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Wildlife

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Plantlife

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storage in backpack (to record earth quakes, measure ground deformations, volcanic gases, cameras ect )

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Anders mark. "Backpack basics"  BOYS LIFE
Mark Anders explains parts of a backpack and what to look for in a backpack.

It says how you need a backpack to fit you prefectly or you could get hurt. And it says how to find a good backpack.

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Volcanologist
Saying what Volcanologistc do
Saying that volcanologists look at volcanos and there activity look for ways so that we can predict when volcanos will go off.
Goes into detail about what they do so I can understand it better.

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Primal survivor
Helps you know what every backpack needs
Says backpacks need knife fire starter, first aid space for food , space for sleeping bag.
Helps you know what you need when you camping

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The dangers of being a volcanologist is you could be caught it a euruption of a volcano you could burn yourself helicopter crash

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The volcano was designed so that you can have enough storage.

The volcano is a back pack specifically made for volcanologist (people who go out and explore volcanos) we have made it so that you can have more space to put your camera equipment and to hold your equipment to record earthquakes and ect.. We have made it so that you don't need to cram everything in super tight. It will have little compartments that are separated so you can be organized and get your equipment out fast.

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Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab--not so repetative)

Clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem.

More transitions, overall flow, and clarity