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Audience:
- What do you know about person/group
- What does group/person do?
- What do you have in common (political persuasion, interests, values, beliefs)
- Same desires

I want to talk to mayor langfelder. His daughter is in my class and we are working on the type of same projects so I think it would be interesting to see his point of view.

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overuse of to be
Example:
The end of the article states how we should move towards green energy

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Sentences where the subject receives the action, instead of performing it.
Example:
Having a stable mind, body, and secure employment are considered prerequisites in obtaining housing by many

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The sentence starts out using one kind of sentence structure but ends with another
Example:
The article mentions the war on drugs was designed to incarcerate African- Americans

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turned around backward
Example:
In an online book published by Ellucian, the outline shows six ways to boost retention and education in schools

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Using two forms of the same word in one sentence
Example:
Lake Springfield was constructed in the 1930s for two and a half million dollars. It is a source of water and a coolant for the City Water, Lighting, and Power coal-fired electrical generating plant.

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What you could say in one word
- at the present time
at this point
in spite of
in the day and age
Example
- African American studies programs are missing the point on having the ability to mask issues of economic disparity
- After Elsa's past few mistakes at her snow palace nearly cost her soul and her sister's life, she plans to never repeat them again

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unnecessary insertion of your mental process
Example:
Walmart strategies for keeping cost low have gutted the American economy with for reaching social consequences.

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Words and phrases that mean nothing just delete them.
- at the end of the day
- the fact is
by and large
in my personal opinion
for the most part
needless to say
at any rate
Example:
- The violence in  St. Louis can be traced to poor police and community relations impacting trust

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Springfield is facing a large influx of homeless people in Sangamon County. After researching statistics, articles, and interviewing people that have a major influence in the community, I have discovered that the economy in Springfield produces a larger role in the causes of homelessness in Springfield. I also agree cultural and physical causes also contribute to homelessness. However, with the majority of shelters and help that is provided for homeless people in the area it has been apparent to me that these resources aren't solving the problem as a whole. With more opportunities of affordable housing and expanding the employment rate, we would see a gradual improvement rate in the homeless population.

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The economy in Springfield although it is fair, should seek improvement. Springfield has numerous of shelters in the area and although that is very helpful to the homeless population here, it doesn't help them to get out of homelessness. Shelters provide a place to stay, some food, and maybe other necessessities. It does provide aid to people but never pulls them out of the gutter. We need a program that can ....

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With the evidence of cultural and physiological causes involving homelessness. The main topic that I believe would be beneficial to resolve homelessness in Springfield is with the economy. Even though mental illness and substance abuse plays a large role in these causes. The first step toward lowering the homeless population has to do with jobs and affordable housing in Springfield.

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I'm leaning toward the blessing bags bc I think its a great way for the community to start establishing a trust we people. In the world we live in today we always have sense of doubt in people. Another way I think would help if we had a utopian sense is improving the job influx in springfield, creating a program for homeless people to work in to make a living could improve

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https://www.pjstar.com/news/20180119/new-peoria-program-helps-homeless-men-find-permanent-housing

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* Research other solutions
- would the ones you already listed work?
- what do experts, politicians, scholars say?
- what other solutions are out there?

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https://www.nytimes.com/2018/01/06/us/chicago-homeless-basement-weather.html

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https://www.chicagohomeless.org/about/organizational-achievements/

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https://www.sj-r.com/news/20160309/illinois-gets-89m-federal-grant-to-fight-homelessness

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https://www.sj-r.com/news/20190227/springfield-mayoral-candidates-differ-on-city-shelter-for-homeless

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https://www.sj-r.com/news/20181114/springfield-debuts-new-system-to-combat-homelessness

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https://www.sj-r.com/news/20181114/springfield-debuts-new-system-to-combat-homelessness

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* Research other communities
- who else is trying to solve this problem

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*  Research the community
(what solutions are in place/are being tried in this community)
- Shelters
- Youth services
- Inner City Missions
* Why aren't they working?
- not enough money
- awareness
- corruption
- politics
- public opinion

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blessing bags
fundraisers
relocated them
Create a employable environment for them to work in
Parole : like the homeless people are watched to see if they are improving there livelihood
Bank aid

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If homelessness was solved, the community would be thriving more than it is today. The streets would be cleaner and the town would have a wealthier stature in the state. It would look more like what a capital of a state should represent. Infrastructure and employment would raise and production in Springfield would grow. There would also be a major influx in attendance in schools bc jobs would bring more families in the area.

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work on making transitions from one paragraph to the next

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Classification
Compare and Contrast
Definitions
Description
Examples
Narration/anecdote

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* go towards the resources
don't mention solutions
~ lack of access of facilities
~ lack of basic necessities
~ despite the present of shelters in springfield we still have people on the street
~ we have resources but not being used (project 2)
~ given all this evidence....
~ prove there are resources that are not being used
~ lack of safe places
~  Polar vortex
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~ that there are homeless people
~ threats to st
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~ Why affects people

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- lack of resources
- lack of advertising
- economic
public health
education
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* the problem and its effects
* debatable:
-  not a fact
- not a statement of belief/opinion assertive
* not 3 pronged

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-  drive around morning afternoon and night
( record data of how many you see at different times)
Find bus stops, anywhere to cover but yet to be seen
- downtown

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-  Observe People/Places/Events
-  know what ur actually observing
- observe more than once
-  Detailed notes
(summary notes)
- Ask permission (if intended)

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- Why do many people choose the streets over shelters in the Springfield area
- How many shelters are open 24/7 to the public
- What is your main goal in the next year with this issue
- Are there any major projects in the works that would be beneficial
-  what are your available hours

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1. IDHS
2.  James T. Dimas
3. Frederick D. Nettles Jr

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- Inform
- Get Permission for recording
-  Email fine (quote from it)
- Only include relevant information
- ask open ended question
* no yes/no
* no leading questions