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The line graph below shows the urbanisation rate in south korea and indone sia.

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The line graph below shows the urbanisation rate in south korea and indone sia.

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The line graph shows urbanization rates in two countries, Indonesia and Korea, from 1960 to 2009. The graph shows the difference between the two countries in terms of urbanization rates.
On the whole, urbanisation rate in south Korea is high and increasing over the past 10 years. In the mid-1960s, the rate of urbanisation in South Korea was about 28%,followed by a sharp rise of 10% in 1969. Then, the rate increase sharply throughout the next 30
years period to about 18% in 1999.And stay the same towards 2009.
Indonesia's urbanisation rate was about 20% in 1969, roughly 10% lower than that of South Korea.Then, the rate remain stable at around 20% from 1969 to 1979. In the next 15 years, there was a steady rise in the rate of
urbanisation in this country. From
1999 to 2009, Indonesia's urbanisation rate rose sharply,reaching over 50%. In a general
sense, the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia has risen steadily in the
first 30 years and decrease sharply
in the following 10 years.
In conclusion, South Korea has a
much higher urbanisation rate than
Indonesia. And in South Korea it
almost doubled by the end of the
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The urbanisation rate in Indonesia and south Korea

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The urbanisation rate in Indonesia and south Korea

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The line graph shows the rate of urbanisation in two  countries, Indonesia and south Korea, from the mind 1960s to 2009.

Indonesia, in the mind 1960s the rate urbanisation in Indonesia was about 17%, in 1969 increased by 3% . Then, the rate still stability at around 20% in ten years time from 1969 to 1979 .In  the next fifteen years from 1995 to 2009  the country has a gradually more stable urbansation rate. In 2009, indonesia's urbansation rade increased sharply, reaching over 50% .

South Korea's urbansation rate was about 50% in 1969 roughly 10% , higher than thats of indonesia. The rate urbansation rise sharply  the next thirty year , about 82% in 2005 and from 2005 to 2009  the urbansation rate still say the same.

In conclusion, from the graph, it can be seen that both countries have stable speeds but with korea , it almost doubled at the end of the period.

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The line graph shows the urbanization rate in Korea and Indonesia from 1960 to 2009.

Between the 1960s and 1968, the urbanization rate in Indonesia was about 18% and reached 20% in 1969.The urbanization rate of 20% remains the same and lasts up to ten years. From 1979 to 1995, the rate of urbanization started to increase but slowly. In the next 15 years, the urbanization rate has increased sharply and reached 50% in 2009.

In 1969, the urbanization rate in South Korea reached 30% higher than in Indonesia 10%. Over the next 30 years, this rate increased sharply by about 80% and remained stable in 2009.

In conclusion, both countries have their own urbanization process, South Korea, the urbanization rate increases and develops more strongly than Indonesia.

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The urbanisation rate in Indonesia and south Korea

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The urbanisation rate in Indonesia and south Korea

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The line graph shows the rate of urbanisation in two countries, namely Indonesia and South Korea, from the mid-1960s to 2009.

a.Indonesia

In the mid-1960s, the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia was about 17%, followed by a slight increase of 3% in 1969. Then the rate remained stable at around 20% for a ten-year period from 1969 to 1979. In the next fifteen years, there was a steady rise in the rate of urbanisation in this country.

b.South Korea’s

South Korea's urbansation rate was about 50% in 1969 roughly 10% , higher than thats of indonesia. The rate urbansation rise sharply  the next thirty year , about 82% in 2005 and from 2005 to 2009  the urbansation rate still say the same.

In conclusion, from the graph, it can be seen  both countries have stable speeds but with korea , it almost doubled at the end of the period.

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Let’s take a look at the graph showing the urbanization rate of Indonesia and South Korea from the mid 1960s to 2009.

In the mid -1969 to 1979 the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia was about 18-20%.Between 1979 and 1999 the rate of urbanisation Indonesia increased steadily by about 20% to 35%.From 1995 to 2009,Indonesia’s rate increased sharply,reaching over 50%.

It’s Indonesia,let’s see the increase in urban rate in South Korea.South Korea’s urbanisation rate was about 30% in 1969,Korea’s rate was higher than that of Indonesia at that time . The rate went up sharply 82%in 2005 and then levelled off towards 2009.

From witch we can draw coclusions. Both countries have a certain rate of urbanisation growth but in South Korea Its almost soubled by the of the period.

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The line graph shows the rate of urbanisation in two countries, namely Indonesia and South Korea, from the mid-1960s to 2009.

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The line graph shows the rate of urbanisation in two countries, namely Indonesia and South Korea, from the mid-1960s to 2009.

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The rate of urbanisation in South Korea increased sharply from the mid-1960s to 2009. In 1969, the urbanisation rate of South Korea was about 30%, in 2005 the urbanisation rate was over 80% and gradually increased until 2009.

In the mid-1960s, the urbanisation rate in Indonesia was about 17%, then increased slightly by 3% in 1969 and stabilized until 1979. From 1979 to 1995 the urbanisation rate in Indonesia increased steadily, them from 1995 to 2009 the rate of urbanisation increased sharply to over 50%.

In condusion, it is clear that both South Korea and Indonesia have increased their urbanisation rate, but the urbanisation rate in South Korea have doubled during this period and was 30% higher than in Indonesia in 2009.

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According to the graph, the urbanization trend in countries such as Malaysia and South Korea is on the rise.                                                 Especially from 1979 to 2009, the urbanization rate increased many times. South Korea had a remarkable increase in urbanization rates between 1979 and 1989 and slowed down slightly in 2009 from 20% to more than 80%. Meanwhile, Malaysia has a low urbanization rate and only increased from 1989 to 2009, only from over 20% to nearly 50%.                                          The trend of the graph tends to go up, grow rapidly, proving that the urbanization rate is happening extremely quickly.   

