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In the end, I think  my little brother is awesome  because he’s super cute, he’s good at every game he plays, and he’s super stubborn. 

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In the end, I think  my little brother is awesome  because he’s super cute, he’s good at every game he plays, and he’s super stubborn. 

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I think that if phones were in school kids wouldn’t focus. For example they would be  playing games,Texting classmates And watching videos. Plus the school already has chromebooks to use for school work or homework to do on the chromebooks.

I USED TO BE THE WRITER HOW  DID NOT KNOW HOW WROTE ESSAYS

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Reason 2 my second reason is that the beaches are AmAzInG! Sometimes the sand can get irritating in your feet .. but other than that it is Great they have boardwalks at the beaches that almost go on forever and it is really fun. You can also find cool shells and you can go SNORKELING which is the best thing ever made u can see so many different types of sea creatures.

i Used to be the writer who made the essay more like a story but now i can make it like a propper essay

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Do you eat your vegetables.Well be honest, do you?Well i'm going to be honest with you.Sometimes even i don't like eating my vegetables.But i’m going to tell you why you should eat your vegetables.First it wont give you cavities you will be healthy and you don't have to exercise as much if you eat healthy you won’t get many health problems that is why you should eat healthy.

FIRST I USED TO BE THE KIND OF WRITTER WHO ALWAYS HAS RUN ON SENTANCES BUT NOW IM THE KIND OF WRITER THAT CAN FIX RUN ON SENTANCES .

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You may see homework as a cruel, anti-fun weapon, but homework helps you in many ways. It can help you remember things you learned. It shows what you need help on. It teaches you to manage your time. Homework is such a helpful tool, you just need to learn how to put your hates for it aside. This is why homework is so great.

I used to be the kind of writer who couldn't think of any ideas, but know I am the type of writer who keeps on writing and adds on later.

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Don't judge people on how they look( Riya)

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Don't judge people on how they look( Riya)

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First, you shouldn’t  judge something on how it looks because it is not nice. You can hurt people's feelings by assuming stuff like “ you are not smart enough to play with as '' or '' look it’s the girl who is not good at math.” This is not fair because the girl is actually smart. Another way, you can hurt people's feelings is  by ignoring people  because maybe they are new or they are a teacher's daughter. For instance, the movie or the book  wonder in the movie  where there is a boy whose name is Auggi who was born ugly but Auggi  has a big heart . In the movie there was a bully who kept picking on  Auggi  because of how he looked ,which is not fair to Auggi  . In conclusion you shouldn’t judge something on how it looks because it is not nice .

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Sometimes a student could wear something inappropriate that is another reason why i think schools should have a dress code! Inappropriate clothes can be disturbing and make someone sad or mad and it could scare someone. It can also be extremely uncomfortable. I used to be a writer who wrote a little details but I am not.

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By Patrick kocik  I think my dog is the best dog ever         my first reason I think my dog is the best dog ever is because he is crazy fast. For example there is this one smooth hill me and my dad ride awer bike dawn it with my dog on the leash and my dog is almost pooling my dad and we just can't beat him.           

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By Patrick kocik  I think my dog is the best dog ever         my first reason I think my dog is the best dog ever is because he is crazy fast. For example there is this one smooth hill me and my dad ride awer bike dawn it with my dog on the leash and my dog is almost pooling my dad and we just can't beat him.           

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I used to de the kind of writer that wrote short sentence's and now I wright long sentences

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My second reason is that the food is delicious. If you order a margarita pizza it's gonna be fresh and super delicious. If you order pizza it's gonna be well cooked and they will add an awesome amount of cheese. And the sauce will be fresh and warm and the basil will be crunchy and awesome. Oh and also let's talk about the pasta. The marinara sauce is homemade and fresh from italy. Oh and the pesto. It's so good it's personally my favorite. And the alfredo is made from fresh cheese and it is so melty and good. And after all of that you need DESSERT. So you can have their delicious crepes if you are near paris. And their ice cream and gelato are all homemade. And there ice cream sundaes are so good you can't stop eating them. Oh now you wanna go to Europe.

i used to forget periods and now i dont

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Sometimes a student could wear something inappropriate that is another reason why i think schools should have a dress code! Inappropriate clothes can be disturbing and make someone sad or mad and it could scare someone. It can also be extremely uncomfortable.

