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title: the impact of high gasoline prices

intro:

a. hook

b. connecting information

c. thesis statement:

body 1: businesses

A. Transportation, delivery, and chains gets expensive

B. Overall economy goes down.

body2:society

A. when you spend more money for transport you have less money for other stuff.

B. The cost for living will be higher.

body3. people

A. They will have problems with their spending

B. Since they normally use the spendings and gasolines, their spendings everyday will decrease

conclusion:

A. Restate thesis

B.summary

c. concluding sentence with suggestion, prediction or opinion

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a. Hook:
Gasoline prices affect more than just drivers; they influence daily life and the economy as a whole.

b. Connecting information:
Because gasoline is crucial for transportation, any increase in price can cause widespread effects.

c. Thesis statement:
High gasoline prices negatively impact businesses, society, and individuals by increasing costs and reducing spending.

1: Effects on businesses

A. Transportation, delivery services, and supply chains become more expensive.
B. As business costs rise, profits decrease and the overall economy slows down.

2: Effects on Society

A. When people spend more money on transportation, they have less money for other necessities.
B. As a result, the overall cost of living increases.

3: Effects on People

A. Individuals face difficulties managing their spending due to higher fuel costs.
B. Because gasoline is used daily, people reduce their everyday spending to afford transportation.

A. Restate the thesis statement in different words.
B. Summarize the main effects on businesses, society, and individuals.
C. Concluding sentence with a suggestion, prediction, or opinion about controlling gasoline prices in the future.

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Intro

Hook: Have you ever wondered why and how did WAR start?

Connecting info: War usually ignites when it is trigged by a tragic event.

Thesis: There are many different ways a war can start. But the three main reasons are territorial and resource disputes, power and religious conflict.

Body 1

The first type is Territorial and resource disputes, it is a conflict between two or more groups of countries having control over land.

Support detail:

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Choose a topic of your choice. Write the introduction, the first body paragraph, and the topic sentence for each following body paragraphs.

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Choose a topic of your choice. Write the introduction, the first body paragraph, and the topic sentence for each following body paragraphs.

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Firstly, the runners who run quick dashes are the sprinters. They often run 100m races at full speed, making them one of the most competitive types of runners. For example, Usain Bolt is one of them - the sprinters. Through intense training, their legs develop explosive power, allowing them to burst forward quickly. To improve even more, their coaches should train the sprinters even more.

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The shortest distances runner of them all, the sprinter ran the shortest distances, only around 100 meters to 400. The race sometimes will only last for 10 seconds to a minute or so. In order to run fast in a short distance race, they generally have fast and explosive muscles which helps them runs in very short distances. You might be able to tell Sprinters apart from other runners as they usually are very muscular.

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Sprinters are the most well known type of runners. Sprinters need to have explosive muscles, and need to have extremely muscular bodies. Before sprinting, sprinters have to train hard everyday so when the competition comes they are their ready. Not only that but the runners they (Not clear because some may misunderstood this as shoes) need to also have discipline. Practicing everyday makes them one step closer on winning the competition.

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Turn the following paragraph into an essay

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Write a body paragraph about "Sprinter"

Topic sentence: Stating that this body will tell the reader about sprinters.

3-4 supporting sentences

Give example

Give description

Give results

Give suggestions

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Upon hearing the word running, people mostly think about a quick sprint, but there are actually different types of runners. There are three types of runners: the sprinter, middle-distance, and distance. The sprinter runs a 100m dash. In addition, the middle-distance runner went for an 800m run. On the other hand, distance runners run further, at 1-6 miles long.

--> Very good hook.

--> Extra info will be put in the body or either before the thesis statement.

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MINH THÀNH (no idea for this essay dude)

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MINH THÀNH (no idea for this essay dude)

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Did you know that in the world of track-and-field, there are three main types of runners? There are three different types of runners that have been classified: sprinters, middle-distance runners, and distance runners. (well well i have no idea dude)

--> The hook can be changed from a question to a sentence for a more academic tone

--> Your thesis is good

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Some students don't want to study. They want to drop out of school. What are the effects of such situation?

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Some students don't want to study. They want to drop out of school. What are the effects of such situation?

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Write a paragraph between 100 - 150 words. The paragraph must include:

One topic sentence.