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According to the graph, the urbanization trend in countries such as Malaysia and South Korea is on the rise.                                                 Especially from 1979 to 2009, the urbanization rate increased many times. South Korea had a remarkable increase in urbanization rates between 1979 and 1989 and slowed down slightly in 2009 from 20% to more than 80%. Meanwhile, Malaysia has a low urbanization rate and only increased from 1989 to 2009, only from over 20% to nearly 50%.                                          The trend of the graph tends to go up, grow rapidly, proving that the urbanization rate is happening extremely quickly.   

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       The line chart below compares and contrasts data on the differences in the amount of urbanisation rate, earned by two states, namely South Korea and Indonesia, over a forty-year period from 1969 to 2009.
     
                Overall, the trend in urbanisation proportion in all of two nations is upturned. South Korea’s urbanisation rate was much higher than that of Indonesia.
In the mid of 1960s, the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia was about 17%, which then increased slightly and reached 20% in 1969. After that, this number was levelled off at around 20% for a ten-year period from 1969 to 1979. From 1979 to 1995, there was a steady growth in the rate of urbanisation in this country. Throughout the next fifteen-year, Indonesia’s urbanisation rate rised sharply, peaking at over 50% in 2009.
The rate of urbanisation in South Korea was about 30%, roughly 10% higher than that of Indonesia. The percentage went up rapidly during the next thirty-year period to about 82% in 2005, and then remained stable towards 2009.

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       The line chart below compares and contrasts data on the differences in the amount of urbanisation rate, earned by two states, namely South Korea and Indonesia, over a forty-year period from 1969 to 2009.
     
                Overall, the trend in urbanisation proportion in all of two nations is upturned. South Korea’s urbanisation rate was much higher than that of Indonesia.
In the mid of 1960s, the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia was about 17%, which then increased slightly and reached 20% in 1969. After that, this number was levelled off at around 20% for a ten-year period from 1969 to 1979. From 1979 to 1995, there was a steady growth in the rate of urbanisation in this country. Throughout the next fifteen-year, Indonesia’s urbanisation rate rised sharply, peaking at over 50% in 2009.
The rate of urbanisation in South Korea was about 30%, roughly 10% higher than that of Indonesia. The percentage went up rapidly during the next thirty-year period to about 82% in 2005, and then remained stable towards 2009.

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The graph shows the urbanization rate in South Korea and Indonesia, from 1969 to 2009.
In the early 1960s, Indonesia's urbanization rate was about 17%.  By 1969, it increased by 3% to 20%.  After ten years from 1969 to 1979, the urbanization rate remained stable.  From 1979-1999 increased by about 15%, so the urbanization rate in this period is 35%.  From 1999 to 2009 , the urbanization rate has grown strongly from 35% to more than 50% .
The urbanization rate in South Korea in 1969 was about 30%, 10% higher than Indonesia.  After 20 years, 1969-1989, the urbanization rate increased from 30% to about 70%.  Continued strong growth from 1989-1999 increased to about 12%, reaching 82%.  From 1999-2009, there was a stable urbanization rate.
Thus, the urbanization rate in Indonesia and South Korea has increased over the years.  Shows the economic development of countries.  South Korea in particular , with the rate more than doubling from 1969-2009 .

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The line graph shows the rate of urbanisation in two countries, namely Indonesia and South Korea, from the mid-1960s to 2009.

In the mid-1960s, the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia was about 17%, followed by a slight increase of 3% in 1969. Then the rate remained stable at around 20% for a ten-year period from 1969 to 1979. In the next fifteen years, there was a steady rise in the rate of urbanisation in this country. From 1995 to 2009, Indonesia's urbanisation rate increased sharply, reaching over 50%.South Korea's urbanisation rate was about 30% in 1969, roughly 10% higher than that of Indonesia. The rate went up sharply throughout the next thirty-year period to about 82% in 2005, and then levelled off towards 2009.

In conclusion, it is clear that while both countries experienced a growth in their urbanisation rate, in South Korea it almost doubled by the end of the period.

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The line graph below the urbanisation rate in South Korea and Indonesia 

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The line graph below the urbanisation rate in South Korea and Indonesia 

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the line mid -1960s, the rate of urbanisation in Two countries, namely Indonesia and South Korea, from the mid -1960s to 2009.

In the mid-1960 , the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia was about 17%,follower by a slight increase of 3% in 1969. Then the rate remained stable at around 20% for a ten-year period from 1969 to 1979. In the next fifteen years, there was a steady rise in the rate of urbanisation in this country. From 1995 to 2009 , Indonesia's urbanisation rate increased sharply,  reaching over 50%.

South Korea's urbanisation rate was about 30% in 1969,roughly 10% higher than that of Indonesia.  The rate went up sharply throughout the next thirty-year period to about 82% in 2005 , and then leveled off towards 2009.

In conclusion, it is clear that while both countries experienced a growth in their urbanisation rate, in South Korea it almost doubled by the end of the period.

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Urbanisation is the process by which urban areas grow bigger as more and more people leave the countryside to live in towns and cities.  The line graph show the urbanisation rate in South Korea and Indonesia for the period from 1969 to 2009.

In the mid - 1960s , the urbanization rate in Indonesia was about 17% .  Then from 1969 to 1979 the rate was relatively stable at around 20% .  In the following years , the urbanization rate increased and reached over 50% in 2009 .

In general , the urbanization rate of the two countries has increased .  However , in South Korea it almost doubled by the end of the period .

