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Lee 문장 만들기 숙제 고친거

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강다은

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5차시 노트필기&리딩퀴즈 -동훈

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문장 만들기 (박서현)

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1.I suggest you not to do that activity.

2. There was a big symbol on the front door.

3. I don’t like the school system.

4. The temperature was very high.

5.She gave a thorough explanation of the science project.

6. My birthday is on the twelfth of June.

7.The store has a variety of colourful toys.

8. Carrots are my favourite vegetable.

9. We saw a large vehicle on the road.

10. They traveled across the sea on a beautiful yacht.

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Sentence Corrections

1. ❌ I suggest you not to do that activity.
✅ I suggest that you don't do that activity.
→ After suggest, we normally use “suggest that + subject + base verb”.
→ More natural: I suggest that you avoid that activity.

2. ✅ There was a big symbol on the front door.
→ Grammatically correct. A large symbol sounds slightly more natural/formal than a big symbol.

3. ✅ I don’t like the school system.
→ Correct and natural.

4. ✅ The temperature was very high.
→ Correct and natural.
→ You could also say: The temperature was extremely high. for stronger emphasis.

5. ✅ She gave a thorough explanation of the science project.
→ Excellent! Thorough explanation is a very natural collocation.

6. ✅ My birthday is on the twelfth of June.
→ Correct.
→ My birthday is on June twelfth. is another natural way to say it, especially in American English.

7. ✅ The store has a variety of colourful toys.
→ Correct and natural.
→ A wide variety of colourful toys would sound even richer and more descriptive.

8. ✅ Carrots are my favourite vegetable.
→ Grammatically correct.
→ Carrots are my favourite vegetables. is also possible when talking about carrots as a type of vegetable, but the singular vegetable is perfectly natural here.

9. ✅ We saw a large vehicle on the road.
→ Correct. Large vehicle is natural, although a large truck would be more specific if you know what type of vehicle it was.

10. ✅ They traveled across the sea on a beautiful yacht.
→ Correct and natural.
→ They sailed across the sea on a beautiful yacht. is more precise because sail is the verb specifically associated with traveling by yacht.

Overall Feedback

Excellent work! Most of your sentences are grammatically correct, and you used the target vocabulary naturally and appropriately. Your sentences are also becoming more detailed and sophisticated, especially sentences 5, 7, and 10.

The main point to review is “suggest.” Remember that we say “I suggest that you do…” rather than “I suggest you to do…”.

You are also doing a great job using useful collocations such as “thorough explanation,” “a variety of colourful toys,” and “school system.” To take your writing to the next level, try adding more specific details and using stronger, more precise verbs—for example, “sailed” instead of “traveled … on a yacht.”

Overall, this is a very strong piece of writing. Keep focusing on natural word combinations and more precise vocabulary!

From Tr Sheon

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장다영 (5회차 문장 고치기)

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문장쓰기

1.She is twelfth bady.

2.Thos is varuety color paints.

3.vegetable is eat tastes bad.

4.He vehicle is clean.

5.She yacht is cute

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Sentence Corrections

❌ 1. She is twelfth bady.
✅ 1. She is the twelfth baby.
→ bady → baby (spelling)
→ We use the before an ordinal number: the twelfth.

❌ 2. Thos is varuety color paints.
✅ 2. This is a variety of colored paints.
→ Thos → This (spelling)
→ varuety → variety (spelling)
→ Use a variety of + plural noun: a variety of paints
→ colored paints sounds more natural than color paints.

❌ 3. vegetable is eat tastes bad.
✅ 3. This vegetable tastes bad.
→ Add This to make the sentence complete.
→ is eat is incorrect. Use tastes to describe the flavor.
→ vegetable needs a determiner such as this or the.

❌ 4. He vehicle is clean.
✅ 4. His vehicle is clean.
→ He → His because you are showing possession: his vehicle.

❌ 5. She yacht is cute.
✅ 5. Her yacht is cute.
→ She → Her because you need a possessive adjective before yacht: her yacht.
→ yacht is a singular countable noun, so another natural sentence would be: Her yacht is cute.

Overall Feedback

Great effort using all of the new vocabulary in your own sentences! Your biggest areas to work on are spelling, articles, and possessive adjectives.

Remember:

She → Her: She is happy. / Her yacht is cute.

He → His: He is tall. / His vehicle is clean.

Ordinal numbers usually need the: the twelfth baby

a variety of + plural noun: a variety of colors / a variety of paints

Remember to check the spelling of new vocabulary carefully: baby, variety, this.

