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Glow: Your presentation very good. Your sharing a lot of information i even know before. well done

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Glow: Your presentation very good. Your sharing a lot of information i even know before. well done

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Grow: : I thought it was a great presentation. I don't have any critiques!
-YING GAO

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Lior Grubert
Glow: I liked how he included his experience with R Studio and showed the class visuals and examples of how it actually works. I think he did a good job of incorporating all of the elements of the paper into the presentation. He discussed how he takes risks in his life, something to be included in the paper, that not many of the other students included in their presentation.
Grow: I think one way that can definitely be improved is the text color shown on the presentation. The white color kind of conflicts with the blue and gray background. Along with the text being an awkward color, there was also a lot of wording throughout most of the presentation, I could follow his presentation along better when he used more visuals.

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Patrick Cleaver
Glow: One thing that I really liked was how Patrick explained the visuals he utilized in his presentation.  He would bring his cursor to it and go into the exact topic of the graphic he posted.  This was something I did not do in my presentation.
Grow: I think that Christopher could have utilized a different theme that was maybe more exciting or creative to the viewers.  Also, there were some parts that were way to wordy or length, like in the beginning when he was explaining his transfer to the United States and how he learned another language.

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Alexandria Paladino
Glow:  I think that the sway presentation was utilized very well. She incorporated many of the different elements, such as stack to enhance her presentation.  I also think she provided a unique presentation of how she uses work in her professional life, rather than the technologies we used in class. I also think Alexandria did a great job at explaining and displaying her survey results.
Grow: Like a lot of classmates, I think that there were a lot of words on certain slides that could have been spoken and utilized visuals to enhance the message.  Her creativity in her personal life description was very wordy and lengthy making it difficult to only her voice, but also follow along on the presentation.

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Cherise Hennigan
Glow: I think that Cherise did a great job at segregating out her paper into little different compartments and topics with different visuals. Unlike many other classmates, Cherise did not just present her paper upon the screen and speak about it.
Grow:  One thing that was interesting was the fact that there was a 30 day trial ad for Screen Cast O Matic that was covering her entire presentation.  I am not sure if she noticed this, but it was quite distracting to the presentation.

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Lauren Dao
Glow: I really appreciated the honest that Lauren possessed throughout her presentation.  She was very open about her views on social media.  She consciously recognized that these parts of technology causes problems for her and is actively trying to change the way she utilizes it. I think it was great how she segregated it into different blocks with different passages, so that the listeners did not get lost, like in her use of SalesForce.
Grow: Again, Lauren too, utilized her paper a lot in this by displaying this.  As this is the 6th peer review I've watched I am beginning to wonder if I was supposed to display the paper on the presentation as well, as it seems most people have done that.

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Matthew Smolen
Glow: If i were to have read only the paper I think that he were to have done a great job. Although, this way a video presentation and was supposed to include different types of visuals. He did use his cursor to allow us to see where he was at in the paper, which was helpful and was not done in some of the other presentations.
Grow: Again, like I've said, this student has also inputted entire words of his paper into his presentation as we are just reading his paper while trying to listen to him explain it. The entire presentation is basically him narrating his paper without utilizing any visuals.

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Nicolette Curran
Glow: I think that the overall sway presentation was great.  Nicolette utilized many of the different elements that are provided in Sway.  I also think that utilizing different quotes from her paper was great, and was better than inputting her entire paper into the sway.   I think she really grasped the topic of what it means to be innovative and explored this throughout her presentation. She inputted some of her paper, but all.
Grow: As said with the other classmates, I think that inputting the paper throughout the presentation is almost unnecessary as you are talking it over out loud anyways. Another thing I would have put in is discussing more technology tools that were utilized by her and showing them throughout the presentation. A lot of the presentation was based on education and how our education may have diminished our creativity.

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Kasey Mitchell
Glow: I really enjoyed how Kasey included examples of the exact software programs she utilizes in work.  Here she really demonstrates how technology functions in her everyday life.
Grow: I think that inputting the exact words from her essay may allowed me to lose my attention, especially when talking about the different social media platforms she utilizes. Kasey spent multiple minutes describing her social media usage personally. I think some visuals of what observing your screen times actually look like might have been useful. I think that the class could have been incorporated more into the presentation as well.

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Christopher Barone
Glow:  I loved Christopher's presentation. When talking about his own ability to be an innovative learner, he utilized bullet points and a specific visual example.  It was very unique in a way that he showed exactly how he is creative and innovative by showing the computer he created. He went through the components of the paper in a very structured and amazing way, covering all bases.
Grow: I really cannot think of many ways that Chris could improve on his presentation.  I think it was very well structured and super creative. The only thing that I believe would help would may have been to incorporate more of a theme into his Sway, as it was a blank background.

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Chris Desellems
Glow: I think that Chris did a great job explaining the technological tools he uses.  He also did a great job at explaining how the technology that has been given to us has enhanced our creativity. I think that utilizing the graph was also a great element of the presentation when talking about his survey.  Unfortunately,  I could not access my Microsoft forms graph, but I would have liked to do that.
Grow: I think that one area Chris could improve would be the immense amount of words using the visual presentation.  In most of my visual presentations I try to use the visuals merely as props and do most of the talking myself.