Print conclusion .  In the two countries , Indonesia and South Korea , both experience a different urbanization process .  But we can see it more early in South Korea .  Almost double Indonesia in the last years .

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The line graph shows the rate of urbanisation in two countries, namely Indonesia and South Korea from the mids 1960 to 2009.
In the mid 1960, the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia was about 17%, followed by a slight increase of 3% in 1969. Then the rate remained stable at around 20% for a ten- year peried from 1969 to 1979. In the next fifteen years, there was a steady rise in the rate of urbanisation in this country. From 1995 to 2009, Indonesia's urbanisation rate increased sharply, reaching over 50%.
South's Korea's urbanisation rate was about 30% in 1969, roughly 10% higher than that of Indonesia. The rate went up sharply if throughout the next thirty- year period to about 82% in 2005, and then levelled off towards 2009.
In conclusion, it is dear that while both countries experienced a growtb in their urbanisation rate, in South Korea ít almost doubled by the end of the period.

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The line graph below shows the urbanisation rate in south korea and Indonesia write a description of the trends in the graph.urbanisation has increased dramaticilly the line graph illiestrates the rate of urbanisation in two countries which are south korea and indonesia between the mid 1960s and 2009, in the mid 1960s Indonesia urban rate was about 18%, which then increased to 20% in 1969. After that the rate levelled off at around 20% for a period of ten years from 1969 to 1979. From 1979 to 1995 the rate of urbanisation increased gradually thougnout the nest fifteen years,the was a     rise in the rate of urbanisation in Indonesia peaking at 50% in 2009 the rate of urbanisation in south korea was about 30% in 1969 roughly 10% higher than that of Indonesia daring the next thirty years,the rate went up sharply to about 82% in2005 and then remaind stable to wards 2009. In conclusion, it can be seen clearly that both countries under went a grouth in thier urbanisation rate. however, in south korea it almost doabled by the end of the period

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The rate of urbanization between the two states, Korea and Indonesia.

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The rate of urbanization between the two states, Korea and Indonesia.

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According to the current situation, urbanization is one of the phenomena taking place around the world, on a very large scale. Besides industrialization, urbanization is also associated with the country's socio-economic development rate. The chart below is a comparison of data on the difference in urbanization rates, collected over a period of time. 40 years from 1969 to 2009 for two states, Korea and Indonesia.

Looking at the graph it can be seen that the rates in the two countries are increasing. In Korea, this rate is quite high and has been increasing steadily for many years, in the period from 1969-1989 it increased to about 35%. But from 1989-1999 it decreased significantly with 1989 reaching about 63%. and 1999 is about 78% and from 1999-2009 there seems to be no change in urbanization rate.

In Indonesia, the urbanization rate is much lower than that of Korea. The period from 1969-1979 did not fluctuate much, remained at 20%. From 1979-1999, it increased slowly to 32%.And from 1999-2009 increased by about 18% to reach 50% of the urbanization rate.

Through the graph of the rate of urbanization, we can see that Korea is a country with rapid growth in the early stages, but then it slows down and stabilizes at more than 80% in the last period from 1999 to 2009. As for Indonesia, on the contrary, it increased slowly in the first period from 1969-1989 at less than 30%, then steadily increased and kept more than 50% from 1985-2009.
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The line graph shows the rate of urbanisation in two countries, namely indonesia and south korea, from the mid 1960s to 2009.Overall, as can be shown from this graph that there was a steady increase in the rate of urbanization in both of the two countries over the period of the given time. South Korea both experienced a steep rise and had a higher urbanization ratio than Indonesia.In terms of South Korea urbanization, its rate started at just only, 30% in 1969 and then, increased dramatically by 40% over the years until reaching a peak of over 80% in 2000. At this point, the data had leveled out for 9 years.Indonesia had its own urbanization speed lower than South Korea and the trend was that there was a stable rise during the first 30 years from 1969 to 1999. This rate hit the record of roughly 50% after a sudden growth.In conclusion, it is clear that while both countries experienced a growth in their urbanisation rate, in south korea it almost doubled by the end of the period.the period.                                                                 

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The line graph shows the rate of urbanisation in two countries, namely indonesia and south korea, from the mid 1960s to 2009.Overall, as can be shown from this graph that there was a steady increase in the rate of urbanization in both of the two countries over the period of the given time. South Korea both experienced a steep rise and had a higher urbanization ratio than Indonesia.In terms of South Korea urbanization, its rate started at just only, 30% in 1969 and then, increased dramatically by 40% over the years until reaching a peak of over 80% in 2000. At this point, the data had leveled out for 9 years.Indonesia had its own urbanization speed lower than South Korea and the trend was that there was a stable rise during the first 30 years from 1969 to 1999. This rate hit the record of roughly 50% after a sudden growth.In conclusion, it is clear that while both countries experienced a growth in their urbanisation rate, in south korea it almost doubled by the end of the period.the period.                                                                 

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    now i tell about the forms of mass media that i use every day.    Mobile phones, I  used to social networking strend to   to study online

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    now i tell about the forms of mass media that i use every day.    Mobile phones, I  used to social networking strend to   to study online

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Every day the forms of media that I use are: TV. mobile phone and internet. TV helps me entertain, phone helps me manage work better. The Internet helps me find information quickly. In general, media helps me a lot in life

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Nowadays, there are a lot form of mass media that we use every day. Some the form of mass media such as: Mobile phone, the Internet, television, news paper,etc… It help we with access to information, communication with people and it helping students a lot in online learning. Student can search for information about the lesson, virtual classrooms. It also helps to relax, entertain, amuse,… after work

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Today I will talk about the main media formats that I use every day and explain their benefits.                                                                           I often use forms of mass communication every day such as: TV, mobile phone, Internet, these means help me study and work more effectively, not only that they also entertain and entertain me.connect with people.

