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I noticed every time its making it more personal

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In the first one it was very repetitive and boring. In the second one she used better vocabulary. In the third one she kept the same idea but explained it and rapped up the essay better.

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The author wrote the conclusion with detail and specification. They also used higher level vocabulary.

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I once watched a movie when I was little on the TV that I forgot the name of, I expected some dramatic ending but the only thing that happened was some side character getting the flu and recovering. It was very disappointing because I was so prepared for some plot twist and I get a person getting sick for 2 days.

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I was watching Persona 5 the animation, at the end "Joker" one of the protagonist dies, after that the group disperses

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It has happened to me when reading a book

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I have, but it was a video game, that was Max Payne 3, it was dissaptioning because all progress was lost at the end.

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I don't think I have watched a movie or TV show that disappointed me at the end . I think so far the movies or series I watched always surprised me at the end . Or it just that maybe one movie or tv show did disappoint me but I just can't remember .

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One time I was watching a movie called fast and furious and I knew it was going to end in a race. I wasn't surprised at all.

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Joseph Lee
Joseph Lee
In the first one it was very repetitive and boring. In the second one she used better vocabulary. In the third one she kept the same idea but explained it and rapped up the essay better.
Tristan Le
Tristan Le
The author wrote the conclusion with detail and specification.  They also used higher level vocabulary.
Brianna Gantier
Brianna Gantier
I once watched a movie when I was little on the TV that I forgot the name of, I expected some dramatic ending but the only thing that happened was some side character getting the flu and recovering. It was very disappointing because I was so prepared for some plot twist and I get a person getting sick for 2 days.
I was watching Perso
I was watching Persona 5 the animation, at the end "Joker" one of the protagonist dies, after that the group disperses
Tristan Le
Tristan Le
It has happened to me when reading a book
Igli Kaci
I have, but it was a video game, that was Max Payne 3, it was dissaptioning because all progress was lost at the end.

Mona Tasnim
Mona Tasnim
I don't think I have watched a movie or TV show that disappointed me at the end . I think so far the movies or series I watched always surprised me at the end . Or it just that maybe one movie or tv show did disappoint me but I just can't remember .
Joseph Lee
Joseph Lee
One time I was watching a movie called fast and furious and I knew it was going to end in a race. I wasn't surprised at all.
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Do Now: Have you ever watched a movie or TV show season/series finale that left you disappointed at the end? What was that like? What about it was disappointing? 

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How has each version of the conclusion changed? What makes each version better? What strategies does the author use for a strong conclusion? 

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How has each version of the conclusion changed? What makes each version better? What strategies does the author use for a strong conclusion? 

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Did your partner's feedback help? Which conclusion did your partner like better? Do you agree with him/her?