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Money is important for both men and women. In the past, men worked out side and women stayed at home now, both men and women can work and earn money.

When you have money,people respect you because they know you have worked on yourself .In this world,when people see a rich man, they say he get hard work but when they see a rich women they say she takes money from his father or husband they never said she works hard and she makes her own money. They always say women can’t do anything Today, women can do everything, and better than men this is what makes most of men’s energy, so they paid more for the man even if the woman work hard. The men if he works in dangerous jobs like mining, oil rigs, and firefighting, he gets paid more, Men risk their health and safety every day so it is fair and logical that they get more pay. Men and women should get the same money for the same work. It is fair and right, when everyone is paid equally, people feel happy and respected.

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Money is important for both men and women. In the past, men worked outside and women stayed at home. Now, both men and women can work and earn money.

When you have money, people respect you because they know you have worked on yourself. In this world, when people see a rich man, they say he got hard work, but when they see a rich woman, they say she takes money from her father or husband. They never say she works hard and makes her own money. They always say women can’t do anything. Today, women can do everything, and better than men. This is what makes most of men’s energy, so they pay more for the man even if the woman works hard.

The men, if he works in dangerous jobs like mining, oil rigs, and firefighting, he gets paid more. Men risk their health and safety every day, so it is fair and logical that they get more pay. Men and women should get the same money for the same work. It is fair and right. When everyone is paid equally, people feel happy and respected.

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Money rules the world but is it a men game?

In today’s world , money is everything ; it’s the power of the life.

Almost everything in this world needs money . without the power of money , you can’t get opportunities in today’s world .

some people think that men do harder physical jobs and deserve higher pay , but in my opinion , not all jobs require physical strength .

Many high – paying jobs are in tech , finance , and management where productivity and skills mater more ; women excel in these equally .

Also , people think men are main providers who support their families , but I think that idea is outdated , nowadays , many women are also the primary earners and contribute significantly to their finances ; pay should be determined by the quality of work , not by traditional gender expectations.

In conclusion, men and women work hard and help the world in the same way.

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Money rules the world, but is it a man's game?

In today’s world, money is everything; it’s the power of life.

Almost everything in this world needs money. Without the power of money, you can’t get opportunities in today’s world.

Some people think that men do harder physical jobs and deserve higher pay, but in my opinion, not all jobs require physical strength.

Many high-paying jobs are in tech, finance, and management, where productivity and skills matter more; women excel in these equally.

Also, people think men are the main providers who support their families, but I think that idea is outdated. Nowadays, many women are also the primary earners and contribute significantly to their finances. Pay should be determined by the quality of work, not by traditional gender expectations.

In conclusion, men and women work hard and help the world in the same way.

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Today, you will see money influence everywhere. For example, in malls, shopkeepers will look at you and assume your status based on how expensive you look. It can be annoying, since you want something from the store and they will look at you like, "Can you even afford it?" But on a positive note, you will get more opportunities, like building a company or becoming a CEO in a famous industry. And you get respect from people below you.

In the past, men got more opportunities than women, because in interviews, they focused on physical strength and financial power. Women, on the other hand, focused on getting a part-time job because of taking care of family or taking childbirth vacation.

In my opinion, women have access to many opportunities, both financial and leadership, because in the past, women didn't get a chance to prove themselves. But now, you will see in most famous companies that a woman is the CEO. For example, the Ministry of Education is led by a strong, independent woman focusing on students' education to get the best opportunities in the best country. That's why I think that women getting a chance will one day surpass men in getting more opportunities, and set a good example for talented young women around the world to try becoming someone in a higher status and leadership

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You know how people say money makes the world go round? Sometimes it really feels like it does. It decides who gets heard and who doesnt, who gets to dream without worrying about the basics and who has to really worry. but is it really a mans game? for many years it has always been about mean leading and setting rules. but its not like that anymore, woman now start businesses buy theyre own freedom and finally have power over men. money might still rule the worlds but the players are not wearing the same color. In conclusion, money is big and strong but not just a man thing now. woman and even girls can hold money now. the world is changing and hopefully someday itll be fair to everyone.

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You know how people say money makes the world go round? Sometimes it really feels like it does. It decides who gets heard and who doesn’t, who gets to dream without worrying about the basics, and who has to really worry. But is it really a man’s game? For many years it has always been about men leading and setting rules. But it’s not like that anymore. Women now start businesses, buy their own freedom, and finally have power over men. Money might still rule the world, but the players are not wearing the same color. In conclusion, money is big and strong, but not just a man thing now. Women and even girls can hold money now. The world is changing, and hopefully someday it’ll be fair to everyone.

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Today, life is changing. Women can study, work, and earn their own money. Many women are also starting their own businesses. This shows that money is not just only for men. But still, there are some problems, like in some countries or some cultures it is not allowed for a woman to work, so that makes it harder for women to reach their goals

Money is still very important because it gives people respect and power. Now, women have so many chances to be independent. Even though women are still working for full equality, they must keep working hard so life can be changed and it becomes more fair for everyone.

maryam adel ,correct version

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Aisha Abdulaziz

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Money

These days, money gives people respect, power, and chances in life. How? And why?

Money lets people respect you, because nowadays some people do not respect those who do not have money. Money gives people power — when people pay for some food and some drinks, they will have the power to do their work. People also have chances in life because money is one of the most important things to give you a chance in life: pay and live!

Money in the Past

How did men usually control money? Money in the past was one of the most important things in life. There were a lot of people who did not have it, but that does not mean it was hard to find!

Men usually controlled money by saving some rate... they saved a little for their future, as they used to say: “Dirham above dirham will give you millions!”

Men were working hard for their families. They had hard days sometimes so they could have some money to let their family live a nice life.

Women

Do they have the same chances as men to earn money and be leaders? Why?

Yes, women do have the chance to earn money and be leaders, because women these days have a strong personality, so they can easily have the chance to earn money! Their strong personality helps women a lot to get the chance, because people will respect the women in front of them, and it will be fair to give women the chance to earn money!