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Today I will talk about the main media formats that I use every day and explain their benefits.                                                                           I often use forms of mass communication every day such as: TV, mobile phone, Internet, these means help me study and work more effectively, not only that they also entertain and entertain me.connect with people.

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Progressive inventions always bring benefits to life. It meets the needs in everyone's life. Such as entertainment. TV was born with that purpose.  TV feels magical. The original TV came in two colors black and white. Then a new color TV was born. Today, we have TVs with big screens that have great color and great sound. The TV has many channels with unique themes suitable for many different ages. People often use TV to follow daily news, watch movies and entertainment programs. Although there are now many other products such as phones or computers, television is still one of the indispensable items of every home. However, children who spend too much time on TV also bring psychological and health harm. Therefore, careful consideration should be given to children watching TV for too longIn short, TV was born with the purpose of serving people's lives, but be careful when using it in life.

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Progressive inventions always bring benefits to life. It meets the needs in everyone's life. Such as entertainment. TV was born with that purpose.  TV feels magical. The original TV came in two colors black and white. Then a new color TV was born. Today, we have TVs with big screens that have great color and great sound. The TV has many channels with unique themes suitable for many different ages. People often use TV to follow daily news, watch movies and entertainment programs. Although there are now many other products such as phones or computers, television is still one of the indispensable items of every home. However, children who spend too much time on TV also bring psychological and health harm. Therefore, careful consideration should be given to children watching TV for too longIn short, TV was born with the purpose of serving people's lives, but be careful when using it in life.

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In history, many people have come up with several inventions in the aim of making the lives of human beings better and comfortable. As life continues, different inventions are changing at the same rate as the changing world. World's famous inventors have explored and invented things such the earlier inventions such as electricity, the wheel, penicillin etc., to the modern inventions such as the GPRS technology, the social networking, the bar code and many more. However, the invention of electricity paved way for many inventions and for that reason it is considered an invention that changed the world.

Invention of electricity does not have a specific inventor but instead has a chain of inventors. However, Benjamin franklin is credited for discovering electricity in the 18th century. Electricity has huge and growing uses as a form of energy; this is due to its flexibility and reliability. Electricity has several resources that are used to produce it namely, the fossil fuels, water, solar, wind, hydrogen and many others. Its distribution is via the transmission grid to the small scale users. Electricity has several uses.

The first use of electricity was communication whereby the telegraphs, radios and the television had electric motors that were run using electric current. In today's world, electricity is used in almost 75% of the machines. In the rural households, this invention is used for lighting, TV, cooking and other minor consumptions such as computers and fans, in the urban areas; electricity is used in major industries to run machines and other household uses such as running electric products.

The invention of electricity and its continued development has made it the main source of power worldwide for homes, in businesses and in industries. In addition, invention of electricity has led to the invention of the products that are electric powered. With no electricity, very many activities will stop making life very difficult for many people

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Mobile phone is one of the great inventions of man.
Nowadays, everyone owns at least one phone.  The telephone was invented and officially operated in 1877. Up to now, there have been many different types of telephones: public telephones, public telephones, smart phones.  The most commonly used type of phone today is a smartphone.  A smartphone with a touch screen for you to operate on.  Smartphone screens are usually larger than hands.  A smartphone has the full functionality of a phone.  Also we can use it to watch movies, listen to music, study and play games.  The function of taking photos and recording videos is also very popular.
There are many brands that make smartphones like Apple, Samsung, LG, Oppo.  I use Oppo.  I have great admiration and gratitude for the people who create amazing products like smartphones

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In today's technological age there are many inventions.  Most of them are inventions that help people.  Among them, the one that I have is a smartphone.  Smartphones are objects or tools that help and support people.  it came out a few years ago, it's a huge improvement over the previous phone. The reason I own it is because: firstly, it can connect to the internet to help me communicate with people around in the fastest way.  Fast processing speed, in line with user's criteria. The second is that we can use it for entertainment such as playing games, listening to music, watching movies...with that phone, in addition, we can take pictures as we go out or travel.  Video or non-video calling with friends and family is possible and free thanks to apps like zalo or messenger.  In short, today smartphones are favored by many people, not just me.  thanks to the functions and uses it brings to people.  Compact appearance easy to carry around.

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In today's technological age there are many inventions.  Most of them are inventions that help people.  Among them, the one that I have is a smartphone.  Smartphones are objects or tools that help and support people.  it came out a few years ago, it's a huge improvement over the previous phone. The reason I own it is because: firstly, it can connect to the internet to help me communicate with people around in the fastest way.  Fast processing speed, in line with user's criteria. The second is that we can use it for entertainment such as playing games, listening to music, watching movies...with that phone, in addition, we can take pictures as we go out or travel.  Video or non-video calling with friends and family is possible and free thanks to apps like zalo or messenger.  In short, today smartphones are favored by many people, not just me.  thanks to the functions and uses it brings to people.  Compact appearance easy to carry around.

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Nowadays, the society is more and more develop, people have invented many wonderful things  such as television, computer, tablet and many others. However smartphone is an indispensable device in Human's life.

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Nowadays, the society is more and more develop, people have invented many wonderful things  such as television, computer, tablet and many others. However smartphone is an indispensable device in Human's life.

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Smartphone bring a lot of benefits in the modern world. It's a means of communication and people admit that they cannot imagine the life without smartphone.

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• Introduction

A new invention about the phone.Smartphones bring a lot of benefits in the modern world.It’s a means of communication, an entertainment device and with the Internet, we can do everything with our smartphones.