3 effects of dropping out of school (with supporting ideas)

Use at least 3 words from the box

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1. Children should learn appropriate behavior in the classroom.

2. Using cell phones is disruptive and disrespectful , but people keep using them during meetings.

3. A home can be permanent damaged by hurricane-force winds.

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1. Children should learn appropriate behaviour in the classroom.

2. People using cellphones during meetings are disruptive and disrespectful.

3. A home can be permanently damaged by hurricane-force winds.

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1. Children should learn appropriate behaviour in the classroom.

2. People using cellphones in meetings is disruptive and disrespectful.

3. A home that can be dammaged by hurricane force winds can be permanent.

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The following is your revision tasks:

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Great Writing 3 - Unit 2.1 - Lesson Summary

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The following is your revision tasks:

Review the vocabulary you have learned.

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Your Padlet homework for today is:

Complete Reading Explorer Unit 1B

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Reading comprehension:

A:

1)B

2)A

3)C

4)D

5)B

Reading skill

A:

1) 180cm or taller

2)Kenya,Ethiopia,Morocco

3)slow-twitch and fast-twitch

4)Greg Louganis

5)Olympic Training center in the USA

B:

T

T

F

F

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1) The mayor made an appeal to the people of the city to stay calm.

2) I would appriciate if you reply soon.

3) Reading books give us more benefical knowledge.

4) Some cars are belonged to the same category.

5) The medicine was prescribed without good cause.

6) The researchers also studied the linguistic characteristics of actual brands.

7) Storms have a natrual disaster.

8) I have a discovery to the Son Doong cave.

9) The tornado destroyed the entire city.

10) The function of the heart is pumping blood to the body.

11) The police investigate the robber who stoled money from the bank.

12) One of the problem is a lack of money.

13) My map shows the way that it leads to the top of the mountains.

14) There was total agreement to start the peace process as soon as possible.

15) Throughout the rainy days, the sky turned blue back.

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The following is your revision tasks:

Please review the lesson summary

Please take photos of your note and textbook for completion of activity 2, 3, 4 Unit 1.

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Your Padlet homework for today is:

Exercise 1: Practice writing topic sentences with clear controlling ideas.

Example practice:

Topic: Traveling by train

Good topic sentence: “Traveling by train is enjoyable because it is comfortable and affordable.”

1. Topic: Online learning

2. Topic: Playing sports

3. Topic: Reading books

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Please review the lesson summary

Please take photos of your note and textbook for completion of activity 6, 10, 14 Unit 1.

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Your Padlet homework for today is:

Exercise 1: Make an outline and write a paragraph about an impressive natural or man-made location in your country.

Your outline should look like this

Location name:

Topic sentence:

What?

Where?

When?

Who?

Why?

How?

After your complete your outline, write your paragraph (5-7 sentences)

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Make 5 sentences with the new vocabulary given. You can change the form of the word if you wish to.

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Make 5 sentences with the new vocabulary given. You can change the form of the word if you wish to.

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The following is your revision tasks:

Please review the lesson summary

Please take photos of your note and textbook for completion of activity 12, 20, 21, 22

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Your Padlet homework for today is:

Exercise 1: Make 5 sentences with the new vocabulary given. You can change the form of the word if you wish to.

Tier Quest Note:

If you only have 5 words, you only have 2 stars.

If can use more than 10 words, you will get 5 stars.

If you can use more than 15 words, you will fulfill the previous homework as well. (for those who haven't finished)

Good luck!

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1) The entire function of this massive program is to appeal pedestrians. Good!

2) Relying on a stranger could either be beneficial or disastrous. Good!

3) Overall, many people appreciated my idea. Good!

4) He investigated the gang leader's movement which led to his fatal death. Good!

5) This disaster occurred because of the man that caused the fuel to leak lack awareness, blowing up the whole town.

Good!

