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This is a very good translation that has been seriously worked on. There are notes throughout the text and the unknown terms have been researched in the dictionary. I think the area that needs improvement is the punctuation, as some commas are missing. The English dialogue format also ought to be revised, as well as the verb "was" at the beginning of the text "Once upon a time there was three bears...", as it is followed by the plural form of the noun "bear". Moreover, in this sentence, "The soup was too hot to eat it", I would omit the "it" at the end, and here, "the delicious soup that Mama bear had done/made", I would go for the "made". Also, in the sentence "I wonder if they would share their soup with me…" I would change the tense "would share" as in the source text "si ellos compartirán su sopa conmigo…" the verb "compartirán" is conjugated according to the future simple tense.
Overall, I consider that the target text was translated with well-chosen words in order to replace the source text's ones.

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Be sure to review capitalization of proper names of the characters in the story (see source text).
The only thing I would add to Adina's comments is to question why you decided to go with the adjective "wicked". You need to consider the expressive meaning of choosing between synonyms.

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look at your table of contents, numbers 12(handcrafts spelling), 16(spelling), 18(the?), 26(lodging)
50(night club instead of evening center)

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Its a good start, however I would watch out for the sentences and punctuation. As well as the flow of each sentence depending on which strategy you chose.
The gender from Spanish to English needs to be revised
Perhaps double checking certain meanings of cultural specific items and names
Don't forget to add and translate the epigraph

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Good use of formal equivalence, along with appropriate and accurate word choice. Sentence structure is properly formulated as well. The word choice is accurate but lacks a bit of poetic allure to them, otherwise everything is solid and the flow of the poem is good.

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Overall, the translation is good. However, does it look readable for children?
Does the translation respect all conditions asked by the client, such as a 2-page long recipe, and enticing to children?
While the translation is well done, I think that it could be more children-oriented because it sounds and looks very formal for a children's cookbook.
Apart from that, I think the recipe is very clear!