Thesis statement about the phone.Nowadays, there are many modern uses of the phone invented by people.But it also cannot avoid the occurrence of problems.

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First reason.Digital phones are battery problems. Especially the iPhone line is very easy to charge and consumes space.Seacond reason.Touch error, when we use it for a long time, the phone will get hot and it leads to the touch not eating or the touch disorder.

•Conclusion.

Summary of phone reasons and restrictions.In general about the improvement of the phone. Most of us find it to be very good. But we still have a lot of situations like the above and more. So let's know how to maintain it so that it is both good and good. best experience.

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Writing 2: From long ago,The most important invention that improved the lives of the dark ages was learning how to make fire.Now, the invention of fire, man was able to use the most important of all energy, a radical improvement in man's life

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Writing 2: From long ago,The most important invention that improved the lives of the dark ages was learning how to make fire.Now, the invention of fire, man was able to use the most important of all energy, a radical improvement in man's life

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First reason, is local open feed stocks.It is used by humans for cooking,producing heat,light,signal,and propulsion,so that's the first reason

Second reason, it also helps to stimulate the grouth and maintenance of different ecosystems

Conlusion, I have a new invention here"fire"

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Nowaday, there are many great inventions that benefit a lot of people. These can be mentioned as smartphones, the Internet, laptops. The most important thing that affects humanity is the Internet.

The Internet is a global information system,  It appeared in the 60s and flourished in the 90s of the 20th century. It allows us to connect with people around the world through an Internet-connected device. The Internet helps us a lot in our work, study, information exchange, cultural exchange, or state management.

By the turn of the 21st century, the Internet is booming in technological revolutions. And now it's the 4.0 technology revolution. It helps the economy grow rapidly, make it convenient to communicate people through social networks such as Facebook, twitter, instargram.

In conclusion , the Internet became an important invention . It greatly affects the development of humanity. In the future, the Internet will continue to grow strongly

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Smartphones are becoming more and more popular .This is an invention of great value to human history. To keep up with the times I also bought myself one .

It has become a vital part of people’s life on account of the huge benefits it brings. To begin with, mobile phone is a source of information. With Internet access available anywhere and at any time, users can search for the latest news and keep themselves informed of events around the world. Not only providing information, it also acts as a useful device for storage. More than that, the important function making it increasingly appealing nowadays is a source of entertainment, offering people with a wide range of activities in the free time such as playing games, listening to music or reading e-books. Last but not least, mobile phone has been upgraded to become a multifunctional device, which can come in handy in different situations.

In conlusion smartphones is undoubtedly on the greatest inventions . Its is an indispensable device in human life .

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In the years before the 20th century, people were based on letters, articles, word of mouth and even a desk phone that they communicate with each other.

But after many years it can be said that the smartphone is one of the greatest inventions of the 20th century, because there was no other electronic device at the same time that had such important effects on people's everyday life. Most people now admit that they cannot imagine life without smartphones.

It's normal for us to not watch TV for a day, not leave home, not play video games, but it's sure that most of us ca n't leave our phone for an hour. The first device that could at least meet the standard of a smartphone is just a complicated brick phone. It did not last long in the market because of unreasonable prices and poor quality, but it could be considered a pioneer in the smartphone empire.

In 1996, Nokia launched the Nokia 9000, which is considered the first smartphone. Although it provided an entirely new experience for the user, it still had shortcomings that were unable to satisfy the world. Apple's devices have been invented in many ways, both technically and by design. Google's Android operating system, go around the world

So in conclusion, smartphones have invaded our world and we don't realize, and life would be a lot harder if we didn't have this help.

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 Today, I am writing an essay about a new invention of smartphones. Smartphones bring a lot of benefits in the modern world. Everyone owns at least one phone these days. It’s a means of communication, an entertainment device and with the Internet, we can do everything with our smartphones.Smartphone is a convenient tool, it can help us with a lot of things anytime, anywhere.Why is it used by so many people? That's because it has a lot of handy functions, helping us in a lot of work. In addition to supporting work, it also helps us entertain and relax after hard working hours. We can watch movies, listen to music and talk to peopleNowadays we can easily find a phone that is right for us. Their cost can range from a few million to several tens of millions. Depending on our use and work needs, we can own it.  I believe that in the future the smartphone will be even more developed and more convenient. it will always be by our side in every work

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 Today, I am writing an essay about a new invention of smartphones. Smartphones bring a lot of benefits in the modern world. Everyone owns at least one phone these days. It’s a means of communication, an entertainment device and with the Internet, we can do everything with our smartphones.Smartphone is a convenient tool, it can help us with a lot of things anytime, anywhere.Why is it used by so many people? That's because it has a lot of handy functions, helping us in a lot of work. In addition to supporting work, it also helps us entertain and relax after hard working hours. We can watch movies, listen to music and talk to peopleNowadays we can easily find a phone that is right for us. Their cost can range from a few million to several tens of millions. Depending on our use and work needs, we can own it.  I believe that in the future the smartphone will be even more developed and more convenient. it will always be by our side in every work

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Smartphones -  an electronic device for young people today, bring people many benefits but no less harm.

Phones help people exchange information quickly in the modern technology era. It is integrated with smart features to help you make friends with friends from the four direction, then understand many generals just sitting at home. At the same time, the phone also helps you entertain after stressful working and studing hours. Moreover, during the period of dangerous epidemics spreading, smartphone are a lifeline for students' learning through online learning to reduce the risk of infection and spread of disease.
The benefit it that, but the phone when overused will become a disadvantage. For example, if you are in contact with the phone screen for too long, it will cause pain eye strain and affect your health. The cause of fire and explosion while charging and playing now occur more and more dangerous to life. Or you try the game but neglect your studies.
Everything has its advantages and disadvantage, let's use the phone in a reasonable way to bring the best effect for ourselves.

