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Expression of Ideas: Vocabulary

Flooded with knowledge

on par

modern day counterpart

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8th grade

Contribute to the overall clarity of the message

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Your idea will have good outcomes

-Good expression with purposeful word choice.

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"This evidence shows...

Personal commentary helps transition into explanation.

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Expression of ideas:

Specific word choice

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Clearly written and expressed ideas that add to the meaning/understanding of evidence

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encourage and enhance web

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avoid phrases that negatively impact clarity:

...all this new stuff

...improve a lot of things

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Expression:

word choice was general and repetitious

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expression of ideas are our sentence conveying the writer ideas

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word choice/use of vocabulary for "purposeful writing"

...combats...its modern day counterpart

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Argumentative text

If you accept this request...

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Grade 8

One reason is...

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Grade 6

This shows that..

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Explanation

This shows that ...

This reveals that...

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"This shows that ..."

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Argumentative text

If you accept this request

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This shows that even from 1850

Explanation (3) Eng 1

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Not only/but also

Grade 6

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This justifies my reasoning...

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Grade 8

One of the ideas proposed...

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Create a table with possible intro items for quotes and progress in complexity

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Evidence is

-specific - well chosen -relevant -supports the thesis

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Relevant evidence tends to ...

-support thesis -specific -text based

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When a writer explains hes/her evidence...

-Clear -cites P -"this evidence shows"

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9th Grade

Evidence

Summarized

The writer briefly explains using "This shows that"

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8th grade personal commentary

"based on this sentence we can infer..."

Helps students connect evidence to their answer

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This is shown in paragraph 5 when the author communicates...

7th Grad

Evidence 5

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Grade 8

This shows that...

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8th Grade personal commentary

"Based on this sentence we can infer..."

Helps students command evidence to their answer.

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Argumentative text

If you accept this request...

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Explanation 2

Along with that...

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This justifies my reasoning...

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Specific Well-Choosen

Evidence

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Cited Evidence

Having CLEAR text based evidence will always ensure a clear essay from start to finish

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-blended text evidence, including some summary with brief moments of commentary

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to support the thesis, the writer uses well-chosen direct quotations from the article- simplistic but effective :)

Evidence

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Answer -

Provides a clear thesis in the conclusion of the response.

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Your idea seems like a great idea

-clearly stated opinion.

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Includes a clear thesis using words from the prompt.

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A strong and clear answer will

clear thesis

restate question

effectively answer all parts

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Support

Conclusion reflects thesis

Have one!

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Restating the main ideas of the body paragraphs:

"From drinking hot tea or doing origami, Emis grandmother was a great influence on the author's life by teaching her good habits and strengthening their bond."

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Purposeful

Organization & structure

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Ideas are connected in purposeful ways by using transition words "one", "second", "In conclusion".

Organization of ideas

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There is a purposeful organizational structure -

development and Organization of ideas

(3) Eng I

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purposeful organize structure-meaning not quantity but quality dev. of org ideas

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Development of org.

"on the other hand" - good transition to 2nd idea

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Grade 8

WE can conclude based on these facts...

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Transitions between sentences and pragraphs

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9th grade

The writer uses transitions to logically connect ideas. "For example" "now" "overall"

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Have students use The author feels... or similar sentence stems to explain

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Grade 8

To add on to this...

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Explanation#2

Along with that...

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Evidence - specific and well-chosen, text evidence supports the thesis.

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The prompt

Answer directly specific from the prompt

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9th Grade

At the end, the writer provides a partially developed thesis.

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Using a concluding transition.

"Overall"

"In finality"

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Introduction and theses

Does not lead to organizational

Strategy alone

Grade 8 In conclusion...

Clear theses

Introduction: Very purposeful organizational structure that includes both an intro and conclusion. These are the basis needed for the beginning and ending of and essay.

A successful introduction will restate the prompt/question, will answer the question and will give a preview of what you will be writing about.

Have a purpose for writing.

This is because...

7th #4

Intro.

Introductions included context/background of the text.

Introduction EOCII/POINTS

Fabulous A6 with great use of parrellism

Complex sentences as our 1st sentence grabs attention.

rhetorical questions are okay to use in introduction

A successful introduction

evident

expresses thesis

effective