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This redesign starts with me asking my mom if we can go swim and ends in my family walking down to go to the beach to take family pictures all while including the wind blowing in my face at the start and end. This gives the reader a sense of being stuck right in the middle of of the story while still feeling like it is beginning.

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This redesign shows the full circle of all of the events starting and ending withg the warm tropical air blowin in my face. This gives the reader a sense of closure and that the story is over.

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Rachel Nersesian / Chronological Plotline

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Rachel Nersesian / Chronological Plotline

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This chronological set up of my writing creates a logical flow to the story's design and format and allowes the reader to easily understand what happens next.

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redesign 2:
With this redesign I wanted to accomplish an ending where there is a similar idea in the beginning and end, however the reader can see how the main character’s perspective on this has changed due to her experience. The narrative will capture how she has changed her life since her recovery and how she no longer takes things in her life, including her life, for granted.

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Redesign 1:
The purpose of this redesign is to not only have a more reflective ending but also to give greater insight into the main character’s emotions as she deals with cancer. It’s helps to emphasize the things she may lose if things go poorly, and also goes into more detail about the things she has started to notice in her life that she suddenly has a new found appreciation for.

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Chronological Order:
This is to show exactly what happened in the narrative in the order that it happened. This allows the reader to follow along effortlessly as the events unfold as they happened in real life.

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This version throws you into the middle of the events and then takes a step back. It then goes back to the main narrative and ends fairly quickly after a bit of deliberating from John.

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The point of this regrouping is to start with the build up to the narrative then present the moment that I will be focusing on. It then is redirected to a few cases of Johns morals in action and some anecdote to convey a few messages.

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This simply shows the order that the events in my narrative took place, strictly based on what happened first, what happened after that, and so on.

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redesign 2
Sadder vibe, feels lost and doesn’t know what to do or think. Makes the reader feel more pain.

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redesign 1
Adds more of a brighter outlook with more emotion. Happier vibe

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Redesign 1-
Adds more of a brighter outlook to the story and adds more emotion.

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Chronological Plotline-
Simple flow to make it easy for the reader to understand, very basic.

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these say anonymous but they were by Alivia W

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these say anonymous but they were by Alivia W

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Redesign #2: This one starts off with her commitment and then precedes to go to the two main factors in her decision. Her parents were one of the main factors in her decision and so it tells the lessons she learned from her parents. The second factor which helped her to commit was the fact that she wanted to serve others. This was a skill her parents taught her but it was also something that she had a great passion for.

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Redesign #1: I rearranged the cards to where the beginning was the initial part of her recruiting process and then it flowed back into the beginning of her life. It starts off with the biggest decision of her life and then takes you back and shows you how everything in her life had brought her to this point and the decision that she would have to make.

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Chronological Plot line:
The chronological plot line is beneficial to show how she grew up because that ultimately showed how she made her decision to commit to Navy. It helps to show how the decision wasn’t just made overnight.

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Redesign #2

In this I decided to start with the night everything changed. And then in the moment he thinks about when he was called to ministry at 12. The purpose of this redesign is to have what you would originally think of as the climax be placed at the beginning so you are jumping right in. Then when looking back it flows with the rest because the reader can think why didn’t he make that choice originally. Therefore in the end you can see how things work out. And the point.

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Redesign #1

The purpose of this change in plot is to really capture a cool way to see narratives. Here I have started with Tyler and Sam having Ryker and then he has a flashback all the way to twelve when this journey started. I used a flashback to really capture a new way to look at a narrative.  This also shows the emotion in that moment holding the baby.  Realizing how amazing God works and what would have happened otherwise.

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Chronological Plotline-

The Purpose of this is to show how Tyler’s life starting at twelve, progressed and then what happened between 12-32.  Having the plot in chronological order allows you to see how his life progressed and then what happened.

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Redesign #2- I added in more details about wind after the doctor told him that he was essentially going to be ok. Wind can be used in this story as a symbol seen in important parts of his journey.

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Redesign #1- I added when he opened the windows in his apartment after he came back from the hospital. It’s a circular ending in how it’s ending like it began, nothing in his apartment has changed, but he has.