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Today, I wil write an essay about a new invention that me have.
I'm using the touch phone it was invented by mr A.E. johnson in 1965. The smartphone have a lot benefits and essential for humans.

The smartphone bring to everyone can contact friends with each orther by phone  through the application and  can instant messaging thorough, social networking.

The smartphone help seaching for information, carry relaxation and entertainment when the watch program and play game

The smartphone verry useful and relax after tired working days through video, clip short.

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Camera has always been a crucial and creative invention in the length of  human history , until now , such machine have been innovated day by day in terms of design and fashion . This essay will discuss about the origin of camera and the benefits that it brings about .Initially , Camera was  invented in 1568 by Danielo Barbaro , in Venice and it became the first modern camera in the 16th century . After hundred years of continuously developing , camera was first introduced to customers in 1888 by Eastman Dry Play and Film  . The camera was made of woods and it had the abilities to take about 100 kinds of different photos. Until December , 1975 , Kodak , a well-known companies of manufacturing cameras , introduced the first digital camera , which was considered as a huge innovation in Camera industry .The desirable outcome that camera offers is  clearly keeping our memories . In fact , If people own a camera , they can easily memorize their special ceremonies , parties ,… by the photos that they have taken before . As well as this , camera also helps people to amuse after a hard-working day . In fact , many people use camera to capture beautiful scenery in nature , which will help them to meet the demand of art .In these days , mobile phones have mostly replaced cameras by their portability and its popularity . However , cameras have always been  an irreplaceable part  among  art lovers

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Camera has always been a crucial and creative invention in the length of  human history , until now , such machine have been innovated day by day in terms of design and fashion . This essay will discuss about the origin of camera and the benefits that it brings about .Initially , Camera was  invented in 1568 by Danielo Barbaro , in Venice and it became the first modern camera in the 16th century . After hundred years of continuously developing , camera was first introduced to customers in 1888 by Eastman Dry Play and Film  . The camera was made of woods and it had the abilities to take about 100 kinds of different photos. Until December , 1975 , Kodak , a well-known companies of manufacturing cameras , introduced the first digital camera , which was considered as a huge innovation in Camera industry .The desirable outcome that camera offers is  clearly keeping our memories . In fact , If people own a camera , they can easily memorize their special ceremonies , parties ,… by the photos that they have taken before . As well as this , camera also helps people to amuse after a hard-working day . In fact , many people use camera to capture beautiful scenery in nature , which will help them to meet the demand of art .In these days , mobile phones have mostly replaced cameras by their portability and its popularity . However , cameras have always been  an irreplaceable part  among  art lovers

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Do you now renewable? I'm absolutely not anti-renewables. I love renewables.The example are solar cells.

Fist reason: You can also do this with solar cells Install the solar panning and connect to your indoor grid, you could have the maximum monthly electrical cost saved.

Second reason: and besides,it has also contributed to Reduced the environmental impact,Means of transportation,etc,...

So I want to talk about,Solar cells are a
brilliant new invention for humanity.

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write an essay about a new invention that you have

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The world's first capacitive touchscreen mobile phone was released in 2006 and was released a year before the iPhone was the LG-Prada. And through many years of development, different new phone brands were born, and increasingly upgraded to suit the needs of users. Smartphones can be said to be one of the great inventions

It brings a lot of benefits and it is a means of communication, a device that keeps us entertained in times of stress, and there is no other device that affects us.  affect people's daily life to such an extent.  And so far there have been many different types of phones such as desk phones, regular phones and smart phones.

type the most used phone today is a smartphone, a smart phone with a touch screen function that helps users easily operate with one touch, it can also listen to music, watch movies.  , study and also take photos and videos.  Currently there are many different phone companies such as Samsung, Apple, Huawei...currently i am using huawei phone and i find it easy to use.  I am so grateful to the person who made this amazing phone.

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Mobile phone is the medium that i use every day. Help me in study,  entertainment,  or computer,  television.  Help my family watch many interesting and useful programs.

So mobile phones, computers, televisions are the means of communication that i often use

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Nowadays there are many great invention, but a new invention that i have right now is the mobile phone or we can say smartphone.

Smartphone is very useful that can take it anywhere without wires like previous phones. I can use it to make friends all over the world and video call or chat with my best friends. Smartphone is a leap of modern technology, it took only about 50 years to be so successful.I can even use it to study online during the pandemic covid.

This new invention has greatly helped people in improving learning and connecting people around the world and much more.

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Through the content on animal protection, I agree with Ai Lien opinion. Because all creatures are part of an ecosystem. They all help humans in some way, what's more, nature is beautiful, and that's the best reason to preserve it.

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Through the content on animal protection, I agree with Ai Lien opinion. Because all creatures are part of an ecosystem. They all help humans in some way, what's more, nature is beautiful, and that's the best reason to preserve it.

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Through the content on animal protection, I agree with Ai Lien opinion. Because all creatures are part of an ecosystem. They all help humans in some way, what's more, nature is beautiful, and that's the best reason to preserve it.
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I agree with Simon's sword intention. Because of We and other animals are also living creatures on earth. Today's extinction is difficult to determine if it is caused by natural causes such as drought, earthquake.Today extinctions are largely caused by humans from forest fires, environmental pollution and even poaching. Therefore, humans need to overcome their mistakes with nature

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I agree with Simon's sword intention. Because of We and other animals are also living creatures on earth. Today's extinction is difficult to determine if it is caused by natural causes such as drought, earthquake.Today extinctions are largely caused by humans from forest fires, environmental pollution and even poaching. Therefore, humans need to overcome their mistakes with nature

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I agree with Simon's sword intention. Because of We and other animals are also living creatures on earth. Today's extinction is difficult to determine if it is caused by natural causes such as drought, earthquake.Today extinctions are largely caused by humans from forest fires, environmental pollution and even poaching. Therefore, humans need to overcome their mistakes with nature( short/ unclear topic/ grammar)

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Which of the three people above do you agree with? Why?

