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How would it be to live without some form of transportation?
the automobile revolutionized the world the work that is used with it, is very important.
Nowadays, it is very useful for us, but the inconvenience, which is combustion, is a contaminant but electricity is already being opted for.

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The inventions that we see right there are the most importat important inventions for humans because we use them most of the time.
I  think internet it´s  is an invention which can help us to know a lot of thing things about fitness, health but now it can quit privacy and cause stress in some people that spend a lot of time in the internet.

Interner Internet can create a lot of online frienship friendship but it remove removes  communication in the real life, I saw people that are walking and always with his their cellphone and sometimes I talk to them and they don't reply because they don't listen or don't want to listen.

I think the car was invented by Ford in Germany but I am not sure, I like a lot the cars (CHANGE WORD ORDER) because I can go to the school, to my work, to eat, but it's pollutant and the people who walks is walk are healthier than the people that has have a car. /CHECKED. Maritza.
Renata, be careful with spelling.

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The internet ,  is the large system of connected computers around the world that allows people to share information and communicate with each other.
A classic example is, now a days nowadays you go to somewhere and you need the internet to communicate with your friends and meet somewhere met at some place.
If you have acces access to the internet you can order online via a website.
To name another example; if you want to know information about anything, you just go to the internet and there it is. /CHECKED. Maritza.

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Can you imagine the relationship that exists between everyone?

Every time someone invents something, another object whose characteristics are similar to the new one, works as a precedent , (like the computer, which contains light and the cell phone, have as precedent the light bulb who invented Tomas Alba Edison). PASSIVE VOICE WOULD WORK BETTER HERE.

The advantages of that object, for example, is to illuminate the spaces, especially at night. The disadvantage is that it contaminates and expends the energy that must be paid later.

The cell phone is a very practical invention to communicate at any time with anyone. It can be used by people who have nothing to do in their free time, you can use social networks, games, photographs, etc. Some examples of that THOSE activities are the games on Facebook like "Uno" "CityVille" or "FarmVille".

The disadvantage at present is the lack of privacy with such quick access to social networks, it has been shown that there is cyberbullying or other social aspects. Another disadvantage is that the mobile phone that is broken can't be fixed (must go with an expert).

The Internet is a more practical, quick and easy search source. It is used in school, work or leisure. The disadvantage is the spam information or the type of violent or adult content that children have access to.

The automobile is an invention that changed the way people transport themselves, but it is one of the most serious sources of pollution and is also one of the main causes of serious accidents. /CHECKED. Maritza.
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The wheel as simple as it looks, it was one of the inventions in the history of the human civilisation, to give an example try to imagine that you have to move a big and really heavy rock without all the inventions that we have today. The invention of the wheel make easier for the human to transport things, nowadays is one of the most used items, used by cars and several machines, that make the work easier for everyone.

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The automobile was, in AT the beginning, a luxury item only the most richest people could afford; an automobile but as time goes, it became more accessible from the regular people or industry.

The definitive inventor of the automobile isn’t clear, an example of this is Nicolas Joseph Cugnot who is widely credited with building the first full-scale self-propelled mechanical vehicle or car in about 1769; he created a steam-powered tricycle but most say it was the Benz Patent-Motorwagen, first built in 1885 was the first automobile in the world whom in the actually is Mercedes-benz  which is a popular luxury car company, independent mind who invented the first automobile I think now the the automobile is an essential part of the life, there are people who have to work several kilometers away from home or products that have to be transported from the factory to the storage of the stores those are who are really benefiting of the invention of the automobile.

But there are always have two faces of the same coin, whit WITH lower prices and more people interested in acquiring an automobile, the number of automobiles drastically increased the problems like the pollution or the traffic where you lose WASTE some time. /CHECKED. Maritza.
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Inventions have helped humanity to evolve, whose examples I will mention below:

At the beginning of the century, the first invention that was made was the light bulb, invented by Thomas Alba Edison, with the passage of time this invention has evolved into led lights that help to save energy.

The internet, a practical invention for leisure, schools, all kinds of research and also for those seeking recipes for fitness and healthy eating habits. Even the internet helps people to find jobs, in other parts of the world, and keep the families in touch with the different ways of communications, that I will explain to you next.