At the End

Money is everything in life, and everyone has to be fair in the chances to earn money. Men or women — they are both doing things for a living, so everyone has to be fair. They both complete each other.

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Ghala Khalid

Money today is the most important thing in the world. Without money, you can’t live a comfortable life. Now, being rich opens many opportunities and gives you power.

In the past, men used to handle everything on their own and had many responsibilities: building houses and making families so they could live a comfortable life. Nowadays, they still do that, but if you come from a lower-class family, the mother helps and it becomes fifty-fifty. Everything depends on a man, so nothing has really changed from the past.

Women today do have opportunities and equal access to financial independence because women have proved themselves—they can do what men can do. Women are now doctors, engineers, and even pilots, so women do have opportunities.

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Money rules the world, but is it a man’s game?

People often say that money makes the world go round. It seems like it has a lot of power. If you have money, you can do things like buy a car, go on a trip, or get new clothes. Money helps you get a good job and a place to live. Because of this, some people think of money as a kind of “game,” and they wonder if it’s mostly a game for men.

In the past, it was very common for men to be the main ones earning money outside the house. They were the ones who worked in factories, ran businesses, and managed banks. Because of this, people got the idea that men were the ones who were good with money and that women’s jobs were mostly in the home. This old-fashioned way of thinking made it seem like the financial world belonged only to men.

But a lot has changed. Today, women are earning money and making their own financial choices more than ever before. You see women starting their own companies, becoming managers, and even running big businesses. They are also the ones making most of the decisions about what to buy for the family, from groceries to home furniture. This shows that women are a huge part of the money world now—not just in big business but in everyday life, too.

So, is money a “man’s game”? It doesn’t really seem that way anymore. Money isn’t just about big business deals; it’s about being smart with what you have, saving for the future, and making a good life for yourself and your family. Both men and women are doing this all the time. The world of money is for everyone, and what matters most is what you do with it. CHATGPT VERSION

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Money gives people status and opportunities in life. In the past, men controlled most of the money and women had fewer rights, which limited their independence and chances to become leaders. Today, women have more freedom and can take leadership roles, but they still face challenges such as lower pay and less support compared to men. Money is one of the most powerful forces in the world; it decides who has opportunities, who gains respect, and who can reach high positions in society. Those with money often have access to better education, better jobs, and greater influence in politics. For much of history, however, women were not allowed to own property, run businesses, or make important financial decisions, as men worked outside the home and earned income while women were expected to focus on family and household duties. As a result, money and financial power were almost always controlled by men. Even though progress has been made and money is no longer only a man’s game, women are still catching up, showing that money continues to rule much of the world.

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Money Rules the World but Is It a Man’s Game?

Money is one of the strongest forces in the modern world. It shapes people’s choices, builds nations, and determines who holds influence. Those with money often enjoy higher social status, better opportunities, and greater respect in society. In politics, business, and even culture, money frequently decides who has a voice and who is left unheard.

Historically, men have held most of the financial power. In many cultures, men were seen as the “providers,” while women were expected to stay at home and care for families. This limited women’s access to wealth, property, and leadership positions. As a result, money and power were tightly connected to masculinity, reinforcing the idea that success and authority were male domains.

Today, the world is changing. Women are breaking barriers in nearly every field. They are starting businesses, leading countries, and becoming powerful decision-makers. Education and technology have opened doors for women to achieve financial independence. Still, challenges remain: women often earn less than men for the same work, face discrimination in leadership roles, and struggle to access equal opportunities in global markets.

While money does rule the world, it should not belong to men alone. Both men and women deserve equal chances to build wealth and influence society. Equality in financial power benefits everyone, creating a fairer and more balanced world where leadership is defined not by gender but by talent, vision, and hard work.

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Money is the most important thing in the world. Without money, people can't live. Money can solve many economic and social problems. People who have money are the most famous and most important people in society. Rich people can control poor people with their money by making them workers for rich people. Then they put them in high positions so that they can pay the state from their money.

In the past, men usually owned lands and places without letting women have some places. Men were taking the main jobs without giving women or allowing women to work. Men were the ones who made decisions in the family, society, and even in the government without asking women. This is what makes them in a position of power.

These days, women can get more jobs that help them get money, but many women still get less and have fewer chances to be bosses. This is because of unfair rules and old habits. Even if they do the same work as men, they don't become leaders as often.

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Maryam Taher (Chatgpt version)

In our generation, money is a very important aspect of each and every individual’s life. Money influences power in many countries. Money helps with many things: power, opportunity, and stability.

Among the elite, money is what determines your status. With money comes power, and if you’re powerful, you can do the impossible.

In the past, men have always held the breadwinner role. Since they were the main providers for their families, most jobs were male-dominated. Most jobs were really dangerous and serious. Men also owned most property and land, while women didn’t have the right to own anything. These traditions kept financial power mostly in men’s hands.

Men have also controlled money and financial power because they were more often able to work longer hours outside the house, while women were expected to stay at home, raise children, and manage the household.

Women do not have financial independence to this day. In our economy, men still earn more than women even when they are equally qualified, equally skilled, and equally hardworking. If men and women were paid equally, it would boost the economy in revenue. Paying men more is not only unfair—it’s discrimination. If they do the same work, they should be paid equally, and that is how progress is made.

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Maryam Mohammad chatgpt fixed ver.

Money is one of the most important things in today’s world. Some people would say money is everything; it can influence everything in your life, from power, status, and opportunities to the way people treat you. The more the money, the more power and respect you gain.

Though sadly, it isn’t always fair. Men get paid more than women, even in this generation, which is very unfair and sad. They do the same work, yet men get more pay. This makes it hard for women to buy their own needs, especially since every female product is priced higher than the males! How are women expected to pay for everything when they get less pay, and on top of that, they have the “pink tax”? Women and men should both get equal and fair pay.

That isn’t going to happen, at least not any time soon. In the past, men usually controlled the money, which is why to this day they think they can control it. Times have changed: women now can study, get jobs, and have control of their own money, unlike before, when they couldn’t study nor work. So, their husbands would work and get paid a lot to support his family.