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Which of the three people above do you agree with? Why?

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From the above three comments, i agree with Ai Lien. Because animal and plant axtinction can ruin the ecosystem and reduce biodiversity. Moreover if we lose biodiversity, we will lose valuable opportunities ( short/unclear topic)

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I agree with simon's opinion because humans need to responsible for their cause to animals, and we should put ourselves in endangered animals' shoes, we must protect them. Both humans and animals are creatures in the earth, we should love each other

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I agree with Simon ( Scotland) because I think we should protect endangered species , we are living creatures and so are the animals . Special , today many plants and animals are becoming endangered or extinct because of habitat destruction , over-harvesting and poaching .and our urgent task now is to join hands to protect endangered species because our unconscious actions are the cause of their extinction in this world.

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Through this lesson, I agree with Ai Lien's opinion. Because:

-Animal and plant extinction can destruction the ecosystem and reduce biodiversity

-All creatures are part of an ecosystem, if a species is lost, it affect the whole ecosustem
-It also a source of food and medicine for humans.

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I agree with Ai Lien's opinion.  Because all of them treat people in some way, such as drugs, pharmaceuticals derived from animals, plants can save millions of people.  But if the extinction of flora and fauna occurs, it can lead to a serious loss of biodiversity.

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I agree with Ai Lien's opinion.  Because all of them treat people in some way, such as drugs, pharmaceuticals derived from animals, plants can save millions of people.  But if the extinction of flora and fauna occurs, it can lead to a serious loss of biodiversity.

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Through the reading with the topic of protecting endangered species, there are 3 basic opinions of Simon, Yoshiko, Ai Lien.
With 3 opinions, I agree with Ai Lien's opinion, because the extinction of plant and animal species will cause ecological imbalance, not only that, but it is also a rare genetic resource in the world that should be protected. and exist to maintain the rare genome. Moreover, those flora and fauna sources can also help us relax while looking at the peaceful and beautiful scenery of nature.

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Through the reading with the topic of protecting endangered species, there are 3 basic opinions of Simon, Yoshiko, Ai Lien.
With 3 opinions, I agree with Ai Lien's opinion, because the extinction of plant and animal species will cause ecological imbalance, not only that, but it is also a rare genetic resource in the world that should be protected. and exist to maintain the rare genome. Moreover, those flora and fauna sources can also help us relax while looking at the peaceful and beautiful scenery of nature.

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I agree with SiMon (Scotland). Because, I think We are living creatures and so are the animals. We can no longer attribute the rapid extinction of species to natural cause such as earthquakes or drought.Today many plants and animals are becoming endangered or extinct because of habitat destruction, overharvesting and poaching. It's our duty to start repairing the damage we've caused to nature.

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I agree with SiMon (Scotland). Because, I think We are living creatures and so are the animals. We can no longer attribute the rapid extinction of species to natural cause such as earthquakes or drought.Today many plants and animals are becoming endangered or extinct because of habitat destruction, overharvesting and poaching. It's our duty to start repairing the damage we've caused to nature.

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Of the three points above, I agree with Simon's point of view because: animals are part of an ecosystem, they deserve to be maintained and protected.  We should not be selfish thinking only of ourselves without thinking of them.  if animals go extinct then our human life is very tasteless, they play an important role to us.  Therefore, when we see animals injured or dangerous, we should save them in time to avoid the danger of extinction.( unlear topic/ grammar/ short)

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Through the reading with the topic of protecting endangered species, there are 3 basic opinions of Simon, Yoshiko, Ai Lien. And I agree with SiMon.Because,I thik:
We are also living creatures and animals. We cannot get rid of them so easily. They also easily adapt to us like a small child.Ready to protect us when in danger.And leaving them is the right thing to do. Those who want to get rid of creatures and animals are people who have no humanity. Finally, I want to say that we have to know how to protect animals that have lived with us for a long time or are strange animals that are in bad shape. We help it, they will repay the favor later.

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Throught this lesson on animal protection and animal extinction. I agree with your opinion of Ai Lien  that animals help us humans to balance ecology , all creatures are part of an ecosystem and need to save. Animals are very important to help biodiversity, so are plants, it regulates the air, absorbs wastes and also cools the earth.

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In 2015, I first went to the festival held at Cau Giay park, Hanoi city with my older sister. She was a volunteer at the festival. I helped my sister and her team make some hand-made things to sell at the festival. All the amount of money collected was then donated to the fund to save young cancer patients. Yes, I'd like. Because I love children and I want to do some meaningful things to support unlucky ones. I will help to fold paper sunflowers and teach those children how to draw. Seeing their little beautiful smiles will certainly make me happy. 

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In 2015, I first went to the festival held at Cau Giay park, Hanoi city with my older sister. She was a volunteer at the festival. I helped my sister and her team make some hand-made things to sell at the festival. All the amount of money collected was then donated to the fund to save young cancer patients. Yes, I'd like. Because I love children and I want to do some meaningful things to support unlucky ones. I will help to fold paper sunflowers and teach those children how to draw. Seeing their little beautiful smiles will certainly make me happy. 

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i agree with the opinion of Simon because animals or human being have the same right to life and equality. When we see animals in danger, we can ignore them, we must protect them. It's a lot easy to protect them than to revive theirs lives. protecing animals from extinction also helps balence the ecosystem, so let work together to make the world a better place.

