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tobias- it was good but write about something you can actually relate to.
lyons- okay i like the word play
amari- very nice

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Tobias - shows a lot of feeling
Isaiah - very good

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tobias-lots of anger
lyons- very relatable
amari- very n

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Tobias- was very descriptive, too violent though
Me- Good! Deserves 100

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tobias-
it was a good way to describe you enviroment

isaiah-
your stanza was relateable but a  little too personal

amari-
you did a good job of evaluting you life situation

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tobias- showed great conviction

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tobias- strong but alot of repetition

tobias- strong but alot of repetition
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Taboias: It's deep but you repeat gangbang.
Lyons: Strong and relatable to some others, appeal to pathos a lot but a little to deep
Jenkins: Very emotional and dark, can encorage others to think and do the same

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Tobias- I can agree with what he stated and it was very deep, but you could of used more descriptive words.

Isaiah- that was deep

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Tobias-
Compliment: Everything ties together.
Crtic: Not very understanding maybe you should reword it.

Isaiah-
Compliment: Very good, explanation very straight to the point

Amari-
Compliment: Strong foundation

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Tobias- Good Job. i'd suggest more detail.
Isiah-  Really good stanza can't fully relate thats what makes it unique i guess really powerful.
Amari - Your writings witty i would revise the beginning because it starts off a little shaky.

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@tobis the poem was very blunt
BUT it was  little negative
@isisah very deep BUT you could have better represented the second stanza (highly dissapointed )