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The Quartering act required the colonies to provide barracks and supplies to the British troops.

The British forced the colonist to accept it the Quartering act because they were protecting the French from the colonist

The Quartering act was passed on June 2, 1765 against

Devin Hassett

Required colonists not colonies to provide barracks

do not include it in the sentence

Act must be capitalized

protecting the French from the colonists?

no periods

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Mercy Otis Warren  wrote a play  called The Adulateur. it is bassed on a tragdy, thomas hooker who pretended to like the colonist why'll actaully he was working against the colonist. before she wrote this paly she had wrote meny of plays before but her maost famous one would have to be the Adulateur.

Matthew Battista

The play that you were supposed to write about was called The Blockheads.

You need to use spell check. Click on the words that are underlined.

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In Boston early summer 1765 a group of shopkeepers and artisans who called themselves the Stamp act

The first widely known act of the Sons of Liberty took place on August , 14 1765 when an effigy of Andrew Olliver(who was commisioned distrubutor of stamps in Massuchusetts was found hanging on Newbury street along with a large boot near his foot with a devil crawling out of it.

Their most popular objective was to force stamp distrubutors in the colony to resign

The two men that could generate public attention for the hanging were Benjamin Edes and John Gill

Steven Grenier

The first sentence does not make sense. Do you mean that they called themselves the Sons of Liberty?

Newbury Street

You did not put a period at the end of any of the sentences.

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Revenue law passed by the British Parliament during the ministry of George Grenville. The first direct tax to be levied on the American colonies, it required that all newspapers, pamphlets, legal documents, commercial bills, advertisements, and other papers issued in the colonies bear a stamp.

These are the type of peoplee it affected the most: businessmen, merchants, journalists, lawyers, and other powerful persons. Among these were Samuel Adams, Christopher Gadsden, Patrick Henry, John Dickinson, John Lamb, Joseph Warren, and Paul Revere

Tyler Lopez Blue 8-b

peoplee should be people

A revenue law passed by the British Parliament

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Daniel Boone was an explorer, and frontiers man.

He became famous because of his amazing explorations.

Daniel Boone was the founder of Kentucky.

He started exploring Kentucky in 1767.

While he was exploring, he went threw the wilderness road, the Appalachian Mountains, and the Cumberland Gap.

Boone also fought in the Revolutionary war.

Adriana Aceto

The sentences are choppy. They should flow smoothly when they are read.

Wilderness Road

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George Grenville tried to lower domestic taxes for the colonies.

Introduced the Stamp Act in 1765. America Protested and it

Eventually led to The War of Independence.

Justin Irwin

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John Adams was a lawyer and successfully defended

the British soldiers involved in the Boston Massacre in

1770. During 1770-1774 John Adams served in the

Massachusetts legislature and was elected a member

of the Continental congress. John Adams, Benjamin

Franklin, and John Jay created the Treaty of Paris

officially ending the American Revolution.

congress should be Congress

Jenna Izzi

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He secretly advised England to move forcefully and to restrain the colony. Hutchinson was hated from the people of Boston after he supported tea taxes on the colonists. After the Boston Tea Party thousands of English solders flooded the city to enforce the rule of law and he was widely hated in his homeland

Jake Drohen

You didn't finish his name

what colony?

hated by the people

end at the tea taxes

You keep repeating the same phrase about widely hated

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Tried to lower domestic taxes at the colonies he introduced the Stamp Act in 1765. America protested and it eventually turned into the War of Independence.

Justin Irwin

This is in the wrong font.

He tried to lower domestic taxes..

You left out that he was a British prime minister.

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King George was the man who lost the American colonies. He did not develop the policies sent to The colonies, such as the Stamp act and the Townshend act of 1763, which taxed goods such as anything made with paper, tea and other goods. George opposed the colonies bid for independence. King George III was not the support of the war, Parliament was.

You cannot call him George

The last sentence does not make sense.

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The Sugar Act was passed in 1764. This act made trade more difficult by making traders fill out confusing papers. The Sugar Act taxed wine, sugar, molasses, and other important goods.

Mariela Calabro

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In English and American colonial history, a general search warrent

issued by superior provincial courts to assist the British government in enforcing trade and navigation laws.

Such warrents authorized custom house officers to search any house for smuggled goods without specifying

either the house or the goods. Despite an eloquent attack the writs were continued.

Sarah Cardinal

Eloquent is not one of your words. You can not take someone else's words

These sentences do not flow very well.

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On February 6th George Grenville rose into Parlaiment to offer the 55 resolutions of his stamp bill. This act put taxes on items such as wills,diplomas,marriage papers and also newspaper and playing cards. this colonists did not like this they started riots and it was eventually canceled.

The title should be capitalized

Stamp bill

February 6th of what year?

Grenville rose into Parliament? Where was he?

Parliament not Parlaiment

The first word in a sentence should capitalized.

The sentence does not make sense.

The picture is too small.

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The proclamation is devoted to the subject of Indians and Indian lands. Its also made an a imaginary line that stopped colonists from settling west. That made the colonists angry.

Andrew Dumas

It created an imaginary line along the of the crest of the Appalachian Mountains that indicated how far west the settlers could live.

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James Otis was one of the earliest

patriots.

He was a lawyer fighting against the

acts, trying to find a legal way to get rid of the acts.

Otis was the one that started the quote

"no taxation without representation".

-Sarkis Avakyan

Patriots

What acts are you talking about?

What speech did he use that quote in?

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Series of  1767 laws named for Charles Townshend, British Chancellor

of  the Exchequer (Treasurer). These laws placed new taxes on

glass, lead, paints, paper, and tea.  The colonists reaction was the same

as the Sugar Act and Stamp Act. Britain repealed all taxes except the one

on Tea.
Mario Perretta
A series of laws

The colonists reaction to what?

tea not Tea

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Samuel Adams was a strong opponent of British Taxation

and he served as a legislature of Massachusetts

from 1765 to 1774. After Samuel Adams was the

state legislature,  he served as a delegate

to the continental congress. He was also against the

Stamp Act and Sugar Act and played a huge roles

in planning the Boston Tea Party.

Sophia Montanaro

Taxation should not be capitalized

legislator not legislaure

legislator he served in the Continental Congress

role not roles

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In the days of rising tension between the American colonies and Britain, as brutal taxes were enforced, colonists came up with an idea. They urged all merchants to stop buying British goods too send a message of ascendance and Independence. At the helm of this turmoil stood the Sons of Liberty. This boycott is especially famous due to it's aggressive tone ant the famous act of the Boston Tea party, in which protesters destroyed almost 200 crates of english tea

Nathan Smulling

Boston Tea Party

English tea.

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in May 1763 Pontiac and his allies attacked british forts and settlements throughout the area

Nearly half a dozen western british forts were destroyed

The british finally defeated Pontiac's forces in early august at a battle near fort pitt

Sean Conley

What area?

British should be British

No periods at the end of sentences

The British finally defeated Pontiac's forces in early August at a battle near Fort Pitt.