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I think All animals should should not be able to harm animals because some are low on population. This means the animals could soon go extinct that means that there would be no more of that animal. Some examples would be The Black-Footed Ferret, Hine's Emerald Dragonfly, Hainan black crested gibbon, Ozark Hellbender, and so many more. For example you were that animal and someone was trying to catch you. Thats not cool :(
I used to be the writer thet would not explain much. Now Im the writer who slows down and explains.

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Do you eat your vegetables.Well be honest, do you?Well i'm going to be honest with you.Sometimes even i don't like eating my vegetables.But i’m going to tell you why you should eat your vegetables.First it wont give you cavities,you will be healthy and you don't have to exercise as much,if you eat healthy you won’t get many health problems,that is why you should eat healthy.   

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Paragraph 5 - Conclusion That is why I don’t think we should wear school uniforms. Because Everyone is wearing the same exact clothes. Second, I think it might be ugly. Third, I think it will be easier for bad kids to get out of class. That is why school uniforms are horrible. I used to be the kind of writer who wouldn't revise well now I revise better

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First, I believe that we don't need to use cursive because we have computers. I think this because we can use over 130,000+ fonts, (probably a bit more) And Cursive is just a font we use to make things look fancy. For example we could use the font ComicSans or Barrio,or the font I have been using this whole time Ariel.and that is one of my reasons why I think cursive should not be taught in school anymore.
I USED TO BE THE KIND OF WRITER WHO JUST RADOMLY THOUGHT OF IDEAS FOR ESSAYS OR ANY OTHER WRITING AND NOW I CAN ACTULLY COME UP WITH ONE

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Second, you can build a strong immune system, which means you can be immune to bacteria that may harm you. I’d really like to eat some healthier foods now. You wouldn’t get hurt by most bacteria which is what I said earlier. It can make your body stay strong so that you can go outside, and do whatever you want without needing to worry about bacteria harming you. And the best part about this, is that you can enjoy your life care-free from bacteria. This is why you should eat healthy foods because you will be immune to some bacteria. (I am not a germaphobe.)

I used to be the kind of writer that would have trouble with coming up with evidence and reasons. But now I'm the kind of writer who can come up with reasons and evidence easier.

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In conclusion, this is why I think Homework is good. I know that some times that sometimes doing homework can be boring but I hope because you read this you think it is at least helpful.

I USED TO BE THE WRITER WHO DID RUN ON SENTENCES AND NOT USE TO MUCH DETAIL. BUT NOW I AM THE WRITER WHO DOSEN'T DO THOSE THINGS.

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Title students should not have dress codes. 

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Title students should not have dress codes. 

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Third, I think students should not have a dress code because they would not be
able to express themselves with their clothes. For example if their favorite color was teal but then their school only gave them a dark blue uniform they would not be happy with the color they gave. Second they should not have a dress code because they can not pick what to wear every morning. They would just have to wear what the school gave. Like if a girl likes shopping at H&M only the school would only give the ones that the school stitched with only the school colors on it. Lastly, I think students should not have a dress code because they might want to show what they like so that people know instead of the school giving something and not wearing what they like. These are all the reasons why I think students should not have a dress code.

I USED TO BE THE WRITER WHO PUT LONG SENTENCES BUT NOW I AM THE WRITER WHO CAN WRITE FULL PARAGRAPHS

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Dolphins should not be kept in captivity!! MOKSH

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Dolphins should not be kept in captivity!! MOKSH

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My final reason to prove that dolphins should not be kept in captivity is that they force Dolphins to do tricks. The main reason people put dolphins in captivity is that they do tricks, but even though Dolphins are social with people they do not like it when they are in captivity. People think that dolphins are always happy because of the smile but that is their face shape. they can not change it. similarly  you can't put your nose above your eye so neither can the dolphins change their face. The only way you can tell a dolphin is sad is if its fin is not straight and it is flopping down. Also only the alpha or the leader of the pod can do tricks so the dolphins that aren't the alpha are forced to do tricks and they won't feed the dolphin until it does a trick. The tricks aren't even used that much by the alpha they are only used to communicate.

I used to be the kind of writer who couldn't think of reasons but now I’m the kind of writer who has the most evidence possible

this is what a dolphin has to do

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Finally, I think it has great decorations for the holidays. For example, when I went to Six Flags for Christmas, there were winter/Christmas decorations everywhere. There’s even a HUUUUUUGEEE Christmas tree! And Santa's Workshop, where you could tell Santa what you wanted for Christmas!

I used to be the kind of writer who did a lot of run ons, but now i'm the kind of writer who has complete sentences.