You are making good progress. Keep practicing by making short, simple sentences first, and then try adding more details to make your sentences more interesting!

From Tr Sheon

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박대희 A타입 3,4회차

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박대희 A타입 3,4회차

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I suggest a good movie

This symbol means stop

My computer system is old

The temperature is very hot today

I need a thorough cleaning

Today is my ten birthday

I like a variety of food

Tomato is a vegetable

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Sentence Correction

1. ✓ I suggest a good movie.
→ Grammatically correct. A more natural expression would be:
✓ I suggest watching a good movie.
or
✓ I recommend a good movie.

2. ✓ This symbol means stop.
→ Grammatically correct and natural.
⭐ You could make it more specific: This symbol means “stop.”

3. ✓ My computer system is old.
→ Grammatically correct.
⭐ More natural in everyday English: My computer is old.

4. ✓ The temperature is very hot today.
→ Grammatically understandable, but temperature itself is not “hot.”
⭐ More natural: The temperature is very high today.
or It is very hot today.

5. ✓ I need a thorough cleaning.
→ Grammatically correct and natural.
⭐ Great use of thorough!

6. ❌ Today is my ten birthday.
✓ Today is my tenth birthday.
→ We use tenth because we are talking about the 10th birthday, not “ten.”

7. ✓ I like a variety of food.
→ Grammatically correct.
⭐ More natural: I like a variety of foods.
Foods is often used when talking about different types of food.

8. ❌ Tomato is a vegetable.
✓ A tomato is a vegetable.
→ We need a because tomato is a singular countable noun.

Overall Feedback

Great job! Most of your sentences are grammatically correct, and you used the target vocabulary well. You especially did a good job using words like symbol, system, thorough, and variety in meaningful sentences.

Be careful with ordinal numbers such as tenth and with articles like a/an/the. Also, try to make your sentences sound as natural as possible, not just grammatically correct. For example, we usually say “The temperature is very high” rather than “The temperature is very hot.”

Keep practicing by making your sentences a little longer and adding more details. You are doing a great job!

From Tr Sheon

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틀린 단어 3번씩 썼어요.

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I suggest we play.

Is that the symbol?

The system is huge!

The temperature is warm.

The detective is doing a thorough investigation.

It’s the twelfth peace.

There’s variety of hats!

Vegetables are healthy, right?

That bilding is for old vehicles.

Is that a yacht?

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1. ✓ I suggest we play.
→ Grammatically correct and natural.

You could also say: I suggest that we play.

2. ✓ Is that the symbol?
→ Correct and natural.

3. ✓ The system is huge!
→ Grammatically correct.

A more natural choice would be:

The system is very large!
→ “Huge” is fine, but “very large” sounds a little more neutral and academic.

4. ✓ The temperature is warm.
→ Grammatically understandable, but temperature itself is usually described as high/low rather than warm/cold.
→ More natural: The temperature is high.
→ Or: The weather is warm.

5. ✓ The detective is doing a thorough investigation.
→ Grammatically correct.

1. A more natural expression is: The detective is conducting a thorough investigation.
→ “Conduct an investigation” is a common formal collocation.

6. ❌ It’s the twelfth peace.
✓ It’s the twelfth piece.
→ Piece means one part/item of something.

Peace means a state without war, so this is a vocabulary/spelling mix-up.

7. ❌ There’s variety of hats!
✓ There’s a variety of hats!
→ A variety of + plural noun is the natural structure here.
→ Even more natural: There’s a wide variety of hats!

8. ✓ Vegetables are healthy, right?
→ Correct and natural.

9. ❌ That bilding is for old vehicles.
✓ That building is for old vehicles.
→ Building is misspelled.

Remember: building = b-u-i-l-d-i-n-g.

10. ✓ Is that a yacht?
→ Correct and natural.

Overall Feedback

Great job! Most of your sentences are grammatically correct, and you are using the target vocabulary in meaningful sentences. You especially did well with words such as suggest, symbol, system, thorough, vegetables, vehicles, and yacht.

There are three main areas to work on:

Vocabulary accuracy: Be careful with words that sound similar, such as peace and piece.

Spelling: Remember building, not bilding.

Natural collocations: English speakers say “a high temperature” rather than “a warm temperature,” and “conduct an investigation” is more natural than “do an investigation.”

You are doing very well at creating your own sentences rather than simply memorising definitions. Keep focusing on using each new word naturally and accurately in context.

