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You should focus on the dates, details and depth of your case studies so there is a higher quantity of contemporary examples.

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You need to maintain consistency throughout the entire discussion

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You need to maintain consistency throughout the entire discussion

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Emilia

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Use more contemporary examples and use at least 2 regulatory bodies 

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Use more contemporary examples and use at least 2 regulatory bodies 

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Grace

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Enhance argument to make it as strong as possible 

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Enhance argument to make it as strong as possible 

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Rosie

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Grace

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Katherine

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The EAA is limited, and you must keep looking back at the question to make sure that the discussion is relevant and that you are giving lots of great opinion and argument. 

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The EAA is limited, and you must keep looking back at the question to make sure that the discussion is relevant and that you are giving lots of great opinion and argument. 

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Grace

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Look more at the ability to explain and argue. And write more.

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Look more at the ability to explain and argue. And write more.

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Hannah

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Ensure you include some theory I.e. Media effects theory, as you do this your terminology will develop

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Ensure you include some theory I.e. Media effects theory, as you do this your terminology will develop

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Luke

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More Terminology needed, more theories will help develop this

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More Terminology needed, more theories will help develop this

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Hannah

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Emilia

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Luke
You must have more contemporary examples than historical

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Focus more on the question and how the examples can help you answer them

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Focus more on the question and how the examples can help you answer them

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Katherine

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When you have chosen two regulatory bodies. Must overbalance the discussion with contemporary issues (between 2013-2017)

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When you have chosen two regulatory bodies. Must overbalance the discussion with contemporary issues (between 2013-2017)

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Hannah

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More case studies directly linked to regulatory bodies 

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More case studies directly linked to regulatory bodies 

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Rosie

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Simply more terminology needed in main section

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Simply more terminology needed in main section

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David

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Develop the argument with lots of opinion and passion. Keep the actual question at your core and do not be afraid to step towards the rhetorical style of question if you feel the argument could be ended with it. 

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Develop the argument with lots of opinion and passion. Keep the actual question at your core and do not be afraid to step towards the rhetorical style of question if you feel the argument could be ended with it. 

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Katherine

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Too much like a list and needs to be more explicit in referring to examples

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Too much like a list and needs to be more explicit in referring to examples

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David

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Use opinion rather than facts when describing a case study

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Use opinion rather than facts when describing a case study

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David

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Embed discussion about media theories (including media effects) 

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Embed discussion about media theories (including media effects) 

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Rosie

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Pre-transmission (radio and tv) Pre-exhibition (film) Pre-publication (print/press)

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Pre-transmission (radio and tv) Pre-exhibition (film) Pre-publication (print/press)

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Emilia