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YEAR 3 FEEDBACK

We can see the good use of phonic sounds and common exception words.

We question the lack of any punctuation?

With the clear and correct use of full stops and capital letters, we would agree with this being a 4. ;)

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Tense perfect throughout.
Clear time order.

We question the "excellent vocabulary" - the word 'put' is repeated for example.

Some inconsistency between capital letters and full stops.

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YEAR 3 FEEDBACK

Agree with grading

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YEAR 3 FEEDBACK

Could this be a 2 rather than a 3?

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Should this be a 1 if there are no words?

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YEAR 3 FEEDBACK

Detailed writing, obvious flair for writing. Clearly a gifted child.