kept original; will ensure clarity and relevance.

Word count: The qualified word count has been reached; will trim excess if needed.

Core texts:Used both but will deepen analysis and citations.

ntroduction:Simplified overview; added essay outline.

Alignment to plan: Change the beginning part to make the definition of CSR more prominent

Grammar/Vocab: Revise some again to make it more like what I wrote myself