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(This is my 4TH time im crying)

Location name: Phu Quoc

Topic sentence: Phu Quoc is one of the most memorable and unique place

What? What makes it a memorable and unique place

Where? Where is it located

When? When is it discovered

Who? Who discovered it

Why? Why is it different from others

How? How is it approved by unesco

Paragraph:

Phu Quoc is one of the most memorable and unique place for its blend of stunning natural beauty, vibrant local culture and modern attractions. It is located in the Gulf of Thailand and just of the coast of Cambodia. Phu Quoc was inhabited by Khmer people long until the 17th century when a Chinese businessman Mac Cuu and developed it into a trading port. Phu Quoc differs from other places by offering a unique combination of a large, tropical island landscape with developed entertainment complexes, a strong focus on local specialties like fish sauce and seafood. Phu Quoc was approved by UNESCO in 2006 as a world biosphere reserve when the Kien Giang biosphere reserve was recognized, which includes the island and a system of islands in the Gulf of Thailand.

FINALLY

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Location name: Nha Trang

Topic sentence: Nha Trang is the most beautiful place in Vietnam.

What: What is really beautiful in Vietnam?

Where: Where was Nha Trang located?

Who: Who visits it?

Why: Why this place is important?

How: How can people explore it?

Paragraph:

Nha Trang is the most beautiful place in Vietnam, people would visit Nha Trang if it's beautiful. Nha Trang is located in Khanh Hoa Province, Vietnam. Tourists visit it if they like the beach or the Ponagar Tower. Nha Trang is an important place because the beach is very beautiful with clear ocean water and clean sand. The way people can explore is the boat tours because they are a great way to discover the three magnificent islands and they provided an excellent means.

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Location name: Son doong cave

Topic sentence: Son doong cave is some of the most biggest and most beautiful caves in Viet Nam

What: What is so special about it?

Where: Where is it located.

When: When was it formed

Who: Who visits it

Why: Why is it so impressive and important

How: How can people explore it

Paragraph:

Son Doong Cave is a fascinating natural wonder that must be protected because of its beauty and importance. It is located in Vietnam and is known for its breathtaking and mysterious environment. Many people visit it to see its stunning sights and experience its peaceful nature. To make sure it stays safe, people work together to keep the cave clean and prevent any harm. Protecting the cave also helps the plants and animals inside it live safely. Taking care of Son Doong Cave will let future generations enjoy its beauty and learn from its natural wonders.

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1. Online learning helps children in education and with their when they can't go to school. (Good!)

2. Playing sports makes us stronger in different ways. (Good!)

3. Reading books is a make your creativity mind richer. (Too specific)

--> Reading books make your mind richer in many ways.

Topic sentence shouldn't be too specific

Topic sentence should be specific, not too general.

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1. He looks appealing today.

2. I appreciate your benefits for the country.

3. That kit looks very beneficial.

4. The car crash caused the whole road to be blocked.

5. His characteristic for this job is highly needed.

6. That volcanic eruption is a disaster.

7. His discovery of outer space changed the whole world.

8. I can describe everything in this entire universe.

9. That new TV functions very well.

10. The police stepped into the investigation 2 days ago.

11. I am lacking resources to build this boat.

12. His stupid action led to his detention.

13. His computer is massive.

14. I need to maintain a steady speed to win this race.

15. My birthday occurred 2 days ago.

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1) Online classes are a great way to learn because students are allowed to study at home and manage their own schedule class meetings. (Too specific)

--> Online classes are a great way to learn for many students.

2) Playing sports can help you get strength and energy by 3 ways.

3) Reading books can help you understand more about the information of the book, help you find main ideas, cause-effects,... and a lot of intresting facts about the book. (Too specific)

--> Reading books is helpful in many ways.

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1. Online learning provides students with flexible access to education while presenting unique challenges that traditional classrooms may not face. Good!

2. Did you know that sports can be an exercise for your bran but not just you body.

As a topic sentence, it should be a STATEMENT, NOT A QUESTION, dear.

--> It is believed that sports offer great benefits not only our body, but also our brain

3. Reading books is one are some of the best ways to expand human knowledge their (who are their???) knoledge.

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1. B

2. A

3. C

4. D

5. B

_____

A.

1. 180cm or taller

2. Kenya, Ethiopia, Morocco

3. slow-twitch and fast-twitch

4. Greg Louganis

5. Olympic Training center in the United States

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B.

1. T

2. T

3. F

4. F

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1) Online learning brings you to a different world. (Too general)

--> Online learning offers benefits to both teachers and students. (You expect to read about: benefits for teachers & benefits for students)

2) Sports are one of the ways to help you become better. (Good!)

