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I wonder what happened?

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That story was a real roller coaster of emotions! Scary, then not scary, then scary again!

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That is a great cliffhanger! I love the story!
-Gracie

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I like how it was very scary!

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I like how you had a cliffhanger!

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I LOVED your story!

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Lots of diolauge that shows how the problem!

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I like how you start off with a lot of scary and compelling paragraphs!

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Terrific job!! I love the description you included and how you build up the suspense!! Great ending too. It leaves us all wondering...

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I loved your story! You included such great details to describe 123 Halloween Road! I like how you created the character of Jack. Your story was filled with suspense and I kept wondering what is going to happen??

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your story was great! i love the cliff hanger

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i love how you added the "so watch your back" part at the end. your story is great.

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this is my story and i like it! Lol

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First, I have to say that I love the plot of your story..."the Edgewood Ghost!!" I like that you are keeping the tale of the Edgewood Ghost alive:) You all did a great job of developing the sequence of events with lots of detail. Your story kept me on the edge of my seat. Great ending!! Watch your back!!!

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I like it

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I loved your story

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I loved the part when everyone disappear
that part made it scary.

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Supr scare

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Very scary!

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Great story! I'm not sure who's scarier...the Edgewood Ghost or Ms. Smith! I'm pretty sure I saw Dylan and the Edgewood Ghost hanging out in the Rat Room downstairs. Great job!!!!

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Loved the story

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Love it

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This was a really great story :) :) Happy Halloween

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It was scary

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I loved your story

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Loved everything about the story :) :) Happy Halloween

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Loved the title and what the dad looked like :) :) Happy Halloween

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The story was great i loved every second of it :) :) Happy Halloween

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Great story!! We loved the live action shots. Very spooky. We can't believe the dad was burying the mom!!!! 😱 😭 ☠️

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wow great story

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cliffhanger

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I love your story, and how you described everything so welll

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I really like your intro and your description

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I love how you acted like it was you that was there

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I like how you described every little detail that made the house spooky and scary

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🏫 school is more scary then it was before!

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I like the story and there is a great cliffhanger at the end

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I like the drawings, sound affects, and talking

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I loved the sound effects and the story! The cilff hanger was great!

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I liked where you said that no one was in the whole entire town. That was creepy

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Nice job with sound effects

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i like the drawings

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I liked the cliff hanger at the end, now I want to know more

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the story was good

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i love the story

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I really liked it But you stayed on one picture for too long

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Awesome nice cliffhanger

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Waittttt is our school haunted?!!!  🕸

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it was very scary

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I thought your story was awesome, The sound effects were great.

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Kind of creepy. Especially when I found out that the legend was about two people named Evan and Jack!

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I loved the story line and the drawings especially the ghost

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it was funny and a little scary.

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Nice drawings. You guys also spoke loudly and clearly

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I loved the theme

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I loved your story! It was so spooky, and the toilet flushing sound effect was great!

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Awesome

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i liked the story! i also like how you chose to do the edgewood ghost

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i liked the story! i also like how you chose to do the edgewood ghost

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very nice

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Why did you do this to MOMMMMMMM!?!? 💔 😱 😭 ☠️

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it was weird when the dad was burying the mom

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The story was great I got spooked when the dad buried the mom

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I can't believe the dad was burying the mom!!!😭

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I lved the sound effects the pictures, and the editing! But it was sooo scary!

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cool story

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it is very very scary

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So spooky!

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i was so surprised by the ending great job

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WHUT dad bury mom!

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i loved your story soooo much it was really scary

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I love the funny clif hanger and  the trip was super funny!

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I like how at the end the dad was burying the mom, I was shocked

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I like how you described the graveyard and the house.

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I loved the story line, discriptive language, and the editing! The drawings were fabulous, and the story was great!

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There was a mix of emotions that all Halloween stories should have
Great job!

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I am soooooooo glad I do not like haunted house's! ☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️ I want to eat all my candy myself!

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I liked your story and the drawings, the sound effects were freaky.

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Nice story plot . Nice drawings good edits funny story.

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good story

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great plot

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Awesome

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Sooooo spooky!!! I still can't believe the ending... it leaves me with so many questions. Great job!! I really like the different characters and your narration!!

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This story is awesome!! Great dialog!

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I like your details and how spooky it was

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Scary!

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best story ever!

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AMAZING JOB, I REALLY LIKED IT

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I love your story!!!!!!!

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I liked how it was a cliff hanger. I was amazing, great job!

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Great story!! Love the art work too!