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Try rewriting the statement by showing, not telling. Remember to leave your name. Finally, comment on at least one other person’s paragraph and give them a grade.

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She slammed her cup on the table, the multiple little trinkets on it, shook and one hung  dangerously close to the edge. Her eyes glared at the man in front of her who only stared back nonchalantly.

"I don't know where he is!" She growled

"Oh no, you're very wrong my dear," He waved his hand, as if dismissing her " You do."

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I had goosebumbs when I figured out the shadow behind me was a human figure who was stalking me. Like an scavenger I scanned my surroundings hoping there was someone to come to my need. In a second, the figure vanished. In lightning speed I hid behind a group of rubbish bin. I felt as tho the oxygen level in the atmosphere dropped. Trembling like a patient with stroke ' I don't know where he is,' I murmured to myself.

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Sheila’s dark blue eyes that looked as if an ocean had been enclosed in small glass marbles shattered and leaked out water droplets. She gently caressed the yellow stained photograph and quietly mumbled, “I don’t know where he is.”

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Udhaya
It was dark and cold. She walked quickly as she was shivering looking for her daughter.She was moving here and there, her leg muscles were burning in pain and she felt as if she was hit by an arrow on her heart .Her eyes was dripping with water like a heavy rain fall  as she  muttered "I don't know where she is".

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About to break down,Sheila

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Lovell
The clock was ticking.Droplets of sweat perspired on my forehead.I felt butterflies in my stomach.My body kept shivering and I could not stop moving my hands.

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10 hours left before it all ends. Sheila started to lose her sense of time. Cold sweat drips and splatters. She'd been stuck in her personal hell, incapacitated, yellow walls in every direction, the disgusting smell of the mouldy carpet crept into her mouth. All reason gone and backed up into a corner, "I don't know where he is, I don't know where he is, I don't know where he is-". Sheila lost herself.
(backrooms reference¿)

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My friends and I were going out to the newly opened JEWEL in Changi Airport is a big and beautiful place that anyone could hangout.But one of my John, my friend,  was lost and I don’t know where he was.My friends started go search for him in the huge mall.

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Guns cracked and explosions echoed down the halls. Sheila's arms were shaking violently and her hands were moving 4 ticks to 3, eyes started to spark uncontrollably as she hid behind a broken wall.She wondered when will she be safe as she spoke through the communicator with multiple skips of beat in her voice " i don't know where he is"

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She picked up the receiver and put it back down. Mother came in and picked up the receiver and spinned the dial. The number being dialed on the antique phone. The long and awkward wait when mother was calling the home. "hello?" the other side called. Mother handed me the phone and commanded me to tell what was happening. I replied to the call slowly "i... I... I dont know where is he"

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The thunder struck as Kaylee looked outside the window . She stared at the carpark awaiting his arrival. Eyes darting around, as if she were searching for a lost item. "I don't know where he is " she muttered .

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From a distant, wailings could be heard.She stops spinning in circles trying to look for the direction of the sound thinking to herself"I dont know where he is"