3) Have you ever acknowledged why there are so many books that have been written?

As a topic sentence, it should be a STATEMENT, NOT A QUESTION, dear.

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1. Online learning is a great way to learn for faraway classes. (Good)

2. Playing sports is one of the best ways for you to exercise and keeps you fit, not only that, it can also keep your brain sharp too. (Too specific)

--> Playing sports is great for your body and mind.

3. There are many ways that reading a book can help you! (Good!)

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Activity 14 - Turning ideas into paragraph

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Activity 14 - Turning ideas into paragraph

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Topic sentence: One of the most important group of people in their life is their family.
who?: Who is in the family? Good
What? What generally happens in the family? Good
when? When do your family born. Not clear

Why? Family is important

One of the most important groups of people in our life is our family. Our family includes our parents, brothers, sisters, and sometimes grandparents. They are the people who love us and take care of us every day. We are born into our family when we come into the world, and they are the first people we meet. Families help us grow, teach us good values, and support us when we need help. That is why family is very important in our lives.

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Topic sentence: Football is the easiest sport.

Who? People of all ages.

What? Play football for fun or exercise.

When? Anytime, especially after school or on weekends.

Where? At school, in the park, or even on the street.

Why? Because it does not need expensive equipment and is simple to understand.

How? Just kick the ball and try to score goals with friends.

Football is the easiest sport. People of all ages can play it. They often play football for fun or exercise. It can be played anytime, especially after school or on weekends. Football can be enjoyed at school, in the park, or even on the street. It is easy because it does not require expensive equipment and the rules are simple to understand. To play, you just need to kick the ball and try to score goals with your friends.

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Topic sentence: Tracks and Fields is the easiest sport.
Who?: Who is competing?
What?: What makes it the easiest?
When? When was this sport created?

Why?: Why is this sport important to know?

Tracks and Fields is the easiest sport because it only requires basic movements. These movements include such as running, jumping, or throwing, which most people already know how to do. Despite their skills and levels, anyone from children to adults can compete in this sport. It was first introduced in the ancient Olympic Games in Greece around 776 BC, making it one of the oldest sports in history. This sport is important to know because it helps build speed, strength, and endurance, and it is often used in schools and training programs to promote overall health. Overall, its basic and simple movements make Tracks and Fields the easiest sport to learn.

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Volleyball is an easy sport. William D. Morgan is the person who invented volleyball. When we play, we need a ball and a 6.6 foot tall net. You should play it on in the morning or in are a cool evening at the beach. You will need some of the sport equipment. In volleyball, we just need to pass the ball to the other side. If you want to be a champion you could just try harder than others.

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Reading Comprehension:

A:

1. B

2. A

3. C

4. D

5. B

Reading skill:

A:

1. 180cm or taller

2. Kenya, Ethiopia, Morocco

3. oxygen

4. Greg Louganis

5. Olympic training centre in US

B:

1. T

2. T

3. F

4. F

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Location name: Ha Long Bay

Topic sentence: Ha Long Bay is one of the most impressive natural wonders in Vietnam.

What? What is so special about it?

Where? Where is it located?

When? When was it formed?

Who? Who visits it?

Why? Why is it impressive or important?

How? How can people explore it?

Paragraph:

Ha Long Bay is one of the most impressive natural wonders in Vietnam. It is famous for its thousands of limestone islands and islets that rise dramatically from emerald waters. The bay is located in Quang Ninh Province, in the northeast of the country. Formed over millions of years, it attracts both local and international tourists. Ha Long Bay is impressive because of its breathtaking scenery, unique geological formations, and cultural significance. Visitors can explore it by taking boat tours, enjoying cruises, kayaking, or visiting its famous caves. Its combination of natural beauty and adventure makes Ha Long Bay a must-see destination in Vietnam.

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One of the easiest sports that some players can play when they're in a championship match is ping-pong Too specific. It's easy to play, there are opportunities oppurtunities for all of age groups, and it's great for fitness. Ping pong is easy to learn because it has low physical demands, simple rules, and a quick entry barrier for playing. The best time to play ping pong is whenever you can and feel motivated, as it offers excellent physical and mental health benefits, such as improved cognitive function and heart health, at any age. The place where people can play is at the sports club that has ping pong tables or a practice room also has had ping pong tables. The reason why people enjoy playing ping pong because it is a fun, social, and accessible sport with significant physical and mental benefits, offering a unique challenge through its fast pace and strategic play and it provides exercise with a low risk of injury, improves hand-eye coordination and reflexes, and can be enjoyed by people of all ages and abilities in various indoor settings.

