# data[].attributes.body
Weaknesses - I didn't review a paper
Strengths - I didn't do a paper

# data[].attributes.body
Weakness- My partner essay wasn't very explaining and their article needed more information and citings.

Strength- The essay was in MLA format

# data[].attributes.body
weaknesses~ it was not in MLA format

Strength~ She explained her topic very well and all sources supported and proved her thesis

# data[].attributes.body
Weakness:
-No works cited page
-Not enough sentences
-No quotes
-Did not follow MLA format

Stregnth:
-Good body paragraphs
-Alot of information

# data[].attributes.body
Strengths:
- Very clearly stated the tragedy and triumph of the topic.
- Included a good amount of quotes
- Began with a well written thesis.

Weaknesses:
- Quotes were not correctly cited as in-text citations.
-  Not written in MLA format
- Grammar/Pronouns/Prepositions

# data[].attributes.body
strengths- overall good explanations of topic, and was able to understand. There was good grammar and usage of quotes.

weaknesses- the paper wasn't in complete MLA format.

# data[].attributes.body
weaknesses: it was not in mla format
strengths: there were perfectly cited sources and there were very good points made

# data[].attributes.body
Strength- the strengths my partner had  was that his was in MLA format, and had a work cited page.

Weakness- thesis statement wasn't in sequential order, and lacked some information

# data[].attributes.body
strengths= MLA format, good grammar

weakness= not enough quotes

# data[].attributes.body
Weakness- not in mla format.

Strength(s)- very good grammar, overall good explaining each part.

# data[].attributes.body
weakness: not in mla format, somewhat got off topic.

strength(s): got the point across, used correct punctuation,spelling and capitalization

# data[].attributes.body
Weaknesses: My partner wasn't very clear about her argument, her paper was very short.

Strengths: I saw very good grammar and punctuation in my partner's paper.

# data[].attributes.body
My partner had many strengths but they also had a few weaknesses which is okay because now they can try and fix it!

Weaknesses-
Grammar and spelling was off a little bit as well as punctuation.

Strengths-
Amazing writing was in MLA format and did really good over all. They also Had many paragraphs and got their point across to me about what they were writing about.

# data[].attributes.body
Weakness-Wasn't in MLA format and needed more detail.

Strengths-They had good grammar and punctiation

# data[].attributes.headline
strengths- grammer, good amount of paragraphs, and good amount of quotes. Also they stated their sources.

# data[].attributes.subject
strengths- grammer, good amount of paragraphs, and good amount of quotes. Also they stated their sources.

# data[].attributes.body
weakness- the paper wasn't in mla format

# data[].attributes.body
weakness~ MlA format, relating the subtopics back to the theis

# data[].attributes.body
The strengths I saw were good punctuation, good grammar, great use of citations, lots of information,and had the right amount of paragraphs. They did not have anything in MLA formating besides the text being black and the sources.

# data[].attributes.body
Weaknesses: My partner needs some more detail and more length to her essay

Strength: She had good MLA citations and format

# data[].attributes.body
Weakness- Orgiazation throughout paper. It also was not in MLA format

Strength- She explained the tragedy in detail. And had good in text citations

# data[].attributes.body
I found that my partner has STRENGTHS in my partner's writing was their grammar and punctuation.
Their WEAKNESSES were spelling and structuring, they'd have some inconsistencies in their transitions or none at all, the last thing was that their paper wasn't in MLA format.

# data[].attributes.body
weaknesses- My partner didnt have a conclusion paragraph, they also didnt have a works cited page or quotes in each paragraph

strengths- my partner did a good job in putting her paper in MlA form. she also did a good job formating her paragraphs

# data[].attributes.body
Strengths that my partner had was good grammar, the right amount of paragraphs needed, and some things were in the right format.
Some weaknesses that my partner had was her paper wasn't in MLA format, there were a couple of capitalization errors, and her points weren't very clear.

# data[].attributes.body
Weakness- My partner did not have a complete paper. He also did not use MLA format when he was writing his paper. He could have finished writing his paper and put it in MLA format. My partner also did not use quotations. 

Strengths- My partner does not have many strengths other then he did provide a triumph and tragedy but did not include a lot of information to go with it.

# data[].attributes.body
The strengths that I saw were that he had good organization and grammar.He also had good start sentences in paragraphs.However he lacked on some his own ideas and conclusion.He also didn't give that much evidence and finally he didn't really have a good thesis statement.

# data[].attributes.body
The main weaknesses in my partner's writing was lack of sources and citations and also a lack of transition works. besides that, their paper was in MLA format and their thesis statement and main point was clearly stated in their paper. There was a lot of information, just no sources cited.

# data[].attributes.body
Some of the strengths my partner was that he had good spelling and punctuation and did not use personal pronouns. Some weaknesses are overusing some words and the lack of quotations.

# data[].attributes.body
Weakness- My partner did not have a complete paper. He also did not use MLA format when he was writing his paper. He could have finished writing his paper and put it in MLA format. My partner also did not use quotations.
Strengths- My partner does not have many strengths other then he did provide a triumph and tragedy but did not include a lot of information to go with it.

# data[].attributes.body
Weaknesses- My partner does not have a paper. NO MLA format, No paragraphs. No strengths

# data[].attributes.body
Weaknesses - my partner did not cite using MLA formatting. Also, they did not have enough quotes in each paragraph.
Strengths - My partner was able to create a good title, and was able to tell me how all of their sources connected with one another.

# data[].attributes.body
Weaknesses- my partner did not use MLA format. Also, the points in the paragraph were not stated in the introduction paragraph. There weren't any quotes nor sources, but there wasn't in mine either. Plus, there were a couple capitalization errors, but mostly everything was great. Strengths- my partner did a good job with information. They told me the tragedy and the triumph with giving me some background information as well. They did a good job with spelling and grammars. Plus, they had a good amount of paragraphs.

# data[].attributes.body
Some strengths i found in my partners' writing was information about their subject and that they could relate facts to triumph and tragedy. Some weaknesses I found in my partners' writing were that there was a significant lack of quotes and some grammatical issues such as run-on sentences. My paper had some run-on sentences, too. I did well on grammar and transitioning, though.

# data[].attributes.body
My partner (going by their rough draft), is weak at following the proper MLA 8 format (such as the date, proper appealing title [not just NHD Research Paper], and the words "NHD Research Paper" at the top lined up with name, teach,etc.. Also, their name and teacher's name & period are not in the top left hand corner but are centered at the top.) There was only one and a half paragraphs in the rough draft sent to me resulting in there not being much information for me to go by to observe further weaknesses and strengths. One strength that I could tell from the 1 and 1/2 paragraphs is that there is good grammar and punctuation.

# data[].attributes.body
Some weaknesses in my partners writing was grammar and spelling errors. She was very good at checking that her work was in the MLA 8 format.

# data[].attributes.body
My Partner is a very good writer but sometimes what she would write wouldn't make sense. Also, her paper wasn't in MLA 8 format. I am not very good with grammar, but I am very good with MLA 8 formatting.

# data[].attributes.body
My partner is weak on having all the requirements for MLA and needs some work on the conclusions of paragraphs. Some strengths are having many quotes, grammar was good, and didn't use any personal pronouns in the essay.

# data[].attributes.body
Some strengths and weaknesses that I identified are; my person