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After hearing my friends suggestion. I decided to add my apple I drew for the snail to eat. I also added a waterfall to make it seem like a little forest in the middle of the school blocks.I also made the picture a bit brighter.

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After hearing my friends' feedback i am going to make the person more visible

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my idea is to make a mesmerizing picture of walter from a distance

The image that i will need to prepare are apples

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This artwork is about me standing on walter

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more photo of me :D

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my idea is me talking to the Walter

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Make the apple betterr
Make the person more visible and less awkward

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I am going to make sure the apples have a better placement and are not placed so randomly like in the picture 

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I decided to use edit myself sitting on top of Walter and I also used a picture of me pointing a toy gun at Walter to show that he might have invaded a space.

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TITTLE: APPLE⁉️
My that thing is abt walter eating apple in yellow room because yellow helps w yes ^^
My suggestion given by friend is make more apple and yellower yes, and i will be doing that ^^

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''she looks like she is throwing apples at walter.''
''why so empty??''
''you should add more things, so there will be more things too see.''
-erinn

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name: chill walter

I am gonna add myself apples and a tornado

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After hearing from my friend's feedback, I am going to add myself beside walter.
1) My self
2) The background
3) Our time together

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Walter doesn't like eating apples so he is hiding from the apples

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apple are attacking us

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3)The title of my artwork is The curious cat, Its about the cat being curious of walter sitting in the middle of the parade square. The cat is bored and wants to play with walter but walter doesn't move. After receiving a feedback from my friend, I have to improve on erasing properly.

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Walter in Apple world, walter is moving to eat matin's apple, apples from matin are special in phoenix 7

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Title of artwork: Our achievements.
The picture shows Walter on top of a shelf filled with trophies and certificates of the school

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to draw the apple using a darker shade of red so as to make it more visible. I will also edit myself to a different position.

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A snail goes on an adventure on Walter

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my artwork is about me talking to walter but there's a whole fight behind us but walter doesn't care

after hearing from my friends feedback, i am going to crop the bottom part of my artwork and i should add in any fx effects to make it look better

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3) What is the title of my Artwork:
Apple fantasy

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Walter laying on the ground floor,walter is enjoying looking at the 4 apple.

after hearing my friends feedback 1 thing she like is my apple drawing because it looks  realistic

one questions my friends wanted to ask is What am I doing with walter. And instead of colouring over my face,I can cover using apple that I draw.

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Walter enjoying lays and apples on the bench...

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My idea is to put a basket of apples beside walter and a single apple on top of him!! ^^

After hearing from my friends feedback, i am still going to put apples!! ^^

The image i will need to prepare are a basket of apples and a single apple!! <3

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Artist Statement: Falling into Walter's World
My art is about Wendy the bunny that fell into this portal & appeared into a whimsical world of Walter where everything seem strange and bizarre.

Changes to my idea concept:
+ suggestions made by my peer to add more items that will be distorted to illustrate the strange world

Changes to Editing techniques
+ not to overuse the effect for Wendy the bunny. Instead i should focus on the proportion scale
+using skew or distortion techniques to make a strange and bizarre landscape more obvious

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After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to .................

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3)the title of my artwork is the the bunny in the garden  :D it's about a bunny exploring a garden and trying to find things to eat but as he is trying to find food , he sees a person and quickly tries to hide behind the bamboo tree but the person sees the bunny and pets it as a friendly gesture ^
Feedback : I should've pet it more aggressively and should've been looking at the bunny and not the floor
After hearing from my friends I'll shove an apple at where I'm looking at so it looks like I'm looking at the apple that I will pick up and feed the bunny with :D

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a stack of apples behind walter

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My idea is to add myself sitting down beside Walter

After hearing my friend's feedback, I am going to add a mini figure beside Walter and also crop or blur out the bottom part.

The images that I will need to prepare is a picture of me sitting down

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my idea is to add one apple around walter

after hearing my friends feedback i am going to add many apples

the image i have to prepare is apple

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My idea is people running in the parade square and apples in random placement

After hearing my friends feedback i am going to add one apple at the school logo, the idea was by joey

The images that i need to prepare are people and a apple

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My idea is to make walter have an apple beside walter and add a rabbit next to him on the railing. I also think I need to have myself on one of the railing.
After hearing from my friends' feedback, I am going to crop a bit of the photo.
The images i will need to prepare are me sitting down and the rabbit.

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My idea is to put the a apple between walter earss

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my idea is to make a mesmerizing picture of walter from a distance

The image that i will need to prepare are apples

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My idea is to put an apple near Walter.
After hearing from my friend's feedback, I am going to blur the background more and add some apples.
The images that I will need to prepare are apples.

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My idea is to add me and frens walking on staircase

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My idea is to add apple on top of the walter

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My idea is to add myself sitting down with Walter admiring the view with Walter at the windows.

After hearing from my friends feedback, I am going to do more positions that has to do with Walter instead of sitting down with it. Maybe make the background abit darker and Walter brighter so that Walter is the main focus/ stands out more

The image that I will need to prepare are
1)me sitting down
2) me standing up/ sitting down pointing at the view with Walter

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Name: Lee Jing Tian
My idea is the apple on the staircase
Nothing will be change

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My idea is allowing people to see a common place in a different view.
The images that i will need to prepare are apples

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My idea is putting walter in an drink store and surround it with apples and there will be clouds and stars on top to create a apple fantasy.

The images i will need to prepare are
1) stars
2) clouds
3) apples

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Name: Pom Glenn Tzer
My idea is Walter chillin

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to add apples and etc

The images that i will need to prepare are apples!!! (Martin)

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my idea is to add the apple beside the Walter

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My idea is to sit beside on the left hand side of Walter.I am going to edit my picture using the Editing tools and create the whole image like a scene

After hearing my friend's feedback, i am going to need to crop the pic to where the pillars are so that Walter and me looks bigger

The images that I will need to prepare are
1) me sitting

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My idea is putting an apple on Walter

After hearing from my teammates, I should make the photo wider but crop out some parts

An apple drawing

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leading lines to wards the rabbit
and apple will drop from sky

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my idea is to add the drawings of the apple beside walter, across the shelf. i am going to edit the apples into the picture using editing tools in picsart

after hearing my friends' feedbacks, i am going to edit out the reflection on the shelf as it could be a bit distracting. i am also going to make the apples smaller so as to not shift the focus to the apples instead.

the images that i will need to prepare are:
- pictures of my apple drawing
- an edited version of the picture without any distractions (e.g the reflection on the shelf)

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My idea is to add apple at the stairs

After hearing from my friends feedback, i am going to zoom in on walter to make him more visible.

The imagines that i will need to prepare are Apple drawing.

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My idea is walter buy drinks (he need water)

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to

The images that i will need to prepare are me and walter

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My idea is to add myself sitting down in front of Walter. I am going to edit my picture using the FX magic tool and create the whole image into a dream like scenario

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to crop my picture so as making Walter the focal point

The images that i will need to prepare are
1) clouds
2) me sitting down
3) me standing beside walter

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My idea is to add myself standing on top of Walter like Walter is huge and I am small and maybe add some snails on walter using pixlr.com

After hearing my friends' feedback, i am going to add more stuff in the picture to make it more interesting.

The images i will need to prepare are pictures of myself and a snail.

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