There are some ways to start playing ping pong. First, find someone to play with. You probably want to begin by playing someone who is at about your skill level or a little better, and preferably someone who isn't aggressively competitive. Second, decide who serves to hit first then return the ball. Next, score the points by hit but opponents missed the hit. Lastly, when time's up with the most results, the player will won the game.

Irrevelant

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Location name: Son Doong cave

Topic sentence: Son Doong cave is special in many ways.

What? What makes Son Doong special?

Where? Where is Son Doong cave?

Who? Who found Son Doong?

When? When did we found Son Doong?

Why? Why did we name the cave Son Doong?

How? How did Son Doong became popular?

Paragraph:

Son Doong cave is special cave. As Son Doong is the biggest cave in the world, explorers would love to visit Son Doong. Son Doong cave is at in Quang Binh, Vietnam. The first person that found discover / found out the cave is Mr. Ho Khanh, a lumberjack. He found discover / found out Son Doong on a rainy day in 1990. We call the mountain Son Doong because "Son" means mountain , and "Doong " is the name of a near by valley. Son Doong became the biggest cave in the world and also became very popular.

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Location name:son doong cave

Topic sentence:son doong cave is one of viet nam's cutural treasures

What: what makes this cave speaciel

Where: where is so doong cave

When: when is it formed

Who: who dicovered it

Why:why people like it

How: How did it got the name son doong

paragraph:

Son doong cave is one of viet nam's cultural treasures. It is the biggest cave around the world, explorers would love to visit son doong cave because. Son doong cave is located in quang binh. Son doong cave was first dicovered by a forager named Ho khanh, he was seeking shelter on rainy day but found a massive cave though his didn't explore it. We call this cave so doong because Son means mountain and doong is the name of a nearby ethnic minority village. Son doong cave is one of the biggest cave in the world but also some of vietnam's cutural treasures

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1)I appreciate your discovery to benefit our entire fossils category and to maintain our company’s function. (Word count: 7) Good!

2)I recommend you to rely on your prediction throughout the whole process. (Word count: 5) Good!

3)We have a lack of clues to lead to the answer to this robbing situation, I suggest we stop the investigation for now. (Word count: 3) Good!

4)If they had the gem in the previous match, it would give them a massive benefit for the next upcoming one and it will lead to our shop’s disaster????. (Word count: 4) (Is this some kind of fantasy world?)

5)Regardless of the lack of information, the group was is still the first to discover the treasure in the treasure hunt event. (Word count: 3) OK!

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1. I appreciate the massive discovery caused by a disaster dissaster???. (Technically speaking, a disaster did not cause a discovery)

--> I appreciate your massive discovery after such a disaster.

1. I lack the overall skill in the process of making a robot. Good!

2. The worst year in history has occurred in ad 536, throughout the year their were plunging temperatures, failed crops, and widespread famine lead to a huge number of deaths in that year. Good!

3. A good leader can maintain a large number amount of people regardless or skill.

4. It's very hard to make an entire army or fully functioning robots that can do anything. Good!

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1. She is tends to rely on the entire process. OK!

--> "tend" is like "play". We don't say: "She is play football", w say: "She plays football"

1. She is regardless of the cause of the disaster???

--> "Regardless of" means "despite", we don't say "She is despite the cause of disaster." as it doesn't make sense.

--> Regardless of her hard work, she didn't pass the test.

1. He would investigate the massive discovery. Good!

2. She lacks have a lacking beneficial characteristics. OK!

3. Throughout the recommendation, we decided to maintain the categories that are appreciated apreciated. OK!

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Reading Comprehension:

A:

1. B

2. A

3. C

4. D

5. B

Reading skill:
A:

1. 180cm or taller

2. Kenya, Ethiopia, Morocco

3. oxygen

4. Greg Louganis

5. Olympic training centre in US

B:

1. T

2. T

3. F

4. F

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A.