With all these technological advances, the cellphone has served to have an easier and faster communication. It is amazing to see the capacity that those small devices can have, storing all kinds of apps, Facebook is a classic example of this, a social media platform that became out of control throughout the years and as all things that get out of control there are repercussions, a good example of this is crime rates and privacy problems, these types of problems can contribute to stress and as a consequence of that, people that don’t sleep enough and have bad health.

The automobile has served many people for transportation, although they are not good for the environment, they do make life a lot easier and give us the possibility to perhaps maintain a friendship with people who live far away, discover new interests and forms of entertainment outside our town, go to work, and get the most out of our free time. /CHECKED. Maritza. Well done! My only suggestion would be to improve the punctuation, use semicolons ( ; ) in combination with commas and periods.

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The light BULB is an invention that was very important for the humankind. Before it's inventions, (NOT CLEAR) we used candles to see in the dark. With the invention of the light bulb, people were able to light dark areas in their house, and it offered a brighter light than the candle.

The car, which was created by Gottlieb Daimler, is another invention that changed the daily lives of everyone in the world. The first models, which were not affordable for normal persons like the cars we have this THESE days, offered the ability of transporting people without the need of having animals pull a car, and with the years it evolutioned EVOLVED constantly, making the cars more affordable, safer, and with new features like radio, bluetooth, etc.

The internet, which is defined as a virtual network that connects different devices and allows each of them to send information to another OTHER ones, is an invention that I would consider the most important to this day. I cannot imagine my life without internet. We use it for everything, from consulting information, to sending people files and sharing work, and the fact that it is accesible anywhere, is what really makes it the greatest invention.

Finally, the cellphone is another great invention that completely changed the way we communicate with other persons. Nowadays, the cellphone evolutioned EVOLVED to what we know as smarthpones, SMARTPHONES which also offer millions of app for different purposes./CHECKED. Maritza. Well done, just be careful with spelling.

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The four inventions that are shown at the beginning, completly COMPLETELY changed the life of the human HUMANS; an example of this is the light, WHICH facilitated the night vision but in ON the other hand ,we use a lot of energy. The cell phone help HELPS us in the fast way of communication, IT is very useful, thanks to the internet we can be in many places at the same time, and currently we use it for school, work, and in the free time, finally the car is very useful, but it is one of the causes of pollution in the enviroment ENVIRONMENT. / CHECKED. Maritza.
You need to separate ideas with the appropriate punctuation.

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The cellphone, which was created by Martin Cooper, has become so important in our daily life, and not just for communication, for every single thing we do every day. With a big catalog CATALOGUE of applications, cellphones simplify our life, every single app is created to solve a particular activity or problem. We have applications for fitness, to check how many hours have we sleep (CHANGE WORD ORDER AND CHECK GRAMMAR); We even use them for school, making the learning method more simple.
Now, I can't imagine myself without this technology. A classic example, and it happens often, is when you go out and you forget your phone at home, you don't feel quite well. All day, you feel that something is missing and that's not a cool feeling. I could say, that's one thing I don't really like about cell phones.  We all become codependent to it./CHECKED. Maritza. Well done.

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My opinion about these inventions is that this THESE 4 inventions marked our way of life and, as a consequence of that, they made history.

In THE first place, we have de THE cellphone, I think that this one is the most used today, in ON THE one hand, it turns out to be extremely useful as a communication and working tool, but on the other hand, it turns out to be a very large distraction and loses its true value.

The next one is the internet, I think this one is the most important because we have internet everywhere, actually, anyone who doesn't have access to the Internet is lost and out of this new modern world.

This THESE two inventions have helped us to improve our communication around the world, the cellphone and the internet are two of the most important inventions in the history of mankind.

Now, the car and the light.

The light improves our visibility, which allows us to see and know many more places, and obviously, when IT is dark and we can’t see, we have light.

The car, is by itself awesome, because regardless of the technology and advances it has year after year, its main function (transportation) is a brilliant invention. /CHECKED. Maritza. Well done in general, just pay attention to some words that are repeated, look for synonyms.