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maybe think about adding some height on the table of the stall. for example: display a couple of packages of frozen berries ;
very nice colours and design :)

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Enjoy how youre able to do a whole stall with one area of fruits

is there an age range target?

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Really like the colour theme used and ideas around cost comparison

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Really like the colour theme used and ideas around cost comparison

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Theme flowed throughout, colours matched idea of berries

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Theme flowed throughout, colours matched idea of berries

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The light pink design compliments the overarching theme nicely

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The light pink design compliments the overarching theme nicely

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I liked the colour theme with the berry's on the back. The comparison between the muffins.

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Like the theme!

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Not 100% on who the target audience was?

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Not 100% on who the target audience was?

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I would have liked to have seen how the stall and backboard were laid out

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I would have liked to have seen how the stall and backboard were laid out

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Maybe keep leaflets easy to read and not too informative

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Maybe keep leaflets easy to read and not too informative

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I like the infographic style of the presentation

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I like the infographic style of the presentation

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Nice diagram

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very good ideas of your clothes , stall and design if we were doing it in real life

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very good ideas of your clothes , stall and design if we were doing it in real life

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Great understanding of what the current issue is around salt and who it effects

Clever logo

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Really nice looking stall - eye catching info on it :)

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Really nice looking stall - eye catching info on it :)

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great idea , clearly thought out and aligned with the strategy. I like the activity ideas, especially the one about guessing the salt content.

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great idea , clearly thought out and aligned with the strategy. I like the activity ideas, especially the one about guessing the salt content.

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I would say consider how graphic the images of CVD are. There's a balance to be found between shocking into behaviour change but not too shocking !

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Sometimes think the blocked artery pictures are used too much, shocking but seen often

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Sometimes think the blocked artery pictures are used too much, shocking but seen often

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Stall really well designed and thought through, great colours and not too cluttered

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Stall really well designed and thought through, great colours and not too cluttered

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The stall is really professionally organised

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The stall is really professionally organised

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your attidute though is a bit rough and i am not sure if people will respond well if they feel threathened by this topic and the potential bad consequences;

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your attidute though is a bit rough and i am not sure if people will respond well if they feel threathened by this topic and the potential bad consequences;

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otherwise very well scientifically and very professional style
well done

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could get people to guess the teaspoons of salt

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could get people to guess the teaspoons of salt

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Maybe show a usual daily allowance of salt to contrast to the tsps

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Maybe show a usual daily allowance of salt to contrast to the tsps

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seemed a bit too professional and might not be approachable

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seemed a bit too professional and might not be approachable

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meant too informative, too much science, people might feel like they are being told off by their dr

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Why not add consider making it more colourful, maybe to suit alongside porridge toppings? (fruits etc?)

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i like the idea of targeting children and making this theme appealing for them

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i like the idea of targeting children and making this theme appealing for them

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I think the Goldilocks technique could work, but only on children aged 3 to 7ish. What about children between ages 7 to 14?

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really like the theme, love porridge but I know a lot of people who just think of it like 'slop'

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really like the theme, love porridge but I know a lot of people who just think of it like 'slop'

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Will kids these days know about Goldilocks?

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older children might find it babyish and resent your idea

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Kids will prefer the krave and crunchy nut, porridge does not look attractive, maybe there is a better way of getting this message across?

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Kids will prefer the krave and crunchy nut, porridge does not look attractive, maybe there is a better way of getting this message across?

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Maybe goldilocks is quite limiting in terms of target audience - only very young kids. 

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Maybe goldilocks is quite limiting in terms of target audience - only very young kids. 

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Are you targeting parents too ? As stall seems too complicated for the younger audience

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kids are not bothered about ''nutrient information'', they choose foods based on likes/dislikes, so will this influence them to choose porridge?

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kids are not bothered about ''nutrient information'', they choose foods based on likes/dislikes, so will this influence them to choose porridge?

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Love how well you thought this out - Good links with what we already know and relate to e.g. goldilocks and bringing it back to the board

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Love how well you thought this out - Good links with what we already know and relate to e.g. goldilocks and bringing it back to the board

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Could potentially show how fruits, nuts seeds etc can go into something like porridge breakfast as well as the healthy fats

overall great idea for the stall!

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Nice colours. Might be better to put one yellow backboard and 2 white

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maybe focus on one target group instead of trying to appeal to everyone because your information gets too mixed up - you have kids appealing characters and colour systems but also complex information for ingredtients, comparisons, nutrients ... it might get too mixed up 

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maybe focus on one target group instead of trying to appeal to everyone because your information gets too mixed up - you have kids appealing characters and colour systems but also complex information for ingredtients, comparisons, nutrients ... it might get too mixed up 

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but very nice topic overall and i like your ideas

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seems too complicated for children, but too simple and childish for adults

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seems too complicated for children, but too simple and childish for adults

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Great use of the story of Goldilocks. I wonder if just porridge will be too restrictive, may focus of healthy breakfasts as a whole?

