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peer assessed by hamadan    WWW: nice handwriting                 EBI: you can make it more clear for us to see

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Peer assessed by aya
Www:Nice handwriting and showing
EBI:You use higher vocabulary.

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WWW:nice adjectives and adverbs
EBI:maybe try using more figurative language and make a little more clear.

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Peer assessed by Lili
WWW: You have used amazing synonyms
EBI: If you could use subordinate clause

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Peer assessed by Dhrivika
WWW : Your drawings are clear
EBI : You could have described what is happening even further .

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Peer assessed by Dhrivika
WWW : You have used high level vocabulary to describe the setting .
EBI : You could have made your work neat .

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www: she wrote a nice comic
EBI: she did it neat

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WWW:she made a very good effort of trying to make it like a comic and looks like she actually did it

EBI:if that she would write neatly and she could write more

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WWW:You included neat handwriting and used some high level vocabulary
EBI: You could have added some pictures or drawings.
Peer Assessed by Ankrithi

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WWW: Your diagrams are clear
EBI:Try to make your sentences a little longer.

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Peer assessed Tara
www:You have included good structure
Eib:You should include writing tools or figurative language

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Www: it’s very neat and everything it’s very interesting.
EBI: it would be better if u drawer pictures in each one of the boxes. Peer assessed by yousef

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WWW:he wrote enough and to look like a comic and it is very interesting.
EBI:To make it more neat.
Peer assessed by Farida.

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WWW: she used emotive words
EBI: make the comic more suspenseful

Peer assessed by naya

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You have very good drawings and you have used the writing tools well

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PA by Michelle
WWW: Nice try there to attempt metaphors and similes.
EBI: Your hand writing was more clear and if you made your work, year 6 level it would be much better.

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Per assessed by marten

Www:wrote a good sentence

Ebi:you continue the whole comic strip

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www: you added high level adjectives and vocabulary.
EBI: if you included diagrams describing what your saying.