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How does money give people power , respect and chances in life today ? Nowadays money is what rules the world , without it world can stop . Money is very important . It gives you power , respect , and chance in life to succeed . So if you money , you will have the power , respect and you can easily find chances and opportunities in your life with more money

In what ways does money and financial power been controlled by men in the past ? Men in the past have have most of the finical power . Many men did not allow their wives to receive an education , because of this most women weren't educated , they stayed and take care of the house and children . While the men go to work .

Do women have equal access to financial and leadership ? why ? Yes , women should have equal access to financial and leadership , women is not different than the man , i think that they both must have equal access financial and leadership . Some men do not deserve this power . In my opinion i see that the women is able to access the financial and leadership field , because has all the qualifications .

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How does money give people power , respect and chances in life today ? Nowadays money is what rules the world , without it world can stop . Money is very important . It gives you power , respect , and chance in life to succeed . So if you money , you will have the power , respect and you can easily find chances and opportunities in your life with more money

In what ways does money and financial power been controlled by men in the past ? Men in the past have have most of the finical power . Many men did not allow their wives to receive an education , because of this most women weren't educated , they stayed and take care of the house and children . While the men go to work .

Do women have equal access to financial and leadership ? why ? Yes , women should have equal access to financial and leadership , women is not different than the man , i think that they both must have equal access financial and leadership . Some men do not deserve this power . In my opinion i see that the women is able to access the financial and leadership field , because has all the qualifications .

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Money gives people power to get what they want in their life We need more money for anything's we need it , for example , cars and home how we can live without those things . In today's life ?

men had controlled most money and women had fewer right . Today , women have more freedom and can be leaders , but they still face problems like lower pay and less support. Money is not only a man's game anymore but women are still catching up .

Today's things are chasing . women can study , work and earn their own money . Many women are now business owners , This shows that money is no longer a men's game . still true equality has not yet been investment , and cultural barriers that limit their success . in conclusion , money continues to control power , status and opportunity in the Modern world , while women now have more access to financial independence and leadership , they are still working toward full equality . Money May no longer belong only to Men , but women must continue breaking barriers to make the game truly fair for everyone.

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Money gives people power to get what they want in their life. We need more money for anything we need, for example, cars and homes. How can we live without those things in today's life?

Men had controlled most money and women had fewer rights. Today, women have more freedom and can be leaders, but they still face problems like lower pay and less support. Money is not only a man's game anymore, but women are still catching up.

Today's world is changing. Women can study, work, and earn their own money. Many women are now business owners. This shows that money is no longer a men's game. Still, true equality has not yet been reached because of lack of investment and cultural barriers that limit their success.

In conclusion, money continues to control power, status, and opportunity in the modern world. While women now have more access to financial independence and leadership, they are still working toward full equality. Money may no longer belong only to men, but women must continue breaking barriers to make the game truly fair for everyone.

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Equal work means equal pay ,that's the truth and that's what we hear often , but even though we always hear that , a lot of studies showed that even when men and women worked in the same job , men will always get paid more than women so even when money rules the world it is a man game , as I said before equal work means equal pay , but in our world man gets more money , they can control a lot of things which is pretty interesting . Male merchant dies is cheaper , then why would they get more money ? in a lot of cutlers man should pay for the family , so this is a main reason ,but not all men spend it for the family which is totally unfair . most companies and managers are men which is the main reason why they have control . People back then actually used the money for the family , and they worked super hard to get this money ,while now a lot of men don't even work much and still get paid more , so people should understand that our generation is not like the old generation , so anyone who work harder should should get paid more .That's not about who controls the money ,the tow genders have the right to control it but unfortunately , in our generation ,men get to control the money more than women

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Equal work means equal pay, that's the truth and that's what we hear often. But even though we always hear that, a lot of studies showed that even when men and women worked in the same job, men will always get paid more than women. So even when money rules the world, it is a man's game. As I said before, equal work means equal pay, but in our world men get more money. They can control a lot of things, which is pretty interesting.

Male merchandise is cheaper, then why would they get more money? In a lot of cultures, men should pay for the family, so this is a main reason. But not all men spend it for the family, which is totally unfair. Most companies and managers are men, which is the main reason why they have control.

People back then actually used the money for the family, and they worked super hard to get this money. While now, a lot of men don't even work much and still get paid more. So people should understand that our generation is not like the old generation, so anyone who works harder should get paid more. That's not about who controls the money. The two genders have the right to control it, but unfortunately, in our generation, men get to control the money more than women.

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Hoor Ibrahim

Money is the most important thing in the whole world .

In my opinion , women need more money than men . Show , I know that the men should spend most the money on the kids , wife , and house , but it's not a good reason for giving men higher salary than women . women get paid 80 to 85 cents for each one dollar a man earns , it's not fair ! The problem is that nowadays women are educated but still the pay gap is there . Even though when women go for shopping , they spend more money than men , with the same items because it's belong to women , that's not fair at all . When women search for higher-paying jobs the gap still stays , this effect the amount of money that women save for the future .

At the end , men need money but women need it more , because the woman's world is too expensive . I wish that the pay gap decreases over time .

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Money is the most important thing in the whole world.

In my opinion, women need more money than men. Sure, I know that the men should spend most of the money on the kids, wife, and house, but it's not a good reason for giving men higher salaries than women. Women get paid 80 to 85 cents for each one dollar a man earns — it's not fair! The problem is that nowadays women are educated, but still the pay gap is there. Even though when women go shopping, they spend more money than men on the same items because it belongs to women — that's not fair at all. When women search for higher-paying jobs, the gap still stays. This affects the amount of money that women save for the future.

At the end, men need money, but women need it more, because the woman's world is too expensive. I wish that the pay gap decreases over time.

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Maitha Ali

Money is a powerful thing to have because it depends why you spend it. Like some people spend the money on useless thing although are some people spend on their education, food and sometime on their self. However, few people scam a there for money and for me is so disrespectful because people work hard to earn the money the main but in the other hand, money is just thing is not that important.

Men do not always get more money than woman because I think both woman and men should have the same salary but of course, it depends on their job for example military and truck driver therefore, sometime l think for me is that depend on what your work is or to show some respect to other people.

