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Design a versatile backpack  for a variety of scientific equipment

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Design a versatile backpack  for a variety of scientific equipment

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The back pack should be waterproof

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Important User Information: Remote access to EBSCO's databases is permitted to patrons of subscribing institutions accessing from remote locations for personal, non-commercial use. However, remote access to EBSCO's databases from non-subscribing institutions is not allowed if the purpose of the use is for commercial gain through cost reduction or avoidance for a non-subscribing institution.

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Stuff Scientists need for Antartica

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We celebrate the development of the Arctic Explorer which directly resolves the issue of holding scientific equipment

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We celebrate the development of the Arctic Explorer which directly resolves the issue of holding scientific equipment

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This back pack will be able to hold a lot of scientific equipment. This back pack will have many pouches specific designed to hold certain equipment. For instance there will be a pocket for your camera on the backpack strap. Or there will be a secured place for where you put all your samples. This backpack is superior in many ways this is just one of them.

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Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab--not so repetative)

Clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem.

More transitions, overall flow, and clarity