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i agree with the opinion of Simon because animals or human being have the same right to life and equality. When we see animals in danger, we can ignore them, we must protect them. It's a lot easy to protect them than to revive theirs lives. protecing animals from extinction also helps balence the ecosystem, so let work together to make the world a better place.

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i agree with the opinion of Simon because animals or human being have the same right to life and equality. When we see animals in danger, we can ignore them, we must protect them. It's a lot easy to protect them than to revive theirs lives. protecing animals from extinction also helps balence the ecosystem, so let work together to make the world a better place.( short/ unclear topic/ grammar)

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 Through reading about saving endangered species, i agree with Yoshiko point of view. Because Extinction is only part of the evolutionary process, from extinction can new species emerge. Furthermore, not all species of cashews are friendly and harmless, they can be dangerous to others.

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 Through reading about saving endangered species, i agree with Yoshiko point of view. Because Extinction is only part of the evolutionary process, from extinction can new species emerge. Furthermore, not all species of cashews are friendly and harmless, they can be dangerous to others.

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I agree with Ai Lien Because I think Animal and plant extinction can ruin the ecosystem and reduce biodiversity.', và 'What's more, nature is beautiful, and that's the best reason to preserve it.'.    Today many plants and animals and plant extinction can ruin the ecosystem and reduce biodiversity

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I agree with Ai Lien, because her thinking is very scientific and modern. She understands the horrors of plant and animal extinction and she also understands the role those species play. Show us their help and want us to lift the spirits to end the imbalance between plants and animals. And I'm grateful for that too.

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I agree with Ai Lien, because her thinking is very scientific and modern. She understands the horrors of plant and animal extinction and she also understands the role those species play. Show us their help and want us to lift the spirits to end the imbalance between plants and animals. And I'm grateful for that too.

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After the post whether or not we should protect endangered species i agree with AiLien's point of view animal and plant extinction can ruin the ecosystem and reduce biodiversity.Because all creatures are part of an ecosystem.They contribute to biodiversity so we need to protect them.

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I agree with yoshiko's opinion. Singapore it is True to the topic of the article, should we protect animals or not. If we continue to save endangered animal, then we stop animal rom replacing other animals. Extinction is Just a part of the evolutionary process and we must not interfere with it. Hence, trying to save species that cannot survive in their environment is rather silly, because it's against the laws of nature.so, let mother nature do her job.

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through the topic of endangered animals. Through the skill part of lesson 2, page 11, I agree with my friend Simon, because animals also have a life like humans, so we need to be equal between them. We should protect their habitat, not illegally hunt, especially endangered animals. Therefore, everyone must have a common sense of protection so that animals are no longer in danger of extinction.

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through the topic of endangered animals. Through the skill part of lesson 2, page 11, I agree with my friend Simon, because animals also have a life like humans, so we need to be equal between them. We should protect their habitat, not illegally hunt, especially endangered animals. Therefore, everyone must have a common sense of protection so that animals are no longer in danger of extinction.

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I agree with Simon's sword intention. Because of
We and other animals are also living creatures on earth
Today's extinction is difficult to determine if it is caused by natural causes such as drought, earthquake
Today extinctions are largely caused by humans from forest fires, environmental pollution and even poaching. Therefore, needuns need to overcome their mistakes with nature

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I agree with Simon's sword intention. Because of
-We and other animals are also living creatures on earth
-Today's extinction is difficult to determine if it is caused by natural causes such as drought, earthquake
-Today extinctions are largely caused by humans from forest fires, environmental pollution and even poaching. Therefore, humans need to overcome their mistakes with nature

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Through the above reading, I agree with Simon's opinion "Human should be help responsible for endangering species or driving them them to extincrion". Because today, when society is more and more developed, the needs of people are increasing, leading to unreasonable exploitation of resources such as cutting down forests for farming, hunting rare and precious animals for medicine or decoration. It is these things that have threatened the existence of many species of animals and plants. We should take responsibility for our actions and find ways to change it.( grammar)/ unclear topic

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Through this lesson, i agree with Ai Lien's opinion, because for example drugs , pharmaceuticals derived from animals and plants can save minlions of lives. But if the extinction of flora and fauna occurs , it can lead to serious loss.

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I agree with Ai Lien.                                     Because animals are a part of nature, they help us to balance the ecological system of nature. Each species has different benefits, some species will provide food, medicine and some species will help propagate species. other plants on Earth. What if one day animals disappear from the planet, then the natural ecological balance is disrupted and the planet will gradually lose its inherent green color, humans will gradually disappear. lost due to the lack of medicinal resources that animals bring. Therefore, humans must preserve and conserve animals to help balance nature.

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I agree with Ai Lien.                                     Because animals are a part of nature, they help us to balance the ecological system of nature. Each species has different benefits, some species will provide food, medicine and some species will help propagate species. other plants on Earth. What if one day animals disappear from the planet, then the natural ecological balance is disrupted and the planet will gradually lose its inherent green color, humans will gradually disappear. lost due to the lack of medicinal resources that animals bring. Therefore, humans must preserve and conserve animals to help balance nature.

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I agree with Ai Lien.                                     Because animals are a part of nature, they help us to balance the ecological system of nature. Each species has different benefits, some species will provide food, medicine and some species will help propagate species. other plants on Earth. What if one day animals disappear from the planet, then the natural ecological balance is disrupted and the planet will gradually lose its inherent green color, humans will gradually disappear. lost due to the lack of medicinal resources that animals bring. Therefore, humans must preserve and conserve animals to help balance nature.( good ideas/ uncear topic / grammar)