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Onara

Strengths
- I have been able to demonstrate a piece of fusion music for the modern world. The two genres I chose are classic and EDM which are clearly presented in different sections. The beats are all played on the right timing and I was able to fuse the original song with the modern genres by keeping the melody same, but playing with different instruments and styles.
- The original message or purpose of this song is a court girl expressing her mournful feelings towards the king, but since it can't be used in the same way, instead, my fusion music has included another original purpose which is an amusement in a party or ceremonies.

Improvements
- The part where I included the melody on the EDM background, it sounded like it wasn't quite right because the chords didn't match perfectly. For improvements. I could have worked more on how to match them (by choosing other edm track that could match or changing the chords of the original melody.).

- I could have added another style of beat or track on when there was the part the melody of the song was playing on the EDM sounds for the second time. Because I listened to it too many times, I had difficulties realizing what should be added. While presenting, I realized that it could have been better if there was another transition of the mood within the song.

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Surprise symphony

Strengths
-  She created the introduction in order to help the entire song start naturally. The chords of the blues scale and the violin matched really well, and I could see that she has changed the chords a bit in order to be playing the same chord as the piano.

Improvements
1. She could have changed the melody or the instrument she used since 'surprise symphony' is played in the orchestra. In the orchestra, there are violins and piano involved, so her music piece sounded similar to the original song. As a result of that, I don't think it reached perfectly on the modern context, on the changed world where most of the people prefer fast, and exciting beat with fast tempo.

2. Another one she could have improved on was the technical issue. The piano, and the violin sound had to match together. They seemed to match, but since the sound of the violin was too loud, I couldn't recognize the blues chords she was playing on piano. Also, when she was playing the chords of blues on violin, I couldn't hear the melody of the song; surprise symphony.

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For other's opinion's I got feedback from peers.
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1. The first violin part was good, but the melody in the EDM part cannot be heard clearly
-> As a solution, I increased the dynamics of the EDM melody and decreased the audio track.

2. It doesn't end naturally, but sounds like the entire song just stopped.
-> I decreased the dynamics of the last part of the song and added a zooming track that could help end the song naturally.

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After the pitch increase, usually all of the songs I've listened to had a "Boom" sound and a 2 second silence. Therefore, after the pitch increase, I added a loud booming sound that represents the peak, and the climax of the song.

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After the EDM melody, for the climax of the song, I decided to increase the pitch of a note. I've listened to many EDM songs in order to get the idea of how the climax should be, I chose to increase the pitch to drive everything up.

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I combined two different EDM background sounds. However, in the beginning, the two tracks didn't match together because they were using different chords. Therefore, I increased the level of the first beat 7 times and finally I was able to match it with another one naturally.

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I looked for different sites to look for the elements of EDM. The first thing every site mentioned was to create a basic beat. Therefore, i looked for the appropriate sound (short and deep) and used it as one of my background sounds.

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I was considering of adding the same melody in order to make it ample and sound abundant. Therefore, I tried playing violin in high notes as well as flicking the string. However, when I combined all of them together, they didn't seem to match, and so I decided to only use the one I played as the first one with low note.

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Your process journal was very good. Your were just lacking some more information on the sounds and the rhythms that you were developing. These did not have quite as in depth development analysis as the rest of the piece in the process journal. You used a variety of multimedia to demonstrate the process that you went through. Well done.

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Although the music was sometimes used as the amusement in a party or ceremony, the meaning behind the lyrics include a court lady expressing her mournful feelings towards the king, wanting the king to love her. Finally, I was able to understand what the lyrics meant because it matched with the gloomy mood and melody of the song.

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Bob James and Angels of shanghi jjf 2007 'Onara' (remixed)

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Bob James and Angels of shanghi jjf 2007 'Onara' (remixed)

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https://youtu.be/0Ou6g1TLr28

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Criterion C)

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For the final checking, I went through the entire song and controlled the dynamics that could be improved.

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Since I was all ready for the EDM background sounds as well as the intro (violin + piano), what I needed to work on was putting the Onara melody into the Electronic audio tracks. Rather than keeping the same rhythm as well as the melody, I considered it would be better to change the rhythm a bit. Also, in order to fit in and match with the audio tracks, I chose to use one of the sounds in the Sympathizer section.

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In order to make ‘Onara’ song into EDM, I tried different sounds which were in the Sympathizer section. While trying to play those sounds, I found one sound that could be a turning point where the original song changes suddenly to EDM from classical style.

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Piano accompaniment
(Beginning)

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'Boom' sound

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EDM background

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Onara violin flick

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Onara played with violin (low note)

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Onara played with violin (high note)

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Onara melody with piano
(first part of the song)

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Basic beat

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Electronic Dance music needed a very basic beat that would match with any other sounds i will be adding later. Therefore, I played the beat 4 times using the keyboard and dragged it until i needed it since it was difficult to play on the right beat for a long time.

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I emailed the file I played violin and added it on my project. The sound was clear, but it didn’t match with the melody I’ve recorded already in piano. The file didn’t allow me to edit, so I had to fix my piano melody in order two melodies to be played exactly at the same time. Therefore, I recorded the piano melody again. However, there was another problem here. Because two same melodies with different instruments played at the same time, it sounded a little awkward to listen. What I did was I only recorded in the left hand piano chords, which was much better to hear.

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Since I play violin, I decided to use my instrument. Then, I started practicing. Then, I recorded the sound several times, selected the best one. However, when I first tried playing, it didn’t sound like classic music. Therefore, I searched up for ‘onara’ violin version and listened to it, and I realized the person used vibrato which sounded more like classic. After watching that video, I tried to use vibrato as much as I could so that when it’s recorded, it would clearly heard as classical style. There was no difficulty except for the fact that I needed to get used to the melody and practice more to make it clear.

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In order to continue with remixing, I tried to add music onara  by playing it with piano. It was the most basic step to get to know what notes this song used and how it sounds like when played with piano. Since the two genres I'll be trying to remix with are classical music and rock music, I also tried adding several rock guitar sounds that I heard before in rock music.

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However, it was difficult for the first time to add the right beat in the right place. Therefore, I had to record several times in order to play them on the correct time, which took a while.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zNe2fVqqY8Q

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In the past, the purpose of this song, 'Onara' was for adding to the amusement when there was a party or ceremony. Therefore, its melody is quite repeating as well as the lyrics. I listened to a few different versions of 'onara'' and got the idea of how I should fuse it with modern style of music nowadays.

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Today in class, I chose a song that I will be remixing into modern style.

Country - Korea
Song - Onara
I chose a Korean song which is 'Onara', one of the famous Korean traditional songs. Before choosing the song, I decided to do a Korean song because I thought I would be able to understand the meaning behind the song as well as the structure easily since I've been listening to a lot of them for a long time. Also, since they sound familiar to me, rather than remixing an unfamiliar song, I wanted to remix a song that I know well into an unexpected remixed song that would satisfy the people in this world, in this case my parents and peers. (modern style)

"how the audience has changed and how your music is targeted to this particular audience." - Artistic intention (included in statement of intention)

From many Korean traditional songs, I decided to remix 'Onara'. I was curious about the meaning of the lyrics because the lyrics are phraiseologically or grammatically not correct. Also, I was willing to know the purpose of writing this song. The reason why is because the melody didn't seem sad, but the lyrics were including something depressed and sad.