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Money is a powerful thing to have because it depends on how you spend it. Some people spend money on useless things, while others spend it on their education, food, and sometimes on themselves. However, a few people scam others for money, and for me, that is so disrespectful because people work hard to earn money. But on the other hand, money is just a thing; it’s not that important.

Men do not always earn more money than women because I think both women and men should have the same salary. But, of course, it depends on their job. For example, military personnel and truck drivers. Therefore, sometimes I think that it depends on what your work is, or showing respect to other people.

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Aisha Abdulaziz

Money, these days money give's people respect , power , and chances in life , how ? and why ? Money lets people respect you , because know a days some people do not respect people who do not have money . Money gives people power , when people pay some food and some drinks , they will have power to do their work . People also have chances in life because money is one of the most important things to give you a chance in life : pay and live !.

Money in the past how did men usually control money ? Money in the past was one of the most important things in life , there were a lot of people who do not have it , but that does not mean that it was hard to find it ! Men was usually control money by saving some rate ... they save a little for their future , as same as they say before dirham above dirham will give you millions ! Men were working hard for their family , they were having a hard days some times so they can have some money to let their family live a nice life .

Women , do they have the same chances as men to earn money and be leaders ? why ? Yes , woman they do have the chance to earn money and be leaders , because women these days have a strong personality , so they can easily have the chance to earn money ! Their strong personality will help the women a lot to get the chance , because they will respect the women who are in front of them , and it will be fair to give the women chance to earn the money !

At the end , money is everything in life , and everyone has to be fair in the chances to earn money , men or women , they are both doing things for living so everyone have to be fair , they both complete each other .

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Ghala Serian

Money controls every single thing around us, like the food we eat, the clothes we wear and even the education we are being provided with. If you have money, you will earn respect, unlike people who don't have money. More chances and opportunities will come your way if you are wealthy, or come from an upper class family. A thought that always comes to mind, is how rich people take the elevator to reach success , while poor people on the the other hand have to take the stairs instead.

In the past, men controlled money and financial power. Some people might wonder why though it's mainly because men were provided with; high level of education; women on the other hand, were not as educated. Another reason is also because, women were more focused on raising children and cooking. They had a lot of housework to complete so they weren't focused on getting high education. Men were also the main providers for their families, so it makes sense that they had greater power in the financial industry.

Women nowadays are more financially independent, and they also are highly educated. There are many women with strong financial power currently, they have proved themselves worthy of the positions they hold. Unlike men, women have to spend way more money annually, because most of their needs are highly expensive.

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Money controls every single thing around us, such as the food we eat, the clothes we wear, and even the education we receive. If you have money, you will earn respect—unlike people who don't have money. More chances and opportunities will come your way if you are wealthy or come from an upper-class family. A thought that always comes to mind is how rich people take the elevator to reach success, while poor people, on the other hand, have to take the stairs instead.

In the past, men controlled money and financial power. Some people might wonder why; it's mainly because men were provided with a high level of education, whereas women, on the other hand, were not as educated. Another reason is that women were more focused on raising children and cooking. They had a lot of housework to complete, so they weren't focused on obtaining a high level of education. Men were also the main providers for their families, so it makes sense that they had greater power in the financial industry.

Women nowadays are more financially independent, and they are also highly educated. There are many women with strong financial power currently; they have proved themselves worthy of the positions they hold. Unlike men, women have to spend significantly more money annually because most of their needs are highly expensive.

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Rawya hamad

World without money will stop . money is everything in life .The money for man is important for lifestyle ,for wife and kids ,to give his self and his family enough money and things they need. But man need to know that the money they get, it's not for them only so that they don't waste it just for them , because women must have and take half of the the money . Money give people power, respect and chance by saving it . It gives them a lot by respecting the money and chances will come to you .

In the past, men was controlling there money because it's hard for them to get it. Although in the past ,it was hard to work and earn money there is no chances of getting work specially for men's .So men's who have a work they know how to control it and how they spend it .

Woman have the chances to get what man take and more. Some women's get the chances to work like man's and get the some pay , a few of jobs that men can do women can't because of the danger it involves . But at the same time ,women's can be leaders because of the hard work and how they can control and fix everything is one time. Men will work hard but not like women's.

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A world without money will stop. Money is everything in life. Money for man is important for lifestyle, for wife and kids, to give himself and his family enough money and the things they need. But man needs to know that the money they get is not for them only, so that they don’t waste it just for themselves, because women must have and take half of the money. Money gives people power, respect, and a chance by saving it. It gives them a lot; by respecting the money, chances will come to you.

In the past, men were controlling their money because it was hard for them to get it. Although in the past it was hard to work and earn money, there were no chances of getting work, especially for men. So men who had work knew how to control it and how they spent it.

Women have the chances to get what men take and more. Some women get the chance to work like men and get the same pay. A few of the jobs that men can do women can’t because of the danger involved. But at the same time, women can be leaders because of their hard work and how they can control and fix everything at one time. Men work hard but not like women.

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Asma Mohammed

Money is the most important thing in the would . Without money , people can't live . Money can solve many economy and social problems . People who have money are the most famous and most important people in society . Rich people can control poor people with there money by making them workers for rich people , then they put them in high positions so that they can pay the state from there money .

In the past , men usually owned lands and places without letting women have some places . Men were taking the main jobs without giving women or allowing women to work . Men were the ones who made decisions in the family , society , and even in the government without asking women .This is what makes them in position of power.

These days , women can get more jobs that help them get money , but many women still get less and have fewer chances to be bosses . This is because of unfair rules and old habits . even if they do the same work an men but they don't become leaders as often .

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Shamma Abdulrahman 12A3

"Men deserve better treatment than women" , "Men are better than women", those are sentences we have heard growing up, and some people to this day, believe it, and still say it.

Sadly, in our generation and past generations, people praise men as if they do ever single thing, but the truth is, men won't be here if it weren't for women. They are strong humans that gave birth to these men, and then took care of them, until they grew up and saw and entered the true world.