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Chronological- The purpose of the details being arranged in chronological order is to show the facts and emotions of the story in an easy and understandable way.

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Reverse-Flow Flashback
Basically forward-flow flashback in structure, but at the climax, instead of jumping back and working forward, it works backwards then jumps to the present (for the story) again. Again, it is more dramatic and the return to the climax could be more meaningful and hard-hitting.

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Forward-Flow Flashback
Starts right just before the action, which may or may not be an effective hook, but the lack of context may be jarring. At the climax, the story jumps back to as far back as my mother can remember and basically goes on chronological from there on. It might be a little confusing but it is more dramatic.

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Chronological Timeline
(btw, all timelines work down-right)
Continuous and differentiable curve, has the familiar buildup structure. When it reaches the climax (thoughts during freeze-up), all the background information will already be in place. This makes the climax more impactful and flow better since there are no cuts.

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redesign #2 -
This story line has the teammates sharing their part of the story at different times to give it more of an effect. I was thinking that if I put them in this order than the readers would stay engaged and wouldn't get bored of what they were reading.

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redesign #1 -
This story lines shows more the emotions that they were going through because it was one specific day. Which will end up giving more emotions than it would have if I did the story line over a few days. For example like more of the school emotions and family stress and support that they had to handle.

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Chronological plot line -
This story is organized to show the normal lives of a sports athlete like my dad in high school. It also shares the way his teammates felt during is time too and they are put in this order to keep the readers engaged to what they are reading. In this order it also shows their emotions that they were going through at the time.

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redesign 2
this one gives more of a backstory before getting into the exact moment. I think the details of previous information adds to the effect of the climax. I think this one really benefits my idea of mothers intuition and focusing on how that could have effected the outcome.

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redesign 1
This one puts the ideas in a different order and adds the fact that she was working four jobs. the effect of this is showing significance of her being a single mother and all of the work that came with it.

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chronological plotline -
the purpose of this design is to give the events in the order they occurred with the emotions that came along with those events.

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Redesign 2 - The purpose of this is to reach deeper into how the characters feel. It will show more depth of the events and actions that occurred. There are lessons that will educate the reader which will allow them to understand how to deal with grief.

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Redesign 1 - The purpose of this is to slowly capture the reader. It will allow reader to understand and feel the characters emotions, thought, and feelings, eventually.

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The Chronological Plot Line allows the story to flow well. It helps the reader focus on the main events but in an easy way. The characters, events, etc. changes throughout the story, which creates emotions and feelings.

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Hope at risk:
The purpose of this is to show the true desire of hope can out due any problem. At the beginning everybody was scare of the corona virus and didn't know what to expect but the more doctors understood and researched the more safe and knowing we would be. The determination to help others is what got her up in the morning to be at risk of the life threatening virus.

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The Pandemic Outbreak:
The purpose of this is to resemble how doctors are feeling bout going to work knowing that them and their family are at risk of a life threatening virus. Everyday she wakes up hoping that the virus will not attache itself to her and eventually spread throughout the family. Through the story it gives an emotional and stressful theme as she meets all these different people that may or may not have the virus.

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Chronological Plot Line:
The effect is to show what the situation my mom was in during that time and now. The struggle and thoughts that were going through her mind at the time and the risk of getting the corona virus. As the days go by the more experienced she gets and tends to not worry as much as she did before.

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Redesign #2-
As with the other idea the story and events are the same, but the bonfire becomes a symbol of hope and light for the future. However as the story ends and as my mom´s emotions change, we see the happiness in my mom´s childhood become nothing but a memory which makes this type of ending more emotional than the first option.

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Redesign #1-
The story and the events that take place will be the same, however with this ending you see how the events that took place in the beginning connect to my mom´s attitude towards the end. This connection is shown through the symbolism of the woods.

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Chronological Plot Line-
The story is organized this way to show the different experiences that my mom had on the same holiday but at very different times in her life, and how those differences effected her emotions and outlook on life. Throughout this outline I used a lot of symbolism in order to capture those changes.

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This redesign highlights the main plot point instead of the background knowledge. I spread out the biggest moment so the reader can feel like they were actually there in the story. I also wanted to make sure at the end, there is a warm fuzzy moment that wraps up the whole story.