From Tr Sheon

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this yacht is brokch,this vehicle is Kia k9,this vegetable is tomato,phone is variety,now twelfth

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Sentence Correction

❌ This yacht is brokch.
✅ This yacht is broken.
→ If you mean the yacht is not working or is damaged, broken is the correct word.

❌ This vehicle is Kia K9.
✅ This car is Kia K9.
→ If you are meaning the car, just use the word 'car' not 'vehicle'

❌ This vegetable is tomato.
✅ This vegetable is a tomato.
→ We need a before a singular countable noun.

❌ Phone is variety.
✅ Phones come in a variety of types.
→ Variety is a noun, so we need a more complete

expression such as a variety of. Also, phones works better if you are talking about phones in general.

❌ Now twelfth.
✅ Now, it's the twelfth.
→ If you mean the number/order, you need a complete sentence. Twelfth is an ordinal number.

Overall Feedback

You did a good job trying to use the new vocabulary in your own sentences. I especially like that you are making sentences with different kinds of nouns, such as yacht, vehicle, vegetable, and phone.

One important area to work on is articles (a/an/the). Remember that when you talk about one singular countable noun, you usually need a/an: a yacht, a vehicle, a tomato, a phone.

Also, try to make your sentences a little more complete. Instead of saying “Phone is variety,” you could say “Phones come in a variety of types.” This sounds much more natural in English.

Keep practicing by making complete sentences rather than just putting the vocabulary word into a short sentence. You are on the right track!

By Tr Sheon

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아름다운 내용을 적어보세요…

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wow

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https://youtube.com/shorts/S0KR16_tNFo?si=C9P4ayWZPrRcyQ0h

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4주차 노트필기 강다은

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4주차 노트필기 강다은

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4차시 노트필기- 동훈

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4차시 노트필기- 동훈

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선생님~고맙습니다.

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지안 1-3회차 워크북

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지안 1-3회차 워크북

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장다영 (5회차 숙제)

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문장 숙제 (5회차)

1. She suggest at he.

2.This is symbol.

3.She system is weird.

4.he body temperature is hot.

5.She is thorough sheriff.

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Sentence Corrections

❌ 1. She suggest at he.
✅ 1. She suggests it to him.
→ suggest → suggests (third-person singular)
→ he → him after a preposition
→ suggest something to someone is the natural structure.

❌ 2. This is symbol.
✅ 2. This is a symbol.
→ symbol is a singular countable noun, so it needs a.

❌ 3. She system is weird.
✅ 3. Her system is weird.
→ She is a subject pronoun. You need the possessive adjective her before system.

❌ 4. He body temperature is hot.
✅ 4. His body temperature is high.
→ He → His because it describes whose body temperature it is.

→ We normally say “body temperature is high/low,” not hot.

❌ 5. She is thorough sheriff.
✅ 5. She is a thorough sheriff.
→ sheriff is a singular countable noun, so it needs a.
→ thorough means careful and complete, so a thorough sheriff means a sheriff who investigates things carefully.

Overall Feedback

You are doing a good job trying to use new vocabulary in your own sentences. Your main areas to work on are pronouns, possessive adjectives, articles, and subject–verb agreement.

Remember:

She / He = who is doing the action

Her / His = who something belongs to

a/an = needed before a singular countable noun

He/She + verb-s = He suggests, She suggests

Also, pay attention to natural word combinations (collocations). For example, we usually say “high body temperature” rather than “hot body temperature.”

Keep making your own sentences with new vocabulary. The more you use the words in different contexts, the more naturally you will remember them!

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2회차 숙제

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1-2회차 워크시트 -동훈

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1-2회차 워크시트 -동훈

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3차시 노트 복습필기  -동훈

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3차시 노트 복습필기  -동훈

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2차시 노트 복습필기  -동훈

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2차시 노트 복습필기  -동훈

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I don’t think it’s rhyme is good.

Is the rhythm good?

What a huge sacrifice!

Did the secretary welcome you?

His shoulder is big.

I don’t think I have my signature(sign) yet.

Is she really sincere?

The one if the soldiers are really brave

Does your stomach hert?

We have sufficient food.

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Sentence Corrections & Explanations

❌ I don’t think it’s rhyme is good.
✅ I don’t think its rhyme is good.
Explanation:
The correct possessive form is its, without an apostrophe.

its = belonging to it

it’s = it is / it has

More natural:

I don't think the rhyme is very good.

