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I will improve my essay by making it better and i will ask for help and more questions.

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I will improve my essay by making sure that all my spelling is correct and use proper grammar in every sentence and every paragraph.

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I will improve the essay by making more hooks to grab people's attention and they will be interested

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i will improve it by using strong words and double check that i have every thing i need.

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I will improve my essay draft by checking my grammar and spelling so that the readers will understand it.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by making sure the writing makes sense and make sure i spell correctly.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by making sure i answered everything and making sure it makes sense.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by reading it over, making sure it's in complete sentences that is understandable and clear with good transitions. I will make sure it has met the requirements. And answer all the questions correctly, having all the fonts, size, and line spacing.

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I will improve my essay draft by fixing my grammar and double checking to make sure everything is alright.

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I will improve my essay draft by checking if it makes sense and all of my sightings meet the requirements.

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How i will improve my essay i will go over it again and proof read the spelling, font, size of text, and line spacing.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by looking over it to make sure that it meets the requirements.

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I will improve my essay draft by checking my grammer and spelling.

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I will improve my essay by seeing if I spelt something wrong and to see if I have evidence that supports my cause in my thesis statement.

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I will improve my essay draft by making sure it makes sense, and look over it before I turn it in.

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i will improve my essay by check my spelling, grammar, and make sure it makes sense. I will do this by reading my essay a few times word by word to see if its good.

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I will improve my essay draft by rechecking my grammar before final submissions so it can make sense and clear to read.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by checking if it makes sense and read all my G and E, call to action.

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How I will improve my essay draft is I will check if i have all the Gs and Es and I will check if i have grammer and punctuations. And i will also ask my teacher if its good before i turn it in.

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I will improve my essay draft by checking to see any grammatical mistakes and making sure that it is clear and understandable to read. I can re-read by G and E's to see if I followed the format and If I missed any punctuation marks or misspelled any words.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submissions by checking my grammar and making sure it make sense so it doesn't confuse the reader.

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I will improve my essay by checking that I have all the sections of the graphic organizer completed and I will also check my spelling and grammar before I submit my final.

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I will improve my essay double checking and making sure it makes sense also making sure it is complete.

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How I will improve my essay draft is I will check  if i have all three Gs and Es and I will check if i have good spellings and always put period at the end and always have punctuation at the beginning.

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I will improve my essay draft by making sure it looks good it makes sense.I will also improve my transitions.Also I'm gonna check my grammar mistakes.