1. B

2. A

3. C

4. D

5. B

A.

1. 180cm or taller

2. Kenya, Ethiopia, and Morocco

3. oxygen

4. Greg Louganis

5. Olympic Training Center

B.

1. T

2. T

3. F

4. F

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The following is your revision tasks:

Please review the lesson summary

Please take photos of your note and textbook

Review Class Recording

Your homework is now on the new system. Please follow the these instruction to login.

Step 1: Go to https://elearning.sworld.com.vn/login to log in to your student accounts

Step 2: Log in to your account. The username will be your middle name (first letter is capital) + your name + your date of birth (dd/mm/yy). Your password is the same as your username

Example:

We have the following student info:

Student's name: Nguyen Thi Huong Ly

Date of birth: 19/08/2012

So, here login info will be:

Username: Huongly190812

Password: Huongly190812

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Did you know that in the world of the track and fields, there are different types of runners? Sprinters for example, run the shortest distance(only about 100 meters) and their races can last only up to 10 to 20 seconds. Nowadays top runners from around the world can sprint a 100 meter dash with a time under 10 seconds. Runners comes in a variety of forms and can be seperated into 3 types: sprinters, middle distance runners and distance runners.

--> The connecting information is focusing too much on the sprinters.

--> Change the Hook from a question to a sentence to make your writing more formal.

--> Your thesis is good.

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Did you know that in the world of track-and-field, there are three main types of runners? These runners are classified into three groups: Sprinters, Middle distance runners and distance runners.. (i am better when i can do something freely, not with a method >:/ )

--> Good thesis statement.

--> The hook needs to be changed to a sentence rather a question for a more formal tone.

--> You can add connecting information if you will.

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Did you know that in the world of the track and fields, there are different types of runners? Sprinters for example, run the shortest distance(only about 100 meters) and their races can last only up to 10 to 20 seconds. Nowadays top runners from around the world can sprint a 100 meter dash with a time under 10 seconds. Runners comes in a variety of forms and can be seperated into 3 types: sprinters, middle distance runners and distance runners.

Fix:

In the world of tracks and fields there a 3 different types of runners. Sprinters for example, run the shortest distance(only about 100 meters) and their races can last only up to 10 to 20 seconds. Middle distance runners run for about half a mile or 800 meters and races take longer. And lastly distance runners run for about a mile(1600m) to 6 miles(10000m) and their races take much longer than middle distance and sprinters.

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Many people didn't know there are actually 3 different types of runners. They are separate according to the way they run: sprinters; middle distance runners, and rdistance runners.

--> Add connecting information if you will.

--> Good hook & thesis statement

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Title: The Causes of War

I. Introduction

Hook: Wars have happened throughout history and affected millions of people around the world.

Connecting information: Every through war is different, many have started for similar reasons.

Thesis Statement: Wars usually begin because of political problems, economic struggles, social or cultural differences.

II. Political Causes

Supporting details 1:

Countries may argue over power, control.

Poor leadership causes conflicts to get worse

Alliances pull other countries into war

III. Economic Cause

Fight over land and resources

Money problems create tension between nations

Some wants to expand their health

IV. Social and Cultural Cause

Religious and ethnic differences causes conflicts

Strong nationalism lead to war

Past conflicts create long-lasting angers

V. Conclusion

By learning why wars start, people can understand better how to avoid war in the future.

THE END

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Title : Some Common Reasons for Quitting a Job

1. Introduction

A. Hook: There are alot of common reasons that makes people quit their own job.

B. Connecting information: Young people these days easily quit their job because they got low payed discouraging, and that's just one in all of the reasons.

C. Thesis statement: The reasons for quitting a job are low pay, bad managers, and no chance to grow.

2. Body Paragraph 1 : low pay

A. Salaries are not distributed fairly.

B. Little or no raises and bonuses.

3. Body paragraph 2 : Bad managers

A. Boss unkind and not fair => worker sad and angry

B. Bad manager => make job difficult => worker wants to quit.

4. Body paragraph 3 : No chance to grow

A. Doesn't help to achieve worker's goals

B. Not the job that the worker wanted

5. Conclusion

A. Restatement of the thesis

B. Summary of main points

C. Concluding sentence with suggestion, prediction or opinion