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1. I need to add interesting details that support my star ideas.

2. I need to have a minimum of 3-star ideas that are focused on my topic sentence.

3. I need to Improve my conclusion sentences.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to add more transition words to my star idea sentences.
2. I need to improve my sentence structure by focusing my ideas on my topic and avoid rambling.
3. I need to work on writing better topic sentences.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to read my sentences for punctuation and capitalization (Proper Nouns)

2. I need to add more details to support my star ideas.

3. I want to use better words (Find more interesting words - Use a Thesaurus!)

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to work on run-on sentences, by focusing on sentence structure (Simple, Compound, and Complex)

2. I need to use transition words in the right places.

3. I need to focus details on my star ideas.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to read my paragraph for punctuation and capitalization.

2. I need to add details that connect to my star ideas.

3. I need to use transition words correctly.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to write better conclusion sentences (restate the topic Sentence – using an alternate strategy GTA, #, OP 2+2, or L)

2. I need to use different transition words. (I don’t want to sound repetitive)

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to read my paragraphs for capitalization and punctuation.

2. I need to add more details that are focused on my star ideas.

3. When printing by hand, I need to be neater.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to use different transition words rather than the same ones.
2. I need to have better conclusion sentences.
3. I need to support my topics with interesting ideas.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to write better conclusion sentences.

2. I need to read my writing for punctuation.

3. I need to add details to back up my star ideas.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to shorten some of my sentences by focusing on the structure of my sentences.

2. I need to work on my conclusion sentences.

3. I need to add details that support my star ideas.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to add more details.

2. I need to use better transition words.

3. I need to focus my star ideas on the topic.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to read my paragraphs for spelling and capitalization

2. I need to improve my topic sentences (Use a strategy – GTA, #, L, 2+2, or OP)
3. I need to use transition words in my writing.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to read my writing for punctuation.
2. I need to read my writing for spelling.
3. I need to work on writing better topic sentences.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to use a variety of transition words (Don’t be repetitive)
2. I need to add more details.
3. I need to use better conclusion sentences.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to use a variety of sentence structures (Simple, Compound & Complex) to improve the strength of my sentences.

2. I need to add details that support my star ideas.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to make sure my detail sentences make sense. (Use a strategy GTA, #, 2+2, L, or OP)

2. I need to make sure I proof read my work for punctuation

3. I need to have a clear conclusion sentence.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to include interesting ideas in my writing.
2. I need to use transition words.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to focus my star ideas on my topic and use details to support my star ideas.

2. I need use more interesting words. (Word Choice)

3. I need to use appropriate transition words.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to work on my conclusion sentences.

2. I need add more details.

3. I need to remember to include a topic sentence.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to start writing conclusion sentences/improve them.

2. I need to focus my details on my topic. (Don’t Ramble!)

3. I need to use commas where they are needed.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to work on focusing my star ideas on my topic.

2. I need to begin each of my paragraphs with topic sentence

3. I need to end each of my paragraphs with a conclusion sentence

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to work on my conclusion sentences.
2. I need to add details.
3. I need to read my work for punctuation.

# data[].attributes.body
1. I need to focus my ideas and not ramble!
2. I need to work on the structure of my sentences.
3. I need to include improve how I conclude my paragraphs.