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I chose to move around some sticky notes in the middle where my main plot point is.  The benefit of making the plot point bigger is that it explodes the moment, or the reader can completely visual the story.

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Chronological order helps the reader visual the plot as it would have actually happened. It also makes reading the story easier and more comprehensible.

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This redesign draws out the climax to give a better explaination of it. It might be a little long, but it will make more sence.

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This is a slight shorter version that gets to the climax quicker it skipps the "boring" parts to get on with the story and to make it more engaging.

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Having a good chronological order in a story is important. It alows the story to make more sence and be more relateable.

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this redesign shows my dad turning to God first when the stress of the decision hits and shows that when this happens the decision is easier to make for him because he went to someone who he knows would give him the right answer. my dads emotions would come out more when hes peaking to God instead of his parents or my mom, this only benefited him in the end.

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the redesign shows that in the different order of the events that happened could have resulted in a different outcome or different way of the story. it shows a different view of how things played out, my dad turns to something different first when the stress of the decision hits and the advice he receives only stresses him our more.

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the chronological order helps us understand the original sequence or events of the interview and see what the original order of each main and key idea we have in the entire story.

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The main theme of the story is self reflection and knowing oneself better. It's like glancing in a calm lake and seeing yourself reflected there; a mirror image, slightly different, but nevertheless the same person. People learn more from failing and reflecting on it than from successes.

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A circle signifies the completion of a journey which has a lot of significance in this narrative. This also shows the changes that the main character has come through, struggles, and the resulting peace of mind. The symbolism of a mountain and the buzzing of doubts is carried through the story, each changing in meaning as the character grows.

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The chronological set up of this gives the story an inherent flow and makes it easier for the reader to understand what is happening and helping them comprehend the sequence of events.

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Redesign #2 -- Tormenting Turbulence
The purpose of this plot design is to allow the reader to really understand and recognize how the little things can lead to contemplation on deeper thoughts/emotions. Through this organization the reader is taken right into the conflicting regret the character has to endeavor through their move. But in the end a small vision (of looking out the window) brings contrasting hope that overrides much of the stress the travel has caused

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Redesign #1 -- A Race to Relief

The purpose of this organization is to engage the reader from the very beginning. By starting the plot off by depicting with much action and a fast paced environment will likely make the narrative more interesting to read. Additionally, by incorporating a sort of flash back element, the reader will be able to further understand the context of the present situation.

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The purpose of this is to now help you understand the character's emotions. In this story she felt strongly her whole life that she needed to be a mother. Though many told her what she should do with her life, she continued with what she wanted.

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Chronological Plotline --
The benefit of this type of plot line is that it will flow very well and make it easier for the reader to understand the details and their connections to the over plot/narrative. In addition, this order allows the reader to understand how the emotions and feelings of the character fluctuates over time.

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The purpose of this is to show a reflection on the outcome of the story. This helps us to understand exactly what the person had to go through to get to the point that they are at. In this story she was able to listen to her heart to know what she truly wanted in life instead of what others wanted for her.

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The purpose of this is to show how the emotions of the people in the story changed throughout time. It also helps us to understand why they did things in a specific order when you can see it all spread out.

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redesign 2- the effect of this is to show the emotion and have the reader understand that the potion you played in the story determined how you felt. Everyone started out worried and nervous because of the uncertainty, but once the topic was brought up emotions changed and relaxed for some, while other still stayed tense. Bringing emotion into the ending helps to tie the whole story together and show that this will be ok, change is hard but it can still be good.

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redesign 1- the purpose of this is to show a reflection on what has happened and how things ended up turning out. She listened to what God had to say and that was the key to making that difficult decision. The effect this has is that it shows how different people in the situation had different emotions, some were excited, some
nervous, some stressed and worried.

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Chronological Plot line- The effect of this is to show how the emotions and thoughts of the people in the situation changed throughout the occurrence of events. The purpose of this is to show that although it was stressful and scary at times, as a family, they were able to get through it together.

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Also, please make sure you plotline pictures are clear, and we can read your handwriting. :-)

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redesign #2 - give it a title

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Redesign #1 - give it a title.

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