Money gives people power and chances , but if they use it well, they earn respect. In the past, most of the people, usually men were against women studying, and working. So men usually controlled money and financial power.

Today, women thankfully, have almost equal access to financial independence and leadership. All thanks to women, government, and rulers of some countries who fought for our rights, for example sheikh Zayed bin Sultan. he stood with women's rights, he helped them by building only girls schools, and colleges. In the past, women didn't have chances like men at being leaders, but now, some women have the same and maybe even bigger chances than men in earning money, leadership, and financial independence.

Finally, money does rule the world but it is not just a man's game, it's both a man's and a woman's game. And both of them can be leaders, not just men.

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"Men deserve better treatment than women," "Men are better than women" — those are sentences we have heard growing up, and some people, to this day, believe them and still say them.

Sadly, in our generation and past generations, people praised men as if they do every single thing. But the truth is, men wouldn't be here if it weren't for women. They are strong humans who gave birth to these men and then took care of them until they grew up and entered the real world.

Money gives people power and chances, but if they use it well, they earn respect. In the past, most people — usually men — were against women studying and working. So men usually controlled money and financial power.

Today, women, thankfully, have almost equal access to financial independence and leadership — all thanks to women, governments, and rulers of some countries who fought for our rights. For example, Sheikh Zayed bin Sultan stood with women's rights. He helped them by building girls-only schools and colleges. In the past, women didn't have the same chances as men at being leaders, but now, some women have the same — and maybe even greater — chances than men in earning money, leadership, and financial independence.

Finally, money does rule the world, but it is not just a man's game — it's both a man's and a woman's game. And both of them can be leaders, not just men.

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Today , you will see money influence everywhere . For example , in malls , shopkeepers will look at you and assume your status based on how expensive you look . It can be annoying , since you want something from the store and they will look at you like " Can you even afford it?". But on the positive note , you will get more opportunities like : building a company , or becoming a CEO in a famous industry. And you get respect from people below you.

In the past , men got more opportunities than woman . Because in interviews , they focus on physical strength and financial power . Woman , on the other hand , focus on getting a part time job , because of taking care of family or taking childbirth vacation.

In my opinion , women have access to many opportunities , both financial and leadership. Because in the past , woman didn't get a chance to prove themselves . But now , you will see in most famous companies that a woman is the CEO , for example , the ministry of education is a strong , independent women focusing on students' education to get the best opportunities in the best country . That's why I think that woman getting a chance will one day surpass men getting more opportunities , and setting a good example for talented young women around the world to try becoming someone in a higher status and leadership.

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Maryam Adel

Today life is changing , women can study , work ,and earn their own money ,many women are also starting their own business . this shows that money is not just only for men. but still there are some problems like in some countries or some cultures that is not allowed for a women to work so that makes it harder for women to reach their goals.

Money is still very important because it gives people respect and power .now , women have so many chances to be independent , even though women are still working for full equality, they must keep working hard so life can be changed and it becomes more fair for everyone.

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Amna Almadhaani

Why should men get paid more than women ? Gallup studies , show that 40% of men work 50-59 hours per week , women prefer to work part time .

Men spend longer hours , but women have responsibilities , she has to take care of the children and prepare everything for them .

Men usually support the family .They often do harder and more dangerous jobs ; They don't take long breaks from work like maternity leave .

Money can give people power ,when they get the salary , it gives them some power to complete the work .

The women have the same chance as the men to earn money .

The pay should be based on the skills , not gender ; women study and work just like men .

Money these days is important for each single person , there are a lot of things that people have to get it , so they can live.

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Why should men get paid more than women? Gallup studies show that 40% of men work 50–59 hours per week, while women prefer to work part-time.

Men spend longer hours, but women have responsibilities; she has to take care of the children and prepare everything for them.

Men usually support the family. They often do harder and more dangerous jobs; they don't take long breaks from work, like maternity leave.

Money can give people power. When they get the salary, it gives them some power to complete the work.

The women have the same chance as the men to earn money.

The pay should be based on skills, not gender; women study and work just like men.

Money these days is important for each single person. There are a lot of things that people have to get, so they can live.

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Shaima Abubakr

Now a day earning money is more easy than past but why does the world think that men should get more than women? Think about education , jobs , and skills. Everything about women ,they study as much as a men .They our traditions stick this idea in our mind that women can't do anything and she just spends her money on silly things .Even shops now raise there prices on any item that belongs to women .For example ,pink products or even bags or dresses ; that's not fair at all.

People now use money to get more respect and chances in their life. Everything depends on money. For instance, if you have BMW car , you will get more respect than any other cheap car .Even in jobs, people will talk to you in a polite way if have a great , high salary job. But what about opportunities ? Of course ,it will be different between being a leader and having a normal job. The way that life will treat you and your children will be completely different , your children will go to private schools , they will get better jobs , everything will seem different to them.

Now a days ,women and men have the same opportunities to earn money and be leaders. Our country and law gives the women the same chances to be what they want in the future ,to make their names every where in the world exactly as men. Even Islam never makes any different between a woman and a man. Now most leadership is women , they teach their children , think about their husband and work. They deserve to get high salary as any men.

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Nowaday, earning money is easier than in the past, but why does the world think that men should get more than women? Think about education, jobs, and skills. Everything about women—they study as much as men. But our traditions stick this idea in our minds that women can't do anything and that she just spends her money on silly things. Even shops now raise their prices on any item that belongs to women. For example, pink products or even bags or dresses; that's not fair at all.

People now use money to get more respect and chances in their life. Everything depends on money. For instance, if you have a BMW car, you will get more respect than any other cheap car. Even in jobs, people will talk to you in a polite way if you have a great, high-salary job. But what about opportunities? Of course, it will be different between being a leader and having a normal job. The way that life will treat you and your children will be completely different. Your children will go to private schools, they will get better jobs—everything will seem different to them.