✅ Is the rhythm good?
Explanation:
This sentence is grammatically correct and natural.
A slightly more natural option:

Does the rhythm sound good?
This is especially natural when talking about music or a song.

✅ What a huge sacrifice!
Explanation:
This is grammatically correct and natural.
You could also say:

What a great sacrifice!

That's such a huge sacrifice!

✅ Did the secretary welcome you?
Explanation:
This sentence is grammatically correct and natural.

❌ His shoulder is big.
✅ His shoulders are broad.
Explanation:
Big shoulders is understandable, but broad shoulders is the natural expression when describing someone's physical build. Also, we usually talk about shoulders in the plural.

❌ I don’t think I have my signature (sign) yet.
✅ I don’t think I have my signature yet.
Explanation:
Signature is the correct noun when you mean your written name. Sign has a different meaning and is not normally used to mean a signature.

More natural, depending on the meaning:

I don't think I've signed it yet. → if you mean you haven't signed a document yet.

I don't think I have a signature yet. → if you mean you haven't developed your own distinctive signature.

✅ Is she really sincere?
Explanation:
This sentence is correct and natural.
You could also say:

Do you think she's really sincere?
This sounds a little more conversational.

❌ The one of the soldiers are really brave.
✅ One of the soldiers is really brave.
Explanation:
There are two problems here:

1. We say one of the soldiers, not the one of the soldiers.

2. The subject is one, which is singular, so we use is, not are.

✔️ One of the soldiers is really brave.

❌ One of the soldiers are really brave.

❌ Does your stomach hert?
✅ Does your stomach hurt?
Explanation:
The correct spelling is hurt, not hert.

The sentence structure is correct:
Does + subject + base verb?

✅ We have sufficient food.
Explanation:
This sentence is grammatically correct.

Sufficient means enough.

However, sufficient sounds somewhat formal. In everyday conversation, a native speaker would usually say:

We have enough food. (Most natural)

Overall Feedback

Excellent work! You are using increasingly sophisticated vocabulary such as rhyme, rhythm, sacrifice, secretary, signature, sincere, and sufficient. This shows that you are expanding your vocabulary beyond basic everyday words.

Your main areas for improvement are word forms, spelling, subject–verb agreement, and natural collocations.

Things to focus on:

Be careful with words that look similar but have different meanings, such as its / it's and sign / signature.

Remember that the subject determines the verb: One of the soldiers is, not are.

Keep working on spelling, especially when writing unfamiliar vocabulary: hurt, not hert.

Learn natural expressions as whole phrases. For example, native speakers usually say broad shoulders rather than big shoulders.

Pay attention to the level of formality. Sufficient is correct, but enough is much more common in everyday conversation.

Overall, your sentence construction is getting stronger, and you are successfully using more advanced vocabulary. The next step is to focus less on simply using the correct word and more on using the word in the way a native speaker would naturally use it. Great progress!

From Tr Sheon

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힘든 시호

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이번주도 화이텡!!

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15분만에 끝

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이중모음 2탄 어휘테스트

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이중모음 2탄 어휘테스트

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보빈/이중모음2턴수업 마무리 숙제 :) 입니다

어느덧 시간이 지나 선생님의 6개월의 파닉스 수업을 달려왔다니

더듬더듬 꾀부리지 않고 기본 파닉스1회독을 잘 마친 아이와 함께 수업 듣는 모든 친구들 창찬하고 싶습니다 :) 재미있게 잘 들은 수업 어휘 테스트도 게임처럼 잘 했습니다 아이가 다 소화하지 못한 어휘라도 조급하지 않고 매일 읽고 쓰기, 게을리 하지 않도록 해야겠어요

감사합니다

학습지 숙제도 완성인데, 주시는 자료 제본을 해서 마지막장만 올리게 됩니다

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1회차 노트정리 강다은

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1회차 노트정리 강다은

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2회차 문장만들기숙제(곽우준)

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2회차 문장만들기숙제(곽우준)

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1.Queue is long.

2.I'm recognise my mother.

3.I'm recommend the restaurant.

4.That subject is environment relevant.

5.I go to the restaurant.

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Is the queue long?

I think he did recognise her.

What do you recommend?

It’s relevant, right?

I thought we’ve going to the restaurant.

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Sentence Corrections & Explanations

❌ Did it occur at evening?
✅ Did it occur in the evening?
Explanation:
We usually use in with parts of the day.

in the morning

in the afternoon

in the evening

We do not normally say at evening.

