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In class today I want to look over and edit my introduction paragraph to ensure that I include my main argumentative claim and that I have a solid intro to work from to construct my body paragraphs.

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In class today I would like to do a final review of my research and start writing my introduction. I might use some of my argumentative paragraphs as inspiration.

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In class today I will find a claim and implement it into my layered claim.

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In class today I will finish my "they say I say journal" and start drafting my final argumentative paper.

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In class today I would like to go over the paragraphs I have for any corrections I may need to fix as well as write another paragraph.

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In class today I want to edit my introduction a bit to clean it up and be able to make it more clear with additional information

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Today I would like to look over the paragraph I have and work on my claim to make sure that I can tie in my other sources to it for evidence purposes.

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In today's class I want to finish drafting my introductory, and possibly get more information from my sources.

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In class today I hope to finalize my claim and complete my introduction. As well as go over the paragraph I already wrote and make some changes to it.

Today I thought about how to go about writing the rest of my essay by using my introduction as almost a push for everything else and incorporating more of a personal voice in my essay. My goal for this weekend is to continue to work on my introduction as well as have at least two other paragraphs written. I currently have one other paragraph that I also hope to go back in and change the tone of it.

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Im going to try and summarize my information and finish my claim.

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I hope to finish my intro paragraph and start brainstorming the order of the evidence.

At first, I thought I was doing somewhat well, but then I realized that I had written a rather boring essay. I knew it wasn't great, but having it pointed out to me made me see that I need to transform this dull piece into something more engaging. I believe I have an idea that could be really fun, but I still need approval from Sulzman to determine if this concept for the essay is a good direction. Overall, I feel it went better than I expected.

and for the out side goal ima take things slow but once i have the goahead then this eassy will be easy

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In class I hope to make progress on my intro paragraph. As well as edit my claim.

Today why direction changed from working on my claim to coming up with a good hook. I started my paragraph off not really thinking about a hook but after reading it over thought I could use one. I also thought about the connections I'm trying to make within my essay and how I want that to look. Those to thought processes took over my class time today.

Out of class I hope to finalize my hook and also finish my intro paragraph so I'll be able to move on to my body paragraphs next week.