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David

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organization
It helps
Sean ramirez

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What I need to improve on is Word choice because my vocabulary is bad and the 6+1 writing traits help me become a better writer because it increases my skills in writing

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What I need to improve on is Word choice because my vocabulary is bad and the 6+1 writing traits help me become a better writer because it increases my skills in writing

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Juaqui

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I really need to improve on organization because I can't organize my words properly.It can help me understand what it means

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ORGANIZATION

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the trait I need to improve on is my word choice because I mostly use tired words it can help me become a better writer because it can help me make a better sentence

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The 6+1 writing traits can help me in writing because it's like a guide

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A. The trait that I need to improve on is organization.           B. The 6+1 writing traits are important because we need it to organize and complete our PNE.

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I really need to improve on organization because I can't organize

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Organization because my work is always messy &sometimes  my handwriting in script is bad

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I can improve on word choice because in my sentences I usually use tired words
The6+1 writing traits can help me become a better writer by word ch

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Ideas because I can never get my ideas straight.It can help me by making a more interesting sentence

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I can improve on ideas

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The trait that I need to improve on is

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I need to improve on word choice because my sentences are not that interesting.6+1 Writing Traits can help me become a better writer because it makes your story so interesting that it will pull and interest people to read your story

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What I need to improve on is Organization  

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What I need to improve on is Organization  

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I really need to improve on org

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I need to improve on word choice because I always think of tired words. The 6+1 writing traits can help me by always reviewing them and practicing them.

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I can improve on word choice because in my paragraphs or sentences I usuall

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A)I need to improve on word choice.
B)The 6+1 writing traits help me become a better writer by telling me to make my ideas clearer,to avoid tired words and to put sentences in order.
-Gyan

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I need to improve on my ideas , 6+1 Writing Traits
can he help me become
a better writer when I keep
brainstorming.

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I need to improve on ideas because it is the main thing without ideas it will make no sense.
2.it could help you become a better writer because ifyou use it properly it would have an effect to the story you are trying to say.

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A)Organization
B)It can make my writing better by helping me organize well and always keep my essay well and neat to the eye also by keeping my words not tired words

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Because i always answer with tired words.

6+1 traits in writing can help me become a better writer because it can help me organize,help me to stop putting tired words and ideas

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The trait

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Ideas because most of the time when I write essays I lack ideas to make my essay better.      B It can help me because when I grow up my job will sometimes might have essay so I can write the essay properly.

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I need to improve on ideas because some of my ideas are not that interesting and organization when I write my essay

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The trait you need to improveon is ideas so you can be a good writer if you have a lot of ideas for your poem

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(A)word choice because I always use tired words
(B)They help because I remember them and do every trait

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(A)The writing trait I need to improve on is organization.
(B)The 6+1 writing traits can make me a better writer by helping me to use words that are not tired
-Joaquin Anton

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A.I need to improve on my word choice because sometimes I use tired wordsB.It can help me bynot  using tired w

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Among the 3 traits I think I need to improve on word choice.The 6+1 writing traits can help me become a better writer by guiding me to write good stories -Nicholas

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Among the 3 traits I think I need to improve on word choice.The 6+1 writing traits can help me become a better writer by guiding me to write good stories -Nicholas

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I need to improve on my ideas.6+1writting traits helps me by not using the same words over and over again.

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A) Among the 3 writing
traits I need to improve on ideas because for me I think slow or I can't think of anything so I think I need to Improve on it.

B) The 6+1 writing traits can help me becoming a better writer by teaching me the base of it and how to make it interesting.

-Ethan Chiang 5H

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Sean.s I need to improve on organization.

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Sean.s I need to improve on organization.

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The 6+1 writing traits can help me become a better writer by mastering it to make a better and more organized sentences.

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I think I should improve on word choice. It can help me when I'm writing a paragraph.

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I think I should improve on word choice. It can help me when I'm writing a paragraph.

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Ryul

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I need to improve on ideas because,all of my ideas are not interesting and in my ideas,when ever I convert it into a story there are tired words. By showing me how to make better stories and phrases and to become a writer one day and to help me in my tests.

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I need to improve on my "organization" because in the activity a scrambled up some sentences

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Ideas because I have a difficult time brainstorming for ideas. The 6 plus 1 traits of writing can help me by writing with more feeli

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Among the three traits (ideas,organization and word choice,the trait I need to improve on is voice because sometimes I forget how to express my feelings in the text I am reading.The 6+1 traits can help me become a better writer by helping me to express my feelings in the text I am reading.

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A: Among the 3 traits I need to improve on word choice because most readers like enthusiasms in what they read in a certain text instead of reading the same word like for example reading the word big over and over again in a text instead of reading the word huge.
B: the 6+1 writing traits can help me to be a better writer by being organized in what I write  so that the readers will not be confused in what I'm writing about and know exactly what I'm writing

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Word Choice is the trait I need to improve on because I always use Tired words and even sometimes I don't even like my paragraph because I use too much tired words and it looks like a grade 2 boys work.b) 6+1 writing traits can help me become a better writer because 6+1 writing traits teach you how to improve your work like word choice it helps you improve your words instead of you always using tired words.

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Organization because I do not organize well on my ideas.It gives me ideas on how I improve on writing and helps me understand the tired word

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a. I need to work on my word choice because I need to properly know the meaning of the word

b. The 6+1 Traits can help me in being a better writer by making my words more meaningful and more stories that have sense in it.