❌ My opportunity is good.
✅ I have a good opportunity.
✅ This is a great opportunity for me. (More natural)

Explanation:
Opportunity is usually not described as my opportunity unless the context is very specific. Native speakers more naturally say I have an opportunity or This is a great opportunity for me.

❌ Address the parliament next week.
✅ Address Parliament next week. (British English)
✅ I will address Parliament next week. (A complete sentence)

Explanation:
The original sentence is a command and is grammatically possible, but it sounds incomplete without context. In British English, we normally say address Parliament without the when referring to the institution.

✅ How do I persuade you?
Explanation:
This sentence is grammatically correct and natural.

Even more natural in a specific situation:

How can I persuade you?

What can I do to persuade you?

❌ I order a physical examination of it.
✅ I ordered a physical examination of it.
✅ I ordered it to be physically examined. (Depending on the context)

Explanation:
The original sentence is grammatically possible, but the tense and context need to be clear. If you are talking about something you have already requested, use ordered. Also, physical examination is most commonly used for a medical examination of a person or animal. For an object, inspection or examination may be more appropriate.

❌ Some people have prejudice on African people, right?
✅ Some people have prejudices against African people, right?
✅ Some people are prejudiced against African people, right? (Most natural)

Explanation:
We say prejudice against someone, not prejudice on someone. Prejudiced against is a very common and natural expression.

❌ Wow! The privilege is huge!
✅ Wow! What a huge privilege!
✅ Wow! That's such a great privilege! (More natural)

Explanation:
Huge is usually not the most natural adjective to describe privilege. Words such as great, special, or incredible sound more natural.

❌ Her profession is police.
✅ She is a police officer. (Most natural)
✅ Her profession is law enforcement. (More formal)

Explanation:
Police is not usually used as a singular profession after is. We say police officer when referring to a person's job.

❌ How is the programme work going?
✅ How is the programme work going? (Possible, but context-dependent)
✅ How is the work on the programme going? (Most natural)

Explanation:
Programme work can be used in some formal contexts, but the work on the programme sounds much more natural when asking about progress.

❌ The pronunciation was huge.
✅ The pronunciation was very clear.
✅ The difference in pronunciation was huge. (If you mean there was a big difference)

Explanation:
Pronunciation itself cannot normally be described as huge. However, a difference in pronunciation can be huge.

Is the queue long?
✅ Is the queue long?

Explanation:
This sentence is completely correct and natural, especially in British English. No correction is needed.

I think he did recognise her.
✅ I think he did recognise her.
Explanation:
This sentence is grammatically correct. Did recognise adds emphasis, meaning something like I believe he really did recognise her.

More neutral:

I think he recognised her.

Both are correct.

What do you recommend?
✅ What do you recommend?

Explanation:
Excellent! This sentence is completely correct and natural.

More specific:

What do you recommend for dinner?

Which one do you recommend?

It's relevant, right?
✅ It's relevant, right?

Explanation:
This sentence is grammatically correct and natural. It is commonly used to check whether something is connected to the topic being discussed.

More natural in formal situations:

Is this relevant to the discussion?

❌ I thought we've going to the restaurant.
✅ I thought we were going to the restaurant.

Explanation:
After I thought, we normally use a past form to describe what we believed at that time.

✔️ I thought we were going...

❌ I thought we've going...

Also, we've means we have, so it cannot be followed directly by going in this sentence.

Overall Feedback

Excellent work!

Your main areas for improvement are:

Prepositions: Pay attention to fixed patterns, such as in the evening and prejudice against someone.

Natural collocations: Some words can be grammatically correct but still sound unnatural together. For example, we say a great privilege, not usually a huge privilege.

Word forms and sentence structure: Remember to check whether a word is being used as the correct part of speech, such as police officer instead of police for a person's profession.

Verb tenses: Be especially careful when using contractions like we've. Always check whether the verb form that follows is grammatically correct.

Meaning and context: Words such as physical examination and address can have specific uses, so always consider what or whom you are talking about.

A very important point: several of your sentences were already completely correct. Keep building on this progress by learning not only what words mean, but also how native speakers naturally combine them in real sentences. Your vocabulary range is growing very well—now focus on accuracy, collocations, and natural expression.

Keep up the excellent work!

From Tr Sheon

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Some people have prejudice on African people, right?

Wow! The privilege is huge!

Her profession is police.

How is the programme work going?

The pronunciation was huge.

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2회차 끝!

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1,2,3,4,5단어 끝

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숙제도 즐겁게 했답니다.

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노트정리

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Syllables

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