Nowadays, women and men have the same opportunities to earn money and be leaders. Our country and law give women the same chances to be what they want in the future, to make their names everywhere in the world exactly as men. Even Islam never makes any difference between a woman and a man. Now most leadership is women; they teach their children, think about their husband, and work. They deserve to get a high salary as any man

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Money gives more people Stauts, and chances in life. In the past,men controlled most money and women had fewer rights Today, women have move freedam ana can be leadres, but they stil face problems like lower pay and tess support Money is not only a man's game anymore but women are still catching up.Also $ money is one of the most powerful forces in the world.It decides who was has opportunities, who gains respect, and who can rech high positive in society, People with

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power were almost always controlled by men. women were often not allowed to own propriety,run businessor make bing financial is de decisions. men worked outside the home and earned income, while women were expected to focus only on Family and hosehold duties.Because of this, women had less independence and fewer chances to become leases.

ROUDHA Ibrahim

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Fatema Ahmad Alhaddad

Money is the most important thing in today‘s world. Everything in our life depends on it, like food, electricity, health care, education, an jobs. But, have you ever thought who controls this money? Mostly, you will think about such country's presidents since they are all men. Why? Money rules the world, that's right. But is it a man's game?

Actually, we usually see that men control most of the things in our daily lives, even if it was in the past, present, or the future. In the past, as I mentioned before, men were leading every single thing in that time, while women were spending most of their time in caring about the family and raising their kids well. There were rarely chances for a woman to work in a mostly men jobs, especially in the medical or education fields, which means that men in that time were responsible for everything, and of corse, money.

Today, women have more chances than before, but they still face problems. Women often earn less than men and may have fewer opportunities to become leaders. However, more women are becoming business owners, CEO's, and leaders in different fields. Money is not only for men anymore, but still control more power in many areas.

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Money is the most important thing in today’s world. Everything in our life depends on it, like food, electricity, health care, education, and jobs. But have you ever thought about who controls this money? Mostly, you will think about such countries’ presidents, since they are all men. Why? Money rules the world, that’s right. But is it a man’s game?

Actually, we usually see that men control most of the things in our daily lives, whether in the past, present, or the future. In the past, as I mentioned before, men were leading every single thing at that time, while women were spending most of their time caring for the family and raising their kids well. There were rarely chances for a woman to work in mostly men’s jobs, especially in the medical or education fields, which means that men at that time were responsible for everything, and of course, money.

Today, women have more chances than before, but they still face problems. Women often earn less than men and may have fewer opportunities to become leaders. However, more women are becoming business owners, CEOs, and leaders in different fields. Money is not only for men anymore, but men still control more power in many areas.

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money is something we need in our daily life. We cant live without it, because all the things we need for home we buy them with money , but is it a mans game? It kind of is but isnt at the same time , man should get paid more because he pays for his kids and his home and family but women want money to buy her things like , bags, makeup, clothes , not like the man who pay home bills and they pay for their kids and alsom, their wife. So you can say they pay for almost everything , so it kinda is a man game but some women have kids and a house but dont have a husband or a man in her house. In that case , she will work to get money for her kids and house but she gets paid less then the man so this will kind of be not fair for her , she has kids and a house she needs to take care of . So she has to get paid more so she can live a healthy life with her children so some women should get paid more because sometimes its her job to pay for the house and her kids, some men work and get paid a lot but they dont give their children and wife the money they need so women work to make her kids have the best life, but she gets paid less, what if it was not enough for her and her kids, her home or her daily life. I think each person should get paid for their work. some people work hard but get paid less but some work less and get paid more so it should be fair . That way people will be happy since people who work hard cant get paid the same or less then people who work less. I also think women should be paid with her condition of her life so it would be fair.

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Money is something we need in our daily life. We can't live without it, because all the things we need for home we buy them with money; but is it a man's game? It kind of is, but isn't at the same time. Man should get paid more because he pays for his kids, and his home, and family; but women want money to buy her things like bags, makeup, clothes; not like the man who pays home bills, and they pay for their kids, and also their wife. So you can say they pay for almost everything; so it kinda is a man's game. But some women have kids and a house, but don't have a husband or a man in her house. In that case, she will work to get money for her kids and house; but she gets paid less than the man, so this will kind of be not fair for her. She has kids and a house she needs to take care of. So she has to get paid more so she can live a healthy life with her children; so some women should get paid more because sometimes it's her job to pay for the house and her kids.

Some men work and get paid a lot, but they don't give their children and wife the money they need; so women work to make her kids have the best life, but she gets paid less.

What if it was not enough for her and her kids, her home, or her daily life? I think each person should get paid for their work. Some people work hard but get paid less; but some work less and get paid more, so it should be fair. That way people will be happy since people who work hard can't get paid the same or less than people who work less. I also think women should be paid with her condition of her life; so it would be fair.

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Ghala Khalid

Money today is the most important thing in the world. Without money you cant live a comfortable life. Now, being rich opens many opportunities and gives you power.

In the past, men used to handle everything on their own and had many responsibilities: build houses, and make families so they can live a comfortable life. Nowadays, they still do that but if you are coming from a lower-class family, the mother helps and it becomes fifty-fifty. Everything depends on a man so, nothing had really changed from the past.

Women today do have opportunities and equal access to financial independence because, women proved themselves that they can do what men can do. Women are now: doctors, engineers, and even pilots so, women do have opportunities.

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Sara Arif

Money nowadays is power. You can get everything done with the power of money, even securing a job or promoting becomes easier. Money can also buys you respect and give you a big role in the world.

"Who controls this important power?" This is probably the most asked question and the answer keeps changing. Before, men had almost all the control over money in many ways: family responsibilities, salary and incomes. But as the world changes, this tradition has also changed.

Female are now almost the same as men. Many women are educated enough to get the same income as men. So paying them women less when they have the same experience, same workhours, same tasks, and same effort as men is nothing but bias. Equal work, deserves equal pay, regardless of the gender.

In today's world, many women are taking the lead in important positions and have started proving their worth. So paying them less because of their gender, is unfair.

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Money nowadays is power. You can get everything done with the power of money; even securing a job or getting promoted becomes easier. Money can also buy you respect and give you a big role in the world.

