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a)      The numbers create a less academic and more casual style.  However, the details were well explained.  An introductory sentence could improve this significantly.  There was an excellent summary of the main ideas.

b)      There is no information about time until the fourth paragraph, which is unusual.  This should be in the first paragraph.  The grammatical accuracy is good for this piece of writing.  There was no sentence giving the general trend of younger people using the internet more frequently. v

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This is a graph of the percentage of different age groups that use the internet for the past eight years from 2005 to 2013. The highest percentage belongs to the youngest group; group 18-29, of 90% whereas the lowest percentage belongs to the oldest group; group 65+, which is a percentage of 46%.

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When internet users who use networking sites are divided into groups based on their age, we would be able to distinguish some features.

It is clear that the age group from 18 to 29 have the highest increase in general. In addition, it is the biggest group who uses networking sites at the time.

On the other hand, age groups who are 65 years or more are the least people who use networking sites. Also, their increase is kind of slow and steady.

In December 2012, all groups have faced some kind of a downfall that they recovered from, except age group from 30 to 49 years who was not affected by it.

Abdulla k Ali

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1-  The use of social networking sites among young adult internet users ages 18-29 jumped from 9% to 90% over the years. This group age scored the most significant change.

2-     The use of social networking sites among old internet users ages +65 jumped from 1% to 46% from 2005 to 2013. This is the least significant change among the age groups

3-    “All internet users” age group shows the average change over the years.

4-    Last but not least. There is a significant decrease in most age groups around December 2012

5-   In conclusion, the older users get, the less they use internet.

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This chart is based on a survey done by pew research center, This chart shows the percentage of all social network sites users by age. the highest group is the one with the ages 18-29 and the lowest group is the age 65+. Over the years  the number of users increased and the group with the most significant increase is the 18-29 group, this shows that the younger internet users use the social networking sites more than the older users.

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Please check for run-ons.  I can see two.

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The number of people using social networking sites

growed by the years. According to a survey conducted between 2005

and 2013 by Pew Research Center's Internet Project Library, the amount

internet users using Social networking sites increased from

8% to 73%.

Accoding to the survey, internet users aging 18 to 29 years old

using Social networking increased significantly, from 9% to

90% over the past 8 years. The older group of aging from 30 to 49 years old

are second to the first group, climbing the charts from 7% to

78%.

Suprisingly , older adults age range from 50 to 64 are adapting with

the increase of 59%, initialy 6%. However, the last group which represents the elderly

with age of 65 and above, increased from 1% to 46%.

TEACHER COMMENTS:
Please check for run-ons.  I can see one.

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Latest data from Pew Research Center shows that the internet usage has significantly increased by all age groups from ages of 18 and above, and it was based on interviews conducted in English and Spanish and on landlines and cellphones. It also shows that there was an increase specifically in the age group of 18 – 29; as it increased from 9% to 90% during the time from 2005-2013, which is almost the entire age group. Although there was a bit of a decrease between August and December in 2012, it quickly went rising again in 2013 may.

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Social networking over time, Usage increased significantly over eight years since 2005 to 2013, networking gained popularity and gained users. While having a greater effect on the youngest users with an increase from 9% to 90% over eight years of time with elderly people, From 30 years of age and rising the usage of networking falls almost to 46% of average users. The most significant rise of usage is between the ages of 18 until 29 years old.

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This line chart represents the users of social network by age from 2005 to 2013. From February 2005 to September 2013, all internet users significantly increased to 73 percent. Between February 2005 and September 2013, the use of social network highly increased among the young users ages 18-29 from 9% to 90%.  Between February 2005 and August 2006, the use of social network slowly increased for people who ages 30-49 from 7% to 8%.

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As the chart shows that from 2005 to 2013 the use of internet social networking sites increase between significant ages. Users between 18 – 29 and 30 – 49 shows a sharp increase in the first five years more than others users. After the first five years, the chart shows that all users got a light drop and after it they all set stable.

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The Pew Research Centers Internet Project Library Survey has a research about using the social networking by ages. Firstly, it shows that the 18-29 age groups that it has the most rise in significant it’s 90%. Secondly, all the other lines shows different ages, And the lower group is the 65 and above. Thirdly, there is a line that shows all internet users it’s jumped from 8% to from 73% and it’s the average for all the charts.

Eman J.Al

TEACHER COMMENTS:
Please check for run-ons.  I can see one in your last sentence.  You need a comma here.

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The latest data from pew research center in 2005-2013 shows that 73% the internet users uses social networking sites.

The highest group is the 19-28 age groups which are 90%; it means that the younger people tend to use social networking sites more.

While the lowest groups are the groups from 30 and above, this means that older people do not use social networking as much as the younger groups.

TEACHER COMMENTS:
Please check for commas.  I can see an extra two that are not necessary in paragraph one.