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Great use of the story of Goldilocks. I wonder if just porridge will be too restrictive, may focus of healthy breakfasts as a whole?

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How will you move away from the view people have of porridge as being 'untasty' 'sloppy' etc..to encourage them  to eat that instead of Krave / Crunchy Ns

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How will you move away from the view people have of porridge as being 'untasty' 'sloppy' etc..to encourage them  to eat that instead of Krave / Crunchy Ns

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Quaker Oats , ready break, supermarket brands!

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Really like the theme and storey with it

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Really like the theme and storey with it

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I'm not sure if the name of the stall links into the stall topic? ''I'm peeling good'', where does peeling come into it? Maybe a more informative name would be better

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I'm not sure if the name of the stall links into the stall topic? ''I'm peeling good'', where does peeling come into it? Maybe a more informative name would be better

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topic seems very broad, the key message is there, but there is a lot of info to take in

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topic seems very broad, the key message is there, but there is a lot of info to take in

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maybe make one flyer for the kids and the other one to be for the parents - this way kids will feel included and informed in a way appropriate for them 

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maybe make one flyer for the kids and the other one to be for the parents - this way kids will feel included and informed in a way appropriate for them 

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how does the starjump activity link to your theme ?

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how does the starjump activity link to your theme ?

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clearly links to the strategy although maybe too broad in topic. Could choose either fruit OR veg ?

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clearly links to the strategy although maybe too broad in topic. Could choose either fruit OR veg ?

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Really like the name! Its creative, but I do wonder if it doesn't apply to all fruit and veg? And actually the 'skin' of some fruit and veg can be the most nutritional part

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Really like the name! Its creative, but I do wonder if it doesn't apply to all fruit and veg? And actually the 'skin' of some fruit and veg can be the most nutritional part

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Lots of colours but maybe too many ? Or you could go with an 'eat the rainbow' theme

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Lots of colours but maybe too many ? Or you could go with an 'eat the rainbow' theme

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not sure where the star jumps challenge fits in?

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not sure where the star jumps challenge fits in?

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if you change the name to something like "jump on the rainbow" or "taste the rainbow" it would be better linked to your activities 

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if you change the name to something like "jump on the rainbow" or "taste the rainbow" it would be better linked to your activities 

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Good links to strategy- I like the role modelling

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Good links to strategy- I like the role modelling

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maybe give all competitors one

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Could do a taste test on different fruits? With interesting facts to follow on each of them i.e their benefits (might intrigue them and want to try something new)

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Could do a taste test on different fruits? With interesting facts to follow on each of them i.e their benefits (might intrigue them and want to try something new)

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I really like the logo design, name and colour scheme

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Theme fits topic well, very 'calming' colours 

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Theme fits topic well, very 'calming' colours 

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Related it well to the food and well strategies 

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Related it well to the food and well strategies 

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Good evidence to back up ideas. Like the name and colour theme!

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Good evidence to back up ideas. Like the name and colour theme!

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No candles if you were doing this for real

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No candles if you were doing this for real

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+ An interesting and unique idea - if you're able to aim this well at pregnant women/potentially pregnant it could work well

- How do you think you could attract more people to come - as the likelihood of many pregnant women turning up would be low

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scented candles etc are lovely but Sheffield is quite deprived and this may be inaccessible to many 

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scented candles etc are lovely but Sheffield is quite deprived and this may be inaccessible to many 

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I like the yoga poses on the backboard.

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Potential sponsor from a yoga YouTube channel for mums? Where they can view it online also?

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Potential sponsor from a yoga YouTube channel for mums? Where they can view it online also?

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I'm wondering of for the assignment brief, it needs more nutrition info ?

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I'm wondering of for the assignment brief, it needs more nutrition info ?

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Are there benefits of yoga to the baby as well as mother? :)

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Are there benefits of yoga to the baby as well as mother? :)

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Could you maybe expand the benefits of yoga to the general population?

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You have good examples and alternative i.e the scent sticks instead of candles

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You have good examples and alternative i.e the scent sticks instead of candles

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really good idea and clear link to the strategy

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really good idea and clear link to the strategy

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good link to obesity and oral health in sheffield

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good link to obesity and oral health in sheffield

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11 seems like a really young target age but on the other hand they may be in secondary school and be around others consuming

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11 seems like a really young target age but on the other hand they may be in secondary school and be around others consuming

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very good topic and very well linking to the local strategy

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very good topic and very well linking to the local strategy