"Who controls this important power?" This is probably the most asked question, and the answer keeps changing. Before, men had almost all the control over money in many ways: family responsibilities, salary, and income. But as the world changes, this tradition has also changed.

Females are now almost the same as men. Many women are educated enough to get the same income as men. So paying women less when they have the same experience, same work hours, same tasks, and same effort as men is nothing but bias. Equal work deserves equal pay, regardless of gender.

In today's world, many women are taking the lead in important positions and have started proving their worth. So paying them less because of their gender is unfair.

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Shamsa Mohammed

Money rules the world, that's nothing but a fact, though, why does it feel like it revolves around men?

The fact that men always seem to have it better when it comes to money is obvious, money influences power, and status, it brings you new opportunities, it's simply what makes the world go round as always, men with money are always at the top they have money, and that alone gives them power, unfortunately, that's a lot less likely for women, the pay gap between women and men is enough to prove that.

having money, again, gives power with that comes status and opportunities.

Traditionally, Men have always been in control of money and financial power, lowering women's wages for "lack of education" or being "not as physically capable" is nothing but an excuse, just like women, men also lack some skills that women are chosen for, but they still always have the upper hand in finance, That just shows how they see women as inferior beings.

People believe that nowadays, women have it better, but that couldn't be more wrong, yes, women have gained access to financial independence and leadership, but it is nowhere near equal to men, Men still get the better paying roles, and are more financially independent, it's obvious, but being a woman alone is expensive, shops sell the exact same thing, but if it's made for women, the price is always higher, I've seen women buy men's razors for themselves saying "It's cheaper and works a lot better" It works better, but still somehow thirty dirhams cheaper?

women tend to like self-care: buying skin care for glowy skin< bath products for soft skin, a lot of scented products to feel better about themselves.

But it's hard to maintain a routine when everything dubbed "for women" has a 20% tax.

Men's skincare is cheaper, their body products are cheaper.

Women nowadays can't even get hygiene products without losing most of their salary, even a pink colored toothbrush is more expensive than other toothbrushes simply because it's a color known for women, so no women do not have equal financial independence as men.

Money does rule the world, and as of now, it is a mans game.

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Fatma Nasser

We could all agree that money is the key of life . but what else could it do ? money is strength without it , you are seen as week and poor , just an unknown person or a nobody , by being wealthy you could buy yourself a name , giving yourself status ,money can give you a chance in life to have a name and be someone that people respect  and talk highly about , all of that with one key , money .

Now , to be frank , In todays world , even tomorrow's and next week’s world , men have financial power then women unfortunately .This is the world that we live in . In the past men worked in  every field , leaders , soldiers , mayors , ceos , bank mangers etc , men had the ability to do anything and everything , simply because there men .

Even in today's world men still  have power , I personally do not feel that men a and women are equal men have more independence in every way to this day , women do not have independence , we live in a unfair and biased world . Men have more power , till today's day , women still do not have the same opportunities as men , yes some may be given . but not quite the same as men .

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Fifty percent of the world say that money buys happiness, while the other fifty percent think it is a myth and actually the opposite of happiness. I actually do think money CAN and WILL buy you happiness if you truly understand the importance of money what it can do to you and your life. Imagine a normal human being man working in a workplace and next to that man is another normal human being. But the only difference is that one is a millionaire and one isn’t. Who do you think can get more opportunities and earn more respect? you know what they say, don’t judge a book by its cover. Unfortunately, that’s not how it works nowadays. With money you can buy opportunities, respect, and even people.

Do you think there’s a difference between a man and a woman in the same workplace? absolutely. And let me tell you why.

Men have the biggest ego ever, whether you’re right or wrong, so it wouldn’t matter if you’re smart or not. The only way you will ever get a tiny amount of respect is by buying it. The only thing that hasn’t changed since the 90s is not giving women the same amount of respect and opportunities.

Money doesn’t just affect individuals; it shapes society. Countries with stronger economies have more global influence, while poor nations often get ignored. In workplaces, companies with more financial resources attract better talent, more investments, and more wealthy businessman can easily influence decisions or even politics, while a woman with the same ideas but less financial backing might be silenced. This shows how money often decides who has power and who doesn’t.

Conclusion

In the end, money rules the world, but it should not be just a man’s game. True fairness means equal respect and opportunities for both men and women.

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1. “Fifty percent of the world say” → “Fifty percent of the world says”
(Subject–verb agreement: percent… says.)

2. “money CAN and WILL” → “money can and will”
(Removed unnecessary capitalization.)

3. “the importance of money what it can do to you and your life” → “the importance of money and what it can do for you and your life”
(Added and; changed to → for for correct idiomatic use.)

4. “Imagine a normal human being man working in a workplace” → “Imagine a normal man working in a workplace”
(Removed awkward/redundant phrasing.)

5. “and next to that man is another normal human being” → “and next to him is another normal human being”
(Made phrasing smoother and avoided repetition.)

6. “But the only difference” → “The only difference”
(Removed unnecessary But.)

7. “you know what they say, don’t judge a book by its cover.” → “You know what they say: don’t judge a book by its cover.”
(Capitalized You; changed comma → colon.)

8. “With money you can buy” → “With money, you can buy”
(Inserted comma after introductory phrase.)

9. “absolutely.” → “Absolutely.”
(Capitalized sentence starter.)

10. “whether you’re right or wrong, so it wouldn’t matter if you’re smart or not” → “whether you’re right or wrong, so it doesn’t matter if you’re smart or not”
(Verb tense consistency: wouldn’t → doesn’t.)

11. “get a tiny amount of respect” → “get even a tiny amount of respect”
(Added even for smoother phrasing.)

12. “The only thing that hasn’t changed since the 90s” → “The one thing that hasn’t changed since the 1990s”
(Clarity + style: only thing → one thing; expanded 90s → 1990s.)

13. “is not giving women” → “is denying women”
(Made phrasing grammatically accurate.)

14. “more wealthy businessman can easily influence” → “Wealthy businessmen can easily influence”
(Fixed grammar: more wealthy businessman → wealthy businessmen.)

15. “more global influence, while poor nations often get ignored” → unchanged, but punctuation smoothed in later sentence.

16. “attract better talent, more investments, and more wealthy businessman” → “attract better talent and more investments. Wealthy businessmen”
(Fixed parallel structure + sentence split for clarity.)

17. “money May no longer belong only to Men” → “money may no longer belong only to men”
(Corrected capitalization.)

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Maryam Taher

In our generation, money is a very important aspect in each and every individual's life. Money influences power in many countries. Money helps with many things: power, opportunity, and stability. Among the elite, money is what determines your status, With money comes power and if you're powerful, you can do the impossible.

In the past, men have always held the breadwinner role. Since they're the main providers for their families, most jobs were male-dominated. Most jobs were really dangerous and serious. Men also owned most property and land, while women didn't have the right to own anything. These traditions kept financial power mostly in men's hands. Men have also controlled money and financial power because they were more often able to work longer hours outside the house. While women were expected to stay at home, raise children, and manage the household.

Women do not have financial independence to this day. In our economy, men still earn more than women even when they are equally qualified, equally skilled, and equally hardworking as men. If men and women were paid equally, it would boost the economy in revenue. Paying men more is not only unfair. It's discrimination because if they do the same work, they should be paid equally and that is how progress is made.

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Aisha almehiri

Money is everything in the world life won’t work if there is no money,money is the most importance thigh.women and men have the same chances,people respect you when you have money.

In the past,men control everything, because the women don’t work. In the past,men usually controlled money and financial power because laws,customs,and traditions were built around patriarchy.women are often not allowed to own land. As a result,financial institutions and political systems were designed to keep men in control of money .

Now women have the chances to work,have more chances than in the past to earn money and become leaders . But in money places,the opportunities are still not fully equal.Women and men do not always have the exact same chances to earn money .

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Money is everything in the world. Life won’t work if there is no money. Money is the most important thing. Women and men have the same chances. People respect you when you have money.

In the past, men controlled everything because women didn’t work. In the past, men usually controlled money and financial power because laws, customs, and traditions were built around patriarchy. Women were often not allowed to own land. As a result, financial institutions and political systems were designed to keep men in control of money.

Now women have the chance to work and have more opportunities than in the past to earn money and become leaders. But in many places, the opportunities are still not fully equal. Women and men do not always have the exact same chances to earn money.

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Money in today’s world is the most important thing, Since it gets you literally anything like status , opportunities, and power.

The question is…. is money a man’s game or can it include women too?, Back in the days, women mostly used to be stay -at - home wives so they would depend on the male to provide, Which means he used to have control over the money being spent or saved, Since the is the one working for it and stabilizing the house, And of course males used to get paid more than women, Since they were mostly male- dominated feilds.

In today’s world, Money can get you powerful status along with opportunities for example; people with less experience but powerful status get better pay than someone with lots of experience but a normal status sadly, If your name is recognized when applying for jobs, You could instantly get lots of opportunities, unlike s person with an unknown name.

In today’s world, females and males are treated with fairness in pay, status, and opportunities since there is a Law about fairness between males and females : if both are well educated then both get high pay.

by ghala saleh 12A3

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Money Rules the World but is it a Man’s Game?

Money is one of the strongest forces in the modern world. It shapes people’s choices, builds nations, and determines who holds influence. Those with money often enjoy higher social status, better opportunities, and greater respect in society. In politics, business, and even culture, money frequently decides who has a voice and who is left unheard.

Historically, men have held most of the financial power. In many cultures, men were seen as the “providers,” while women were expected to stay at home and care for families. This limited women’s access to wealth, property, and leadership positions. As a result, money and power were tightly connected to masculinity, reinforcing the idea that success and authority were male domains.

Today, the world is changing. Women are breaking barriers in nearly every field. They are starting businesses, leading countries, and becoming powerful decision-makers. Education and technology have opened doors for women to achieve financial independence. Still, challenges remain: women often earn less than men for the same work, face discrimination in leadership roles, and struggle to access equal opportunities in global markets.

While money does rule the world, it should not belong to men alone. Both men and women deserve equal chances to build wealth and influence society. Equality in financial power benefits everyone, creating a fairer and more balanced world where leadership is defined not by gender but by talent, vision, and hard work.

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Maryam Mohammad

Money is one of the most important things in today’s world. Some people would say money is every thing, it can influence every thing in your life from power, status, opportunities to the way people treat you. The more the money, the more power and respect you gain.

Though sadly, it isn’t always fair, men get paid more than women even in this generation which is very unfair and sad. They do the same work yet men get more pay. This makes it hard for women to but their own needs. Especially that every female product is priced higher than the males! How are women expected to pay for every thing when they get less pay and on top of that, they have the “pink tax”. Women and men should both get equal and fair pay.

That isn’t going to happen, at least not any time soon. In the past, men usually controlled the money which is why to this day, they think they can control it. Times have changed: women now can study, get jobs, and have control of their own money unlike before where they couldn’t study nor work so, their husbands would work and get paid a lot to support his family.

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Money rules the world but is it a man’s game ?

People often say that money makes the world go round. It seems like it has a lot of power. If you have money, you can do things like buy a car, go on a trip, or get new clothes. Money helps you get a good job and a place to live. Because of this, some people think of money as a kind of "game," and they wonder if it's mostly a game for men.

In the past, it was very common for men to be the main ones earning money outside the house. They were the ones who worked in factories, ran businesses, and managed banks. Because of this, people got the idea that men were the ones who were good with money and that women's jobs were mostly in the home. This old-fashioned way of thinking made it seem like the financial world belonged only to men.

But a lot has changed. Today, women are earning money and making their own financial choices more than ever before. You see women starting their own companies, becoming managers, and even running big businesses. They are also the ones making most of the decisions about what to buy for the family, from groceries to home furniture. This shows that women are a huge part of the money world now, not just in big business but in everyday life, too.

So, is money a "man's game"? It doesn't really seem that way anymore. Money isn't just about big business deals. It’s about being smart with what you have, saving for the future, and making a good life for yourself and your family. Both men and women are doing this all the time. The world of money is